Date: 04/06/10 09:45 am Title: Ruby Kollmeyer
Aw my review has been cut u_u" Doesn't matter, thank you for writing this incredible story =D
Date: 04/06/10 09:41 am Title: Epilogue
Well, I read english better than I write it (sorry if there are some error then) so I'm not going to do a long review full of details but I just HAVE to let you know how amazing I think your story is. So well written and original. Every murder was frightening me deeply and I always tried to figure out who was the killer, it was soooo frustrating! (finally I just read the original version, I coudln't wait for the french translation >.
Date: 03/06/10 12:29 am Title: Epilogue
That was SUCH a good story. Had me on the edge of my seat from the very beginning. I thoroughly enjoyed it. VERY well written.
I can defintely see this being published. Might have to change Bill's name of course, but yea. I would defintely buy the book.
Excelent story. I will def tell my friends about this one.
Thank you for writing it! :)
Date: 03/04/10 09:20 am Title: Katrin Strauss
This is very well written, but I'm a bit confused. Don't get me wrong, I'm enjoying it immensely, but how could she have DIED from severe blood loss due to the wounds on her arms... if the wounds were made after she died?
Then you list her cause of death as: Cause of Death: Exponential damage to internal organs brought on by pressure.
But.. "Vital organs were normal, weight, texture and colour all within range."
I'm loving this story, I really am, it's exciting! I'm just confused by this...
Author's Response: Thanks for the comments =D I think what you've done is mixed up the first girl with the second. the part about the vital organs being normal etc..., thats for the first girl, Ruby Kollmeyer. the cuts made after death were also for Ruby. Here, the cuts made after she died were the ones which said "Rette Mich", she died from the gashes on her wrists which were made before she died, and that was how she lost so much blood - like suicide.
The girl who dies from damage to internal organs is the second girl, Katrin Strauss, who jumped. Her death was obviously brought on by the impact when she hit the ground and thats how damage was done to her internal organs.
hope that clears it up!!
Date: 02/10/10 06:17 am Title: Epilogue
It's a great story!!! L-O-V-E IT!!!
Date: 01/25/10 03:38 pm Title: Tyesha Nicholson-Grant
Well, I thought the killer was Gustav, but, I guess I'm wrong... Poo...
Date: 01/25/10 02:10 pm Title: Anette Hansen
Well, you did a very good discription. The kick backs. Great. The sight alignment, fabu. The way Bill responded to shooting the weapon, is the same way I did the first time I had to shoot in Boot Camp. Kudos
Date: 01/24/10 11:07 pm Title: Alexxandra Reid
Ok so I know most of the songs thus far, but the last two songs, what are they, only German release?
Author's Response: 'In die Nacht' is only a German release, its the song the twins sing to each other during most European concerts (no idea if they've started performin it in America too). 'Wo Sind Eure Hände' has been translated into English, called 'Raise Your Hands'. It's one of the songs which you could get on the version of Scream released in America (2 versions were released, one with 'Raise Your Hands' and one with 'Live Every Second' so it just depended which CD you got) =D
Date: 01/24/10 02:55 pm Title: Kay Parker
I have this striking feeling that Gustav is the murder... Could be wrong.
Date: 01/21/10 07:44 am Title: Epilogue
OMG one of the best stories ive eva read!!!! ur a very good writer and hav come up with an original and creative idea, love it!!!!
i do hav 1 question though, what was the significance of the code for tom's sercurity alarm? it was supposed to spell something and the only thing i can think of is 'gibson' yet there was no mention of tom playing the guitar...
anyway it was an excellent fanfic...though i do feel bad that Tomi's perfect body got scarred! O.o ohnoes! =]
Author's Response: haha I threw in the code just for kicks really, nothing too significant, kind of like a look into what might be his private life. I'm glad you liked it though and thanks for the review! Check out the sequel, 24 Hours =D
Date: 12/09/09 04:51 pm Title: Epilogue
Oh my god. I already finished !
That was an incredible story !
Thanks :)
Now I'm waiting the french translation for the details that I wouldn't had understood. I soent a lot of great moments here !
Date: 12/07/09 12:11 pm Title: Anne Steven
I began to read the first 6 chapters in French. But now I think that I am going to continue to read the original version (awaiting the french translation :P). I understand not quite perfectly but enough I think. In any case I really like very much your story. Your imagination is amazing !
:)
Date: 11/07/09 08:30 pm Title: Epilogue
OUR LADY OF SORROWS FOR THE WORLD!!!
I had a little giggle/spasm/snort when I saw that lyric and then I had to listen to that song =D
And you are right - AMAZING SONG
THAT WAS AMAZING!!
One of my fave FFs ever
Increabile, Im just sad it's over D=
Date: 11/04/09 05:16 am Title: Anne Steven
Wow that is shit terrifying... Just the it used 'Schrei' is SO scary
Jeeez
Date: 10/30/09 08:47 pm Title: Ruby Kollmeyer
coroners usually use a liver probe for temperature
Date: 10/22/09 07:08 pm Title: Epilogue
oh wow!!!!
Congratulations for this story!!!
At first i thought it was andreas who was the murder lol...but no...your story is genius!!!! thanks
Date: 09/03/09 06:12 am Title: Epilogue
Wow this was a great story! Good job!!!
Okay, I'm so reading the sequal now... :)
Date: 07/28/09 07:21 am Title: Ankia Wolf
I love how the code to deactivate the alarm spells out Gibson.
Date: 07/28/09 07:18 am Title: Epilogue
When I started reading the epilogue I was "oh hell no, the whole thing was a dream?" then I continued to read and realized it wasn't.
I loved the story. The whole time I was trying to figure out who was the killer and obviously I was wrong, I had suspected of Saki, Georg, Gustav, Andreas, and even Tom himself... I thought he had like different personalities where he didn't remember what he did, but obviously I dismiss the idea right away.
Author's Response: glad you liked it!!! wow, that's a good idea though, the thought of Tom having personalities causing the killings and not remembering...clever!!! check out the sequel =D
Date: 06/20/09 11:03 pm Title: Elle De Sutter
omg, that sex was NOT ok, it was friggen AWESOME!!!!