Date: 03/07/08 06:52 pm Title: Kay Parker
oh god, you gave me goosebumps. im scared to go to the bathroom.
youre connecting the songs to the murders so well!
i am officially creeped out!
GOOD JOB! lol
waiting for more :]
Date: 03/07/08 03:08 pm Title: Kay Parker
This story is awesome!!! I love it!!
Yeah it's morbid but I'd like to be one...
the info:
Helena Stern
21
tanned
athletic, 5'6
Purple/Blueish...and short black hair
It's so god!! I love that you put Andy in it and Gustav too!!! I hope to read more of them soon!!
And Tom, he's just the best!!
Anyway read you soon
Date: 03/07/08 02:39 pm Title: Kay Parker
oh this is just fabulous!! i love this story! can't believe i haven't reviewed this yet.. *mumbles* how come i didn't....
Go Bill and Andi! those two together is so cute!! and you make Tomi so..policelike xD
anyway : KILL ME!! ...i always wanted to see myself dead..in a weird morbid kind of way and what's a better way to go then in an awesome ficcie? being killed of for Billie!!
Name & Surname : Elle De Sutter (but you can change the familyname!!)
Age : 19
skin colour : pale
Height & body type : uhm 1.70... and if body type is weight i'm 54, i'm rather thin
Hair/eye colour : dyed black hair and clear blue eyes
if you do kill me..kill me good! xD
keep going bitte! and update soon?
::gives murdercookies::
Date: 03/07/08 02:39 pm Title: Kay Parker
Whee.
I'm really liking this.
I'm a huge fan of CSI and an even bigger fan of Tokio Hotel so this is a really neat twist. As morbid as it is, I do want to be one of the girls.
Name & Surname (real or imaginery, doesn't matter, whatever you want) Chelsea Caraway
Age 16
skin colour (its just so I get the descriptive details right) White
Height & body type ; 5'7'', on the thinner side.
Hair/eye colour ; Brown hair. Blue green eyes.
Date: 03/07/08 01:42 pm Title: Kay Parker
Cool! I'd love to be one of the Girls...
Name: Anne Steven
Age: 16
Skin colour: really pale
Height & body type: 1.71m, 59kg, pretty thin
Hair/eye colour: dark brown
And LOL "schrei" would be a good song to kill me with. Maybe choke to death? Hang myself? Slashed throat?(god, that is brutal...)I'm only suggesting here...
Date: 03/07/08 01:04 pm Title: Kay Parker
OOH!!!I wanna be in the story pls!!!
Name: April Van Caille
Age: 18 (LOL)
Skin colour: Deathly pale cos I am
Height: 5 ft 9
Body: Skinny rat
Hair: Black and blue
Eye: Greeny blue
LOLOLOLOL pls put me in the story !! *hugs*
Date: 03/07/08 12:59 pm Title: Ruby Kollmeyer
great story! hiih. guess who wants to be part of it x)
My first (and real name) is: Milla
surename: Really its Korvenranta (finnish) but you can use Lampén (swedish last name) and i live in Finland. in the story i could have moved to germany (like i should next year for few moths) just to get to know the language and things.
Age: 17
skin colour: very pale. imagine that kind of person who sits inside in computer and doesnt see the sun often x)
Height & body type: 145cm/40kg/skinny. dont have big breasts or ass.
Hair colour: dark brown hair with white stipes.
eyes: grey.
Fev song: Wenn nichts mehr geht
hope that i didnt put to much info or push 2 much to some direction. Feel free to kill me x) (in not so brutal way)
Date: 03/07/08 12:33 pm Title: Kay Parker
At first, sorry for my terrible English.
I love mystery novels and I'm big fan of TH, so this is perfect reading for me. I haven't read much these kind of TH-stories, and I'm happy that Tomi is "the Detective" and Billa is "the Diva", it fits perfectly.
CSU... CTU? Is Tom some kind of young Jack Bauer? :D I have watched the Fifth season of 24. I liked it, it was quite exciting. By the way, what does CSU mean? CTU is something like "Counter Terrorist Unit", if I remember right. What does the S mean, if T means "Terrorist"?
Ah, you asked girls. I'm not going to give my own portrait, that would be too horrible, but here is Karoliina. :D
Name & Surname: Karoliina Berg
Age: 15
Skin colour: Pretty white, I think.
Height & body type: Height is something like 5'7, and her body would be skinny, almost anorectic. And, she has got long legs, and a strange circle scar in her neck. ;)
Hair/eye colour: Her eyes are green, and her hair is dyed dark brown with lighter brown stripes.
I'm from Finland, so it would be great if Karoliina - or her mother or something - would too be from Finland. Berg is by the way Finnish surname (actually it's Swedish word), and in English it means "rock". And Karoliina is popular (girls) name here.
I hope you choose her. ;]
And keep on writing, we're waiting for next chapter...
Date: 03/07/08 12:24 pm Title: Kay Parker
*crushes you by hugging you back* Oh, it's getting more and more interesting! ^^ And let me repeat myself:
Name and surname: Alexxandra Reid
Age: 14
Skin color: really pale
Hight: 1,78m
Weight: 69kg
Hair: dark blond
Eyes: dark green
Date: 03/07/08 11:46 am Title: Katrin Strauss
*waves franatically* Hi! How are you? xD
Now seriously:
I love the story, it's different from the others. Oh, and I adore CSI so this really is a good thing to read for me.
Aaaaaaaaand, I want to be in the story!
Ok, so, my name is Marija (please, don't use that xD), but I'd like to be called Alexxandra Reid (if I make it to your Fic). I am blond, have green eyes, am tall and slim, love black and blood red color, enjoy reading Peter Pan and my favorite songs are Frei im freien Fall, Thema #1, 1000 Meere and Gegen meinen Willen.
*drops to her knees* PLEASE, ADD ME TO YOUR STORY!!1 PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PWETTY PLEASE! *bows and kisses feet*
Date: 03/07/08 11:34 am Title: Kay Parker
I luv it!
If you can, put me in too:
Ankia Wolf
Age:15
Skin colour:Goldish? lol
Height and BT: 1,78m, skinny
Hair/eye colour: blue eyes/light brown hair
Date: 03/07/08 11:18 am Title: Kay Parker
This is COOL!!!
Is like watching CSI!! I like they way you´re writing this!!!
Date: 03/05/08 09:19 am Title: Katrin Strauss
This is very interesting! I can't wait for them to meet!
Date: 03/04/08 12:36 am Title: Katrin Strauss
hee, I'm totes interested now. :D
hm...call me...Uta. Uta Maier. ;D Five foot, black and red hair, asian, skinny as hell.
you're doing a wonderful job on this, bb.
Date: 03/01/08 04:58 am Title: Katrin Strauss
This story is amazing. Seriously. o.O
Date: 02/29/08 06:55 pm Title: Katrin Strauss
cool, this is getting more interesting.
the flow of this story is superb!
Date: 02/29/08 05:30 pm Title: Ruby Kollmeyer
another great chapter. cant wait for them to meet :)
Date: 02/29/08 03:45 pm Title: Katrin Strauss
Well that is an offer I can't refuse...
Kay Parker, long black hair, with purple streaks, brown eyes, about 5'8, medium build.
It would be cool to find myself in such a great story! I love it. Keep up the great work!
Date: 02/29/08 03:05 pm Title: Katrin Strauss
I like this, it's different and interesting. Very The Bodyguard, sorta.
Date: 02/29/08 01:59 pm Title: Katrin Strauss
I think it's sooo good! : D I can't wait till Bill enters the picture! :D (And I'd love to be included as one of the girls *Grin* )
Author's Response: Hi!! Thanks for the review! If you wanna be one of the girls all you have to do is give me a little description of yourself (hair colour, eye colour, height, those details you know) and your name or what you want to be called (name and surname)! Thanks again! :D