Date: 07/13/11 12:21 pm Title: Why Do I Keep Counting?
I can really picture bill in his middle east style dress. He sure is beautiful.
Author's Response:
Date: 07/13/11 11:18 am Title: Many Shades Of Black
HAHA!!! THAT IS TOO FUNNY!!!! ^__^
Author's Response:
Date: 07/13/11 06:05 am Title: Why Do I Keep Counting?
loved the chapter! I hope the wedding gets delayed
Author's Response:
Date: 07/13/11 03:56 am Title: Why Do I Keep Counting?
Good job :)
Author's Response:
Date: 07/13/11 01:25 am Title: Why Do I Keep Counting?
I'm liking the story so far.
I wish Tom could do something to get Bill out of his current situation.
Thanks for the update.
Take care!
Author's Response:
Date: 07/13/11 12:50 am Title: Why Do I Keep Counting?
*jumgs around and sings* Tom's gunna save him, Tom's gunna save him *stops* I don't know how he's gunna do it, but I'm sure he will.
I'm feeling so bad for Bill, and just wanting to kick Bushido's ass. I can't really blame the parents, addicts will do anything for money for their next fix, and wives in that culture have no say...
Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the lovely work! btw, I really liked the gif you left me in your reply to my comment. Very cute
Author's Response:
Date: 07/12/11 11:48 pm Title: Why Do I Keep Counting?
oh el primer beso de Bill fuecon Tom... lindo... y ese odioso de Bushido tenìa q arruinar todo... mañana es la boda pobre Bill..... espero con ansias el sgte capi... :)
Author's Response:
Date: 07/12/11 11:25 pm Title: Why Do I Keep Counting?
Yay! I was so excited to hear this story had been updated! Oh God the weddings in one freakin day Tom had better do somthing fast! Hmm. I love this story, i hope you update soon!
Author's Response:
Date: 07/12/11 11:24 pm Title: Why Do I Keep Counting?
Hmm, twice now you've described Bill as speaking in "broken English", but from his dialogue, it's not like that at all. He seems intermediate in the language, if not advanced.
Author's Response:
i mean his accent, more than his speech pattern. his listens to american radio alot so he knows how to talk it's just he has a really thick accent.
rn
Date: 07/12/11 11:12 pm Title: Why Do I Keep Counting?
Tom needs to take Bill away before the wedding. Like 'kidnap' him, only....Bill would be willing.
Author's Response:
Date: 07/12/11 10:54 pm Title: Why Do I Keep Counting?
I like it! I feel for Bill but I have a feeling Tom will take Bill away...
Author's Response:
Date: 07/12/11 01:22 am Title: LaDiDa
me gustaron mucho los 2 primeros capis y me despierta la curiosidad sobre los sgtes asi q actualiza pronto tu histora sè q me va a gustar :)
Author's Response:
Date: 07/11/11 03:55 pm Title: LaDiDa
Oh, wow, this is really great so far!I am really looking forward to seeing more! I am guessing that was Bushido that pulled Bill away. With the whole You don't own me" and the "i will soon enough" thing. Yea...I am really loving it so far. Keep up the lovely work!
Author's Response:
Date: 07/11/11 02:23 pm Title: LaDiDa
Wooow! You already updated another chapter. It's really good, too.
Author's Response:
Date: 07/11/11 12:11 pm Title: Many Shades Of Black
I hate the idea of child marriage, but the story is intriguing to start with. And I love that tom will turn up to be bill's knight in shiny armor, not to mention bill is the damsel in distress (yea, I'm a sucker for that). So, I'm very much looking forward to new chapters.
Author's Response:
Date: 07/11/11 11:18 am Title: LaDiDa
Hello! Very interesting story, ive never seen a story like this before. Good story, cant wait for more! :) Update soon? :)
Author's Response:
Date: 07/11/11 11:01 am Title: LaDiDa
Tom should have helped him!! i really don't want Bill to go through with the wedding.....
Author's Response:
Date: 07/11/11 06:13 am Title: LaDiDa
Loved the chapter! :) I can help a little if you wanna know about arabian customs, I'm indian but I have some knowledge of them :3 Oh and wanted to point out another thing, this is set in Arabia right?
Okay this isnt a big matter but the currency of Arabia is Dirham and you wrote euros :3 Just wanted to point that out x)
Loved the chapter though :D I love the way you portrayed Bill's emotions on the matter
Author's Response:
Date: 07/11/11 05:53 am Title: LaDiDa
oH PLEASE don't make Bushido be such a hard bastard ready to rape Bill and stuff
It could be more subtle. A mix between love and fear u know. WIth Tom in his mind and Bill fed up and wanted to break free for america is his dream
I love this story, all ur stories
Author's Response:
Date: 07/11/11 04:02 am Title: LaDiDa
Lol, the Bill attack was pretty funny, though the reason behind it was serious.
Careful not to portray all Muslim people as evil and backwards. It's only the radicals and fanatics who are like that.
Kind of interesting that Bill is a "bride" since homosexuality is illegal in these countries.
Author's Response:
i know! i wasn't trying to that's why bill's mother is really kind but this stuff does happen.
rn