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Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 05:20 am Title: You just might get it

Oh Tom you fucking idiot XDD Everything was going so smooth too XD I'm really loving this, post soon :D

Reviewer: ichliebedreads Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 05:11 am Title: You just might get it

he has that streak doesn't he? The one where you don't know if you wanna bash him with a car or pinch his cheeks until he bleeds.

 

I love this. XD I'm going with the sadistic venus proposition though. 

Reviewer: haenni89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 05:06 am Title: You just might get it

loooooool. nice. keep up the good work

Reviewer: xXfaithXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 03:58 am Title: You just might get it

"Sure, a couple," said Tom. "I've never been with a guy as gay as you, though."

^^

*facepalm*

lol Tom if you keep talking you are not going get laid ever...

*maybe we should gag him? It would be very Hot!*

Great chapter btw! :)

Reviewer: xXfaithXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 03:53 am Title: Careful what you wish for

Yay!!!I just squealed out load when I realised you have another story!

Your stories are brilliant, and I expected to love this one straight away..

You didn't diasppoint me..because this story is just as great as the others, I love the plot & I can't wait to read more...
I love the character of Bill and Tom is just unintentionally an asshole, which I love!
(Is it lame to admit I did the same as Bill and wished on a star? well I did, Mr "right" still hasn't been delivered...I think whoever is in charged should be fired =P lol

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 03:26 am Title: You just might get it

.... XD The ending. LMFAO.

You're amazing at writing dialogue.

Hahahaha, shit!

Reviewer: umetnica Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 03:09 am Title: You just might get it

:facepalm:

Reviewer: boo Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 03:00 am Title: You just might get it

I completely love this Tom. I love that you've made him not perfect. He's a REAL boy (yes, as opposed to a fake boy) who doesn't think before he speaks and doesn't realize he's said something wrong. You've got me really excited for this.

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 02:37 am Title: You just might get it

Oh Tom, just when you start redeeming yourself you open your mouth. He has no idea of think before you speak huh. Such a pity because for everything else he is most definitely Mr Perfect. Can't wait for more honey *hugs*

Reviewer: AshesPashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 01:51 am Title: You just might get it

Oh Lord! I just knew he was going to say something to blow this whole thing. I;m envisioning pasta in his lap as Bill storms out. He's so sweet and then he opens that mouth. *shakes head* I loved it. YAY. Now I can go to bed happy.

Reviewer: FishPanda Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 01:50 am Title: You just might get it

Oh, Tom. Just when we think you're doing better.

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 01:43 am Title: You just might get it

Oh mah gawd. (Yes. That was said with a southern accent.)

Reviewer: RazorSoftLie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 01:42 am Title: You just might get it

I literally just facepalmed. Oh Tom, you adorable idiot. Looking forward to him weaseling his way out of that one! X0)

Reviewer: shimmery Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/11 12:25 pm Title: Careful what you wish for

Great start (for the story and for bill) I have a light hearted fic with our sassy diva and the cheeky tom. Keep this up, I'd be waiting.

Reviewer: s_n_a_r_k Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/11 06:58 am Title: Careful what you wish for

tracking. seems like it's going to be a fun story. I love the stories in which T and B have a rocky love-hate cute relationship.

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/11 03:56 am Title: Careful what you wish for

Oh, and I love that Bill's worry is that he will be late for class-not that someone just smashed into his car.

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/11 03:55 am Title: Careful what you wish for

LOL! That was fabulous! I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: rainbowcolored7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/11 02:38 am Title: Careful what you wish for

Haha ahh I love it so much. I feel kind of bad for Tom, he seems so indelibly awkward. xD

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/11 12:21 am Title: Careful what you wish for

XDD Poor Tom he seems like a sweet guy who just happens to fuck up a lot but never means to xD post soon please!

Reviewer: Todo se fuga Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/11 09:41 pm Title: Careful what you wish for

Lol.
Tom is just great.
Poor Bill though, look what that mean star-planet got him. Doooom.
Can't wait to read what's next.
PS. Jordan is absolutely adorable.

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