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Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/11 01:43 am Title: Anything your heart desires

Hehe, lovely chapter! And that last line isn't so self-damning as last time XD

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/11 01:36 am Title: Anything your heart desires

XD I love how you just end it with those lines; always leaves me wanting to see Bill's reaction. Although, this time I hope Bill doesn't flip out as bad as last time. Anyhow, can't wait till next post.

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/11 01:19 am Title: Anything your heart desires

I love Tom's effort to make up with Bill. I can't wait to see what Bill's reaction is to Tom's last statement xD

Reviewer: LoVeWrItInG Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/11 12:55 am Title: Careful what you wish for

Omfg! God I love it

Reviewer: Analif Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/11 12:37 am Title: Anything your heart desires

Ooooh! I liked this second chance! Even if Tom still says whatever is in his mind. Quite direct, the boy!

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/11 12:12 am Title: Anything your heart desires

Ooo he's taking to Tom

Reviewer: phioniray Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/11 06:52 pm Title: You just might get it

Tom is so in character, I DON'T EVEN!! *___* No brain to mouth filter whatsoever, absolutely adorkable.
Poor Bill, though. He can't relax even for a moment. XD

Reviewer: mairasm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/11 01:34 am Title: You just might get it

ROWFLOLOLOLOL
OMG Tom is so much fun here!! And Bill's reactions are awesome ><
Thanks for the chapters, will be following for sure ^^

Reviewer: Stardust27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/11 12:26 am Title: You just might get it

That last line was just... brilliant. So fucking brilliant I'm speechless. Everything before it was great, I want the story to go on and on but that line... Oh. :)

Reviewer: hopefulharuna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 11:34 pm Title: You just might get it

hahahahaha I'm so excited to see where this goes.

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 11:30 pm Title: You just might get it

.... And then Bill starts laughing cause its endearing and charming the way Tom is totally unable to keep is mouth shut, right? Awww poor Tom! It was going so well! I dont want their date to end yet ! And Bill should know better by now to not take seriously whatever Tom says :P anyways! This fic is totally awesome and I cant wait for more!

Reviewer: prozac Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 08:09 pm Title: You just might get it

hhahahahahahaha the last line xDDDDD i can picture Billīs face in my mind xDDD like wtf!? hahahahahahahahahaha

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 06:51 pm Title: You just might get it

Oh Tom...things were going so well, lol. Can't wait to read more! XD

Reviewer: Todo se fuga Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 05:26 pm Title: You just might get it

Tomi is sweeter than I expected. He's kind of charming, actually; making Bill some delicious pasta with fluffy flowers, chair-pulling and all that.
Bill might have to slap him in the near future, but that's just about that.
I sort of love the fact that he speaks his mind, even when he (definitely) doesn't have to. I can tell Bill feels more at ease already, when he's supposed to feel all awkward as in every first date.
Anyway, I'm enjoying Tom's noncommittal and random add ups.
See ya!

Reviewer: Emeycia Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 04:12 pm Title: You just might get it

Reading this is the best way to de-stress after a long day. I literally lol'd at the last line. Adorable jackass indeed.

Reviewer: helpmebill Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 03:37 pm Title: You just might get it

Tom just can't help but stick his foot in it....lol. I love this.

Reviewer: kassandra_kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 03:34 pm Title: You just might get it

I think the last thing he said would deserve a stab to the neck

Reviewer: musique_style Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 03:21 pm Title: You just might get it

I literally smacked my head at that last line. OH my god, Tom...why? Just why? >_>

Lol, I'm loving this, though, with Tom always putting his foot in his mouth, and then successfully sliding it back out again!

I'm really curious as to why Tom was so willing to get an official citation for traffic tickets that weren't even his. I'm really curious about what kind of guy his father is, that he'd say vegetarianism is for sissies, and Tom would still be compelled to get in trouble with the law for him.

On the plus side, their date was off to a good...ish... start. =D .... :/ I'm so excited for more, Kish, I'm loving this!

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 03:20 pm Title: You just might get it

Oh, Tom! I wonder how that foot's tasting lol. But Bill has him pegged right. Adorable jackass xD Can't wait to read more of this.

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 02:12 pm Title: You just might get it

*groans* oh tom...just stop. stop now lol

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