WOW. This is awesome! The way you right is too cool! I try to write like that too, but you blow me out of the water! Its very... real and blunt... if you know what i mean. This is so good i dont even care that its short! lol. I can not wait for the next chapter! And i have no clue whats gonna happen, and i usally do so thats a compliment. :) Lol. Oh, if i havent reviewed for you before, Imma rambler... Sorry. haha. Feel free to tell me to shut it XD

I like it. :) hope u write more.