Date: 01/07/20 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was a really good story!
you should do a sequel to this!
Date: 11/18/11 02:17 am Title: Chapter 1
This time was much better. I like it :-)
Author's Response: Thanks, though it still sucked. I wrote it when i was younger. :/
Date: 07/15/11 09:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh that we could all experience a massage like that one. :) Good for Bill! :)
Author's Response: Haha, yes very good indeed. Thank you for your review!
Date: 07/15/11 06:48 am Title: Chapter 1
This was extremely good :3
Hot ^-^ haha i loved the end line "he'll have to get laid more often..." hehe
Author's Response: Haha Thank you!
Date: 07/14/11 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
i wonder who's been watching Bait Bus. lol. ok, not too bad for a one shot. Caught me by surprise. Pleasant surprise
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. ^.^
Date: 07/14/11 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
nice but too short.
Bill and Tom are not related here but have same surnames?
Author's Response: I know its short, i wrote it at 5 in the morning. And no they dont, it was a typo i only just now realized. thank you for that. :)
Date: 07/14/11 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well, that was a wonderful little PWP, but I do feel like the story had nothing to do with the summary...you might consider adding a little of the back story of how we got where we are in the actual fic itself, if you are going to mention it in the summary. You know what I mean?...I was a very great stroy though. I really loved it. Keep up the wonderful work!
Author's Response: Haha i know, thank you. It was really early in the morning and didnt really see what i put down. ^.^'' Sorry for my many mistakes and thank you for your review. :)
Date: 07/14/11 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG LMAO that was like his lucky day XD Even though it was a bit slutty of him to accept lol
Author's Response: Haha Yeah, And i like a slutty Bill every now and then ;) Thank you for your review!
Date: 07/14/11 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
thats something different wished there were things like that were I can actually get paid for that ;) greatjob by the way. :D
Author's Response: Haha thank you for your review.
Date: 07/14/11 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
If this were more detailed and longer, this would be a very good smut :-)
Author's Response: I know, im sorry.