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Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/14 03:08 pm Title: "I get so weak in the knees I can hardly speak. I lose all control and something takes over me."

I hope there will be more in this story sometime soon :)

Reviewer: bettametta Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/23/14 09:58 am Title: "I get so weak in the knees I can hardly speak. I lose all control and something takes over me."

My god. This story is great. I hope one day you'll continue because I'm really curious about their future. :)

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/13 01:59 am Title: I need you to hold, all of the sadness I cannot.

Indeed a beautiful apartment ....loved it

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/13 01:42 am Title: The Horror Of Our Love

More give me moooooooorrrreeee.....!!!! Loved iitttt......!!!!! Beutiful story update soon please

Reviewer: Minibar Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/13 01:07 am Title: "I get so weak in the knees I can hardly speak. I lose all control and something takes over me."

I just want to say that I absolutely love this story, so glad to see that it had been updated. Also, I so loved the fact that you used an SWV song in the title of this chapter, totally made my day when i saw that. :)

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/13 09:36 pm Title: "I get so weak in the knees I can hardly speak. I lose all control and something takes over me."

looking forward to more
take your time
iv had writers block for years

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/13 07:41 pm Title: "I get so weak in the knees I can hardly speak. I lose all control and something takes over me."

hopefully Bill will understand Tom is doing this for him not to get ride of him

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/13 12:03 am Title: #9 “Ever carry the weight for another?”

Poor Bill, so confused and in inner turmoil. I sure hope Tom can help him understand why hes doing the things hes doing to help Bill!

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/13 06:31 pm Title: #9 “Ever carry the weight for another?”

Been waiting on this chapter XD Where have you been :P Did you want to keep the awesomeness to yourself >.

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/13 03:51 pm Title: #9 “Ever carry the weight for another?”

that's good Bill had fine day at school but that situation with Tom. maybe he would try to understand that Tom really care about him and wants his best

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/13 03:27 pm Title: #9 “Ever carry the weight for another?”

cant wait for more

Reviewer: Mouaah Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/13 10:25 am Title: Believe me when I tell you, I’ll never do you no harm

WHAT A FICTION ! Wow, i really enjoyed my reading, it was amazing !
I'd ike translate this fic in my language, is it possible ?

Reviewer: fanficon Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/13 05:33 am Title: Believe me when I tell you, I’ll never do you no harm

I haven't read it yet, but it looks so goooood *_*
Arabic is my mother tongue. The arabic title in the banner is wrong, the correct one is : الطفل العروس
I hope that someone will translate the story in french. I asked for it, now I'm waiting but I'll read even if it's not translated ;))
Sorry for my bad english :/

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/13 12:13 am Title: Believe me when I tell you, I’ll never do you no harm

Cute chapter!

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/13 04:57 pm Title: Believe me when I tell you, I’ll never do you no harm

haha that was a great chapter
funny

cant wait for more

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/13 04:51 pm Title: Believe me when I tell you, I’ll never do you no harm

i like it :) they seams so comfortable together )
it was so funny how they trap Tom to see his mark hahhaha

Reviewer: Aristotelis Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/13 03:27 am Title: Believe me when I tell you, I’ll never do you no harm

:)

Reviewer: caro4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/13 03:44 pm Title: You’re hard of heart

I need more of this story!!! It's so good, hope the next update will come soon.

Reviewer: Aristotelis Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/13 01:31 pm Title: You’re hard of heart

Wonderful!! I'm really excited that you wrote another chapter!

Reviewer: Callypyge Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/13 04:10 am Title: You’re hard of heart

so funny a gay muslin, not eating pork but into pedophelia hahah. Hygiene would be good too for Tom, like shower once sex is done,like before they eat breakfast , they can shower also sometimes lol

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