Date: 07/04/11 01:47 am Title: For the one I love
I was so worried that Bill would get to the tunnel and see Tom flirting with some girl. Maybe with her between him and the wall; then I would have had to kill Tom. This place sounds exactly like where I went to school, except many of our tunnels were above ground so they had windows. I don't quite miss school but this brings back some great memories. Tom's brash comments are starting to grow on me as much as they are on Bill. Another great chapter.
Date: 07/04/11 01:25 am Title: For the one I love
Loved it! yes.
Date: 07/04/11 01:15 am Title: For the one I love
I'd be so creeped out if I was Bill, lol...then again I am permanently paranoid because of all the criminal/murder shows I watch. Anywho, it seems Tom is getting better, and that things are going well between them, for now. Can't wait for more! :D
Date: 07/04/11 12:58 am Title: For the one I love
"Bill threw on as many layers as he could without looking like the snowsuit kid from A Christmas Story"
extra brownie points for incorporating the awesomest christmas movie ever made into your story!
loved everything about this chapter. tom as dog pee facillitator was great, walking to class together, and i could totally picture the catacombs. now let's see how bill reacts to having his ass referred to as amazing.
Date: 07/03/11 04:01 pm Title: Anything your heart desires
Great chapter! XD
Date: 07/03/11 03:17 pm Title: Anything your heart desires
I'd love to make a reference on how princesses can turn frogs into Prince Charmings by kisses, but I know Bill wouldn't appreciate that. :D
Date: 07/03/11 03:10 pm Title: Anything your heart desires
Yeah! I'm so glad they got to finish their date! Tom may not be good with words but he sure is with romantic gestures, first the dinner with flowers, now the climbing through Bill's window! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 07/03/11 01:40 am Title: Anything your heart desires
I enjoyed very chapter of this.
Date: 07/03/11 01:01 am Title: Anything your heart desires
Tom, Tom, Tom, Tom, Tom, Tom...*goes away shaking head* Tom. WOW. Just. Words won't encompass it.
Date: 07/02/11 03:00 pm Title: Anything your heart desires
this was nice. not so many "omg, Tom!!" moments. i thought Bill would have a heart attack if Tom kept that up. but goodness, you (and Tom, of course) have a way with chapter endings!!
Date: 07/02/11 02:27 pm Title: Anything your heart desires
I do honestly hope Tom's tone of voice was an amused one and not a dead-pan-serious one... or that Bill is extremely horny.
Date: 07/02/11 01:31 pm Title: Anything your heart desires
hahahahhahahaa OMG Tom here is priceless!!!
Love your fic!!
Thanks for the update ><
Date: 07/02/11 11:29 am Title: Anything your heart desires
I love this! The whole story is so cute, and I love that Tom is starting to--slightly--learn to think before he speaks. But I like it when he makes a brash comment almost as much ;] Keep writing!
Date: 07/02/11 10:58 am Title: Anything your heart desires
I'm glad Tom got a second chance. I was imagining Tom would use up a lot of second chances, but it's his nature to blurt out stuff and Bill will eventually get used to it. Tom'll even grow on Bill... like a fungus. XD An insensitive but wonderfully hot fungus.
I like people who are direct and honest. People who are too sensitive end up only ever saying nice things that don't really mean anything at all. It loses sincerity.
Date: 07/02/11 08:16 am Title: Anything your heart desires
nice! *_* more :D
Date: 07/02/11 08:11 am Title: Anything your heart desires
*facepalm* Tom you idiot! Just when things seemed to be progressing nicely. Bill I have two words for you DUCT TAPE!
Date: 07/02/11 06:27 am Title: Anything your heart desires
Oh, Tom is so sweet...I'm glad Bill's giving him a chance.
Date: 07/02/11 02:26 am Title: Anything your heart desires
If he's seriously expecting Bill to put out at this very moment, I forsee a knee to the balls in his very immediate future.
Date: 07/02/11 02:08 am Title: Anything your heart desires
yay! they salvaged their date! but why do i think bill will think that last line came a bit soon? not that i would. i'd be under him already. but this is about bill.
Date: 07/02/11 02:08 am Title: Anything your heart desires
yay! they salvaged their date! but why do i think bill will think that last line came a bit soon? not that i would. i'd be under him already. but this is about bill.