Date: 06/09/14 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I tried reading your fic, and although I really like the setup of it not to mention I love and adore the pairing. I must say I couldn't continue. It was the constant 'she laughed' in the first chapter. Really need to look that over. No need to have that after every single time Fran says something. Same thing with Georg. Which is to bad, because I did enjoy the conversation. So yeah.. I hope you'll clean it up a bit, and I'd be happy to read it and pimp it out to my friends!
:-) No hard feelings, just some constructive criticism is all.
Author's Response: Oh wow, it's been so long since we wrote on this story! Thank you for your constructive criticism, it's greatly appreciated :) If we decide to continue this at some point, we will definitely look into that, so thank you :)
Date: 09/11/11 11:38 am Title: Chapter 5
Poor Gustav! I hope Georg treats him better in the future.
Author's Response: Yes indeed :)
Date: 09/08/11 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oooooooo MORE MORE!!!
Author's Response: I doubt there will be much more in the future, sorry :/
Date: 07/29/11 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 3
Aw that's cute! :D
Author's Response: Aw thank you! :D Rach loves your work! :D
Date: 07/22/11 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
eee!!!
I looove this!!
I can't wait for more
Author's Response: Aww! We're so happy! More on next Friday! :D
Date: 07/22/11 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
hmm.idk yet. i think i need to read more before i decide if i like it
Author's Response: That's alright, we're just getting started! So much more to come :D
Date: 07/22/11 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like this story! Georg and Gustav are so sweet together.
Author's Response: Aww we're glad to hear that :D Totally cute! Thank you for your review!
Date: 07/15/11 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow, i am really liking the story so far. i'm looking forward to Georg meeting Gustav :3
Author's Response: Aw we're happy you do! :D Ooh, we can't wait either :P
Date: 07/15/11 09:35 am Title: Chapter 1
AHHH YAAAY!
About time another GG fic came up on here!
I can't wait for their interaction!
Author's Response: We totally agree on that! Ooh, hot interaction! :D Rach's new story will be up soon, look out for it, cause it's some hot Geo/Gus stuff!