Date: 05/15/08 11:44 pm Title: Kay Parker
Omg, for a moment, i had actually thought Bill was the killer. Then I felt so guilty. I'm so glad that he's not!
Author's Response: I'm glas you thought Bill was the killer, means my writing is good enough to convince you our innocent litle Billi can be the killer :D
Date: 05/15/08 11:33 pm Title: Katrin Strauss
OMG, this is better than CSI! I love you and your brain and your muse
Author's Response: Omg thanks you for the wonderful review! Me, my brain and my muse love you too :D
Date: 05/15/08 10:14 am Title: Anne Steven
The crime was amazing! I was wondering when Schrei would make an appearance, and then dada!
Beautiful as always ;)
Author's Response: Lol thanks hun!! Lol Schrei is just one of the many favourites which will be popping up throughout the story :D Thanks for the wonderful review!
Date: 05/11/08 08:46 pm Title: Anne Steven
I LOVE THIS STORY!
Gosh, you seem to get so many facts right!
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Woo glad you likeit hun! Thanks for the review and more to come soon *hugs*
Date: 05/11/08 05:59 am Title: Anne Steven
OMG!
I almost fainted when I saw this chapter's title.
You actually wrote about ME?? Like, really? I'm not hallucinating or something? *dies*
Thaaank youuuu so much!! *smooches you and huggles you till you can't breath properly*
Awesome chapter, Bill and Tom are getting closer!!! I can't wait for the next one! And congratulations for the nomination!!!
Author's Response: Lol I'm so happy you liked this chapter :D :D And like you suggested...I used schrei ;D and WOOOO smooches and huggles :D :D Thanks for the review! More to come soon :D :D
Date: 05/10/08 08:41 am Title: Anne Steven
omg! i just read all of these today and i love them! i also watch CSI and i now wish that something like this would happen on it! >
Author's Response: Lol I'm glad you like it so much! If only CSI would do something like this...perhaps I'd get money for it cos it was my idea? *plans*!rnThanks for the review!!
Date: 05/10/08 04:44 am Title: Anne Steven
this is getting interesting love.... keep writing its wonderful... bdw congrats about the nomination.. you deserve it
Author's Response: omg THANKS hun!!!! :D :D Love your review! More to come sooon :D :D
Date: 05/08/08 06:12 pm Title: Anne Steven
congrats on the nomination! and ading to the glock thing, they have a horrible tendnesy to jam if ther is more than 9 month between fireing them, which is why most police offices has mandatory use of their side arms ata shooting range abpout every 6 month.. random fact.. sorry.... love where the story is going thoug or well i like it at any rate and even though it is a bit bloody i adore it. keep up the great work
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it hun and thanks for the info on the glock! The internet doesn't tell you things like that! It'll help in future chapters!! More to come :D :D Thanks for the review :D
Date: 05/08/08 12:06 pm Title: Anne Steven
A new chapter!!! *hyperactive attack* Oh my gosh I love it! And Tom and Bill is getting closer, Georg is hilarious and yet another brilliant death :D I wonder why they get killed... *ponders*
Loved the chapter! If you didn't guess that already... :P
Oh, and *whispers* I nominated it by the way ^_^
Author's Response: OMG!!! *hugs and kisses BrokenMirror!!!!* Thanks for nominating me!! YOu kick ass! Glad you liked the chapter :D By the end, all will be understood, and you'll know why they are getting killed!!! Thanks for the review hun!
Date: 05/08/08 06:55 am Title: Anne Steven
Jeez... Do you want to make me stop loving Bill? Kidding, great work!
Author's Response: Lol! no, don't stop loving Bill!!! :D Thanks for the review hun :D :D
Date: 05/08/08 01:10 am Title: Anne Steven
I got so nervous when I read they'd found another girl! :D Hehehehe. If you sold this to some dude who makes movies, this would make a fantastic movie! :)
Author's Response: Lol I might have to try and make a movie of it!! Can you imagine, actually seeing Bill and Tom (or like-a-likes) snogging and getting close on a big screen!!! Thanks for the review!!!
Date: 05/07/08 10:54 pm Title: Anne Steven
Oh please don't go so long between updates. It seems like forever since the last one. This story is so good, I can't get enough!
Author's Response: Lol I'm hoping the next update will come out very soon!!!! I have a little bit of time to write now as my exams are so spread out!! Thanks for the review hun and I'm glad you like the story :D
Date: 05/07/08 07:48 pm Title: Anne Steven
Yeah, I saw it was nominated. Congradulations! This chapter was great. I particularly like the development w/ Bill and Tom. I really wish they'd hook up already! Update soon. Sooner than last time?
Author's Response: Lol I'm glad you like how things are developing! Hopefully in the coming two chapters things will really get steamy!!! I'm hoping I can update sooon..I have exams *cries!!!* Thanks for the review hun!!!
Date: 05/07/08 07:27 pm Title: Anne Steven
Finally~~~~
i've been waitin for this to be updated!!
Oh poor girls :(
But I'm so loving the progress of bill and tom's relationship.
and georg is hilarious!
btw, i think you prolly forgot the italics end tag, half of the chapter's in italics :D
congratulations for being nominated :D
Author's Response: Omg!!! no the tags went crazy! I'll go arrange it now! Thanks for letting me know!! Lol I'm glad you've loving the bill/tom progression!! More soon and thanks for the review
Date: 05/07/08 06:49 pm Title: Anne Steven
once again, you've outdone yourself! i absolutly love it!!! please let me be one of the dead girls.. i asked a while back, but i dont know if it was ok. anyways^^ i love it and i love YOU for writing it!
Author's Response: Lol I'm glad you love it and omg I love YOU for reviewing!!! I'm hoping to be able to put in everyone who asked to be one of the dead girls! I have many chapters planned out and as long as you gave me all your details, I will definitly put you in! Kisses! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 05/07/08 05:39 pm Title: Anne Steven
god I am so addicted to this story...it's better than agatha christie's novels XD...keep ip up!!! god schrei...sounds pretty awful poor anne!!
Author's Response: Lol wow, I that is an amazing compliment! BEtter than an Agatha Christie novel *screams*!!!! WOW lol!! LOVE your review!!! and trust me, schrei is just the tip of the iceberg! More soon
Date: 05/07/08 05:24 pm Title: Anne Steven
i really like this story. it has a new twist to it that i enjoy! - and it actually has a plot!!
Author's Response: Ooo :D Thanks for the review hun!! i'm so glad you like it and all the plot twists and turns <3
Date: 05/07/08 05:06 pm Title: Anne Steven
I came upon this story today and I started reading, and I must say, I didn't leave my computer until I finished it! It's wonderfully written and interesting, but so realistic! I feel like I'm reading a book, not a fanfiction.
The relationship developing between Tom and Bill is perfect; it's not too quick and unrealistic but it's sweet and believable. I love it.
So yeah all in all, I love this story! I hope you update super soon! =D
Author's Response: Your review made me squee, I swear it did! You are so kind! I'm glad you enjoyed the story and it seems believable!!! And I'm so happy it seems more like a book than a fanfic :D THANK YOU for your amazing review!!! More to come soon for sure! :D :D
Date: 05/07/08 03:55 pm Title: Alexxandra Reid
It's ten o'clock in the evening, the sky is pitch black, my lights doesn't work and I'm freaked out! This is so good, I love it! :D
Author's Response: Lol I'm glad you love it hun!! Sorry you're freaked out...shhh just think of Bill, Tom, Georg and Gustav and you will be soothed :D :D THANKS for the review :D
Date: 05/07/08 03:50 pm Title: Anne Steven
Once again another flawless chapter - perfect !
Georg is getting suspicuious haha :L or jealous maybe ?
Keep writing i need to know what happens :p
Broken-Glass
xo
Author's Response: Lol can you imagine, jealous Georg...omg, maybe he's the killer *GASP* lol :D :D Thanks for the review mein liebchen!! :D :D *hugs*