Wow. This was... I am truly at a loss for words. The spanking scenes were SOOO hot. I mean Day-um. Spanking has never been a turn on for me but while reading this I was about to die. That's as PG as I can put it. Any other way I try to say it there would be a required discretion label. The on thing that got me was Tom calling Bill little one. I understand how it fits in with the story and I like it but its just weird for me to imagine. Great read!

Ok, so, obviously this was really hot. But I, I dunno, Tom calling Bill 'little one' is a kind of strange. It just doesn't seem to fit to me. No offense or anything.

Author's Response: To each their own I suppose. I donno it's just something I can see Tom calling Bill in a BDSM situation to reinforce the dominance.

*giggles* this was really cute and damn hot too, good job :D

Author's Response: Thank you so very much!

Hey, well if you say “pretty please” how can I not leave a review.^^
First off I’m sorry you had to work so hard – and very thankful that you still found time for writing this. And I can’t wait for the other story as well.
Hehe, a prequel – I must say I do like prequels very much. Especially this one ;-)

Here goes your detailed review:
Well, now I really get why the guys used to call Bill bratty – now I know. That’s what I call a diva-fit!
But I can almost see Bill being lazy like that. I actually have a picture of Bill where he’s just sitting on a chair, while someone brings him food. =)
I also have the “your’s looks better” – syndrome – but just if the other person and I ordered different food.
Wow, I can’t believe he did throw the hot soup onto Tom. I have to say “poor Tom” instead of “poor Bill” – that’s a first. =)
I’m actually surprised how long Tom did not say something about Bills behavior – three month – wow. But I guess it was because of the surgery and all…
“Treating you like child you insist on acting like!”– liked that sentence.
“No, you’re not. But you will be when I’m done.” – loved that one^^ Grrr Tom ;-)
Well, what can I say your spanking scenes are as lustfully and lovely and epic as always. You can write them in a way I like them – even though I normally don’t find it that hot
“I love you so much, Billa, so I’ve been sticking around.” – Oh, Tom is so sweet.
Bills “Yes, Sir” loved it. So well sweet, cute, süß, herzig, knuffig... I don’t know enough word in either language. =)
“He had been dreaming for years about his Billa submitting to him.” – I have to say I never did – but after your stories I do too. ^^
Using the belt also surely will make Bill even more submissive.
“He jumped to obey unable to resist” – yes, this is definitely the beginning of the little Billa we (thanks to you) all know and love.
I love how Tom is strong and stern but still so caring. How he waited for Bills panic to get less.
“I told you to stay still. You can either obey or go back over my lap. You’re choice.” – Tom is making me all aroused here^^ I just have to except that I’m a bit naughty :-P
And of course not to forget Bill – with his pain-filled pleasure. So hot.
Sooo sweet and almost funny how Tom says: “I didn’t mean to hurt you!” – because I think hurting him was part of the reason for spanking^^ but I know what he means.
Great explanation for Bills battiness – how doesn’t love being taken care of? And Toms promise - *sigh*
The next morning was amazing too – but I’m kind of out of words. I could only repeat myself.

Thanks for writing!

Author's Response: I can so see Bill having an absolute diva-fit. He just seems the type. I want to see that picture! It's the first thing I've done something really mean to Tom! *giggle* Yeah Tom was giving Bill the benefit of the doubt because of the surgery. Thank you so much for saying that about my spanking scenes! I'm so happy I could give you new fantasies! I love my little Billa! Eh we're all a bit naughty some times. Thanks so much for the review! I love them so much!

I love BDSM fics, and this was just perfect! The relationship between the twins' felt very real, as did the sort of power shift. Loved this!

Author's Response: Aaw thank you so much! I tried really hard to make this feel real. I'm so glad you loved it!