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Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/11 12:05 am Title: Chapter 1

I think you're seriously twisted...and I love it XD XD

Author's Response: I think that's the best compliment that anyone has ever paid me... *bows* thank you :)

Reviewer: hunnybunny Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/11 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

I would love to read more! Great job so far.

Reviewer: liveeverysecond Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/11 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

What a great story. So much detail and I loved the butterfly analogy. Would love another chapter! :)

Reviewer: rynn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/11 08:51 am Title: Chapter 1

YES! This is so good. :)

Reviewer: Ninel Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/11 07:51 am Title: Chapter 1

si quiero leer mąs!!

Author's Response: ”Vale vale! xD

Reviewer: slicedtopieces Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/11 03:57 am Title: Chapter 1

like!!! I've got a soft spot for non-con stories and bill in a miniskirt is just a bonus!!

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/11 12:20 am Title: Chapter 1

Why yes, I do think I would like some more. This wass pretty heart wrenching, and sexy...god I feel so bad finding this story line sexy....am I ill? Oh wait, lok who I'm asking...Anyway. This was really great...but I'm confused...Bill said that his ass was already hurting from the six other customers he had before this last one, but Tom asked him about breaking 'thier rule' while his hand was on Bill's ass, and Bill said he didn't. Not Ever....So was Tom wanting Bill to lie to him or something? Or was 'their rule' something different? I hoe if you continue this you will clear that up in the next chapter. Keep up the fantasmic work!

Reviewer: LoVeWrItInG Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/11 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Please!

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/11 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was good...I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/11 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yes, i want more.:):)

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/11 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Lol, it's probably because you haven't written rape in a long while...

Reviewer: omgthatshot05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/11 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Love
It

Reviewer: Zora Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/11 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

TBC? yes!!

Reviewer: Aristotelis Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/11 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great story. I like the ending with the butterfly/spider a lot!!

Reviewer: Miriamel Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/11 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

oooh, a fic about prostitution that seems half way realistic? Count me in.

Reviewer: bmccray Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/11 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

I WANT MORE! I love this! So the rule is that no one and fuck Bill without a condom because he's Toms? Thats the rule he was talking about? Update soon please!!!!!

Reviewer: prozac Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/11 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

The pathetic fat little thing that comes out does not even deserve in the descriptive word of ‘cock’.

hahahahaha so funny

Reviewer: prozac Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/11 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

i really wanted to read some rape xDDD hahahaha

i want more :D

Reviewer: Nonconman Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/11 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love it when Tom was a big cruel guy while bill was a helpless lil thing. This story got the same taste with just another ... . Well! My typical fave story!

Reviewer: Nonconman Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/11 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love it when Tom was a big cruel guy while bill was a helpless lil thing. This story got the same taste with just another ... . Well! My typical fave story!

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