Date: 06/20/09 07:38 am Title: Alexxandra Reid
HEHEHEHEHEHEEHEHHEEHHEEEEEH!!! YAYYY!!!! BILL'S STAYING AT FORT-FUCKING-KNOX!! lol x]
Date: 06/20/09 07:00 am Title: Katrin Strauss
WOW!!! This is SOOOO well made! Amazing how realistic you make it be! And wow, you know BIG WORDS!!! ...I HAVE FINGERS!!!
Date: 06/20/09 06:46 am Title: Ruby Kollmeyer
Koom und Rette Mich, ich *incoherent mumblings* HEHEHHEEH i LOVE it ALREADY!!! sosoososos AWESOMEEE!!!
MUST
READ
MORE!!!
Date: 05/23/09 03:45 am Title: Helena Stern
Chief Rothstein ? Why does that name sound so familiar?? Anyway, great story dude.
Date: 05/23/09 03:34 am Title: Helena Stern
Chief Rothstein ? Why does that name sound so familiar?? Anyway, great story dude.
Date: 05/22/09 11:56 pm Title: Epilogue
wow! this story is amazing! the only drawback is that i don't think i'll ever look TH's songs the same way anymore. Hopefully i don't get any nightmares @,@...oh well, i still love em
Date: 04/26/09 03:46 am Title: Uta Maier
hey ravyn!
a pity i found your story just now, but she´s pretty cool, i have to admit.
to your question, dunno if it´s to late now, but once i found andreas´ last name. it´s liebig. but there aren´t guarantees. i just use this name when i found it :D
good luck furthermore with your stories
best wishes
sarah
Date: 04/10/09 06:34 pm Title: Ruby Kollmeyer
wow... That was sooo good
I almost cried when I saw the chaper titled under detective tom trümper and the whole cliff hanger thing with tom... It was intense
I was wondering
Isn't there a way to find out who wrote the songs on the girls through like an analysis of the handwriting?
.... I swear I saw that in some movie
Anyway, it was really good:)
Author's Response: I did think of that actually, the analysis of handwriting, it's often the downfall of killers who write handwritten notes xD. It is a very common technique used when the suspect leaves behind a sample of writing but because these were carved into the skin, the way the carvings were made wouldn't indicate any type of handwriting, it could only suggest the instrument used, whether the cuts were made post or ante mortem and whether the killer was left or right handed (I've only recently found this out, I'm further along in my research now xD). Skin isn't like paper, it reacts to touch and it pulls back or stretches and when its been cut, it puckers, so getting an accurate concurence of handwritting is almost impossible.And with the cuts being made after the victims had died, means the skin would've just shrivelled instead of trying to pull back together and heal the wounds. I love being asked things like this, it makes me feel like people not only got the story but as though it also made them think and stuff, so thanks for asking :D And thanks so much for your kind words :D
Date: 04/07/09 08:27 pm Title: Jane Kaulitz
Wow, it wasn't Saki... I'm glad. I like Saki too much to think of him as a bad guy.
Author's Response: Everyone thought it was Saki xD Glad you liked the story though, check out the sequel, 24 Hours :D And thanks so much for all the reviews!!!
Date: 04/07/09 07:44 pm Title: Andreas Gelhausen
I'm sad. It's down to Saki and Gustav...
Date: 04/07/09 06:35 pm Title: Anne Steven
"the wheely board thing" LOLOLOLOLOLOL.
Date: 04/07/09 06:29 pm Title: Ankia Wolf
Okay, so I'm going to take a guess here and say that the bad guy is Saki,my #1 suspect, Gustav, or Bushido. ( Because Bu usually is the bad guy in these stories:D )
Date: 04/05/09 03:58 am Title: Epilogue
Wow, I just love reading this story. This is probably like the 4th or 5th time that I've read this story. The deaths are still kind of creepy of course. But I just can't stop reading it.
Author's Response: 4th or 5th time you've read it?! Omg I feel so special :D you need a hug! *hugs* and a tokio-boy of your choice, coming in the mail :D thanks so much hun!!
Date: 03/23/09 06:35 pm Title: Jane Kaulitz
Ravyn - One of the best Crime stories I've ever read.... Great work!
Cheers
TheDarkOne
Date: 03/08/09 02:09 pm Title: Epilogue
OMG this is the best story i have ever read
i got shivvers down my spine when i was reading it.
how the fuck did yu come up with an idea like that it was so amasing
the story was 10/10 no doubt.
Date: 03/02/09 10:05 pm Title: Epilogue
Loved the story. Very original!
I can't wait to start reading the sequel.
Date: 03/01/09 09:03 am Title: Epilogue
Hello!
I started to read this story yesterday! Ans I read it at once.
It is absolutly amazing.
The characters, the murders, the links to the songs, every detail of scientific stuff...
Your story is catch breathing.
I read a lot of fanfictions, in french and in english.
But this is one of the most incredible I've read. It has all what makes a great story.
I don't even have the good words to tell you how I feel after my reading.
I only want to tell you:
BRAVO and THANKS.
Kiki
ps:Sorry for the mistakes, I'm french...
Date: 03/01/09 04:49 am Title: Tyesha Nicholson-Grant
Sometimes having a graphic imagination is a really bad thing.
Reading this at 4 in the morning is probably worse.
But, I've never gotten nightmares from anything like this, so I'm curious as to what will happen when I go to sleep. :P
Date: 03/01/09 04:38 am Title: Eileen Kaya
Okay, it's really REALLY hard to freak me out, but fuck, that shit was FREAKY. The whole chapter has this 'something's way off' vibe, but the face changing thing was horrid. Really really creepy.
Was that your own idea or did you see it in a movie or something?
Either way, it was awesome, in a sick, 'what the hell?!' kinda way. ;)
Author's Response: I've never seen the face thing done anywhere else I don't think, it just came to me. Whether it was influenced by something else or not, I have no clue xD I'm glad you like it though xD Check out the sequel, 24 Hours. Thanks for the review :D :D
Date: 02/27/09 09:18 pm Title: Epilogue
Breathtaking from start to finish! A sequal would be nice...