Date: 08/15/11 01:46 am Title: Chapter 8
The end?? :( *pouts* But...whaaa??
Author's Response: Oh it'll be continued, just not right now.. There's more stories in progress, some that need more focus.. :)
Date: 07/17/11 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 7
Awww that's just precious!
Date: 07/17/11 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 7
Awwwww. This was so cute!! Somehow I knew the were going to end uo having twins. I wouldn't doubt it if it turned out to be incredibly common there. I really liked the lovebug ickname for some reason, even if Bill isn't a car. Keep up the spiffy work! Can't wait for more!
Date: 07/17/11 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 7
i hope the nice times last for them
Date: 07/15/11 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 6
Thats a lot of pregnancy to go through in two months...Poor Bill is going to have stretch marks from hell. I am really looking forward to where this goes next! Keep up the nice work!
Date: 07/15/11 08:41 am Title: Chapter 6
awww thats soo cute ! :)
Date: 07/11/11 11:32 am Title: Chapter 5
Well, my guess is Bill is either A) Pregnant or B) His body is preparing for Mating Season in order to get pregnant. I'm sure we will find out soon.
Thank you for explaining everything. It helped a lot. This was a great chapter. The sexy times were good. Keep up the lovely work! I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: ;) rnrn(Just a little thing; Bill's body has no need to prepare for mating season, it's mostly females who do it.. I should have added that in. >.< *Facepalm*) rnThank you very much though! ^_^
Date: 07/11/11 09:07 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh o What happened to Bill O:
and ahh thank god no laws against incest haha xD Loved the chapter
Author's Response: :3 You'll find out soon!rnThank you <3
Date: 07/11/11 05:51 am Title: Chapter 4
Well o.o damn!
Poor Tomi and Billa..Loved the chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 07/11/11 01:51 am Title: Chapter 4
Ok, I can go with the flow of a lot. But this is starting to push it a bit. First of all why wouldn't Bill remember having a brother, let alone a twin brother?. Also why wouldn't Ah'nika have told them that yesterday? Before she made Bill all blushey and giggley about finding his One. This is vwery stra nge and random and suspicious. I am really looking forward to how you explain this. Oh and also why she is was rude to Tom yesterday by not speaking in a language he could understand if she knew it.
Author's Response: All I can say is wait for the next chapter. I don't want to give anything away. :)
Date: 07/09/11 10:46 am Title: Chapter 3
awesome chapi :3 I love ur story!
Date: 07/09/11 02:32 am Title: Chapter 3
hmm...that was a veery...sudden development of their relationship... It was very good though. I hope things will be better for them now. Keep up the lovely work! I look forward to more!
Date: 07/08/11 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 3
Aww they reached home :'D I can feel a huge twisty curve ball on my way haha
great chapter
Date: 07/08/11 05:45 am Title: Chapter 2
i love the story! :D hopw you guys update soon!
Author's Response: Glad you do! <3 It'll be updated soon, trust me. ^_^
Date: 07/07/11 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was pretty helpful thanks. I will have to check the pics out soon
Date: 07/07/11 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow, that was almost a ridiculously fast update from when I reviewed.
The shortness and the rushed feeling worked for the situation, so don't owrry about it. This was a great chapter. I'm having a hard time picturing Bill's hair though...is it all white? You said it was partially dreaded, so kind of like in the HUmanoid video right?
Keep up the wonderful work. I am looking forward to more
Author's Response: HAHA, sorry! :P I just don't want to get side-tracked and start forgetting to update these stories.. Really, I have a horrible memory. :PrnOkay, thanks. And nah, it's kind of dreaded in some spots and brushed in others. He has two white areas mixed in with the black, which he braids around the back of his head and pins there. I hope that helped? I should have a manip uploaded sooner or later on my deviantART (tokioindienacht is the name on there ^_^) if you want to check that a few times. :)rnrnThank you sooo much. <3
Date: 07/07/11 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
hmmm, this is kind of interesting so far. I am looking forward to seeing more soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^
Date: 07/07/11 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Its realy cool :D I'll be waiting for more :3
Author's Response: Thanks! :D More should be up soon.