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Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 02:45 pm Title: For the one I love

nice...i'm glad he didn't get offended...and he was very consiterate to stand in the rain and let the dog pee...he and bill are getting along wonderfully...it's great...

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 02:29 pm Title: Anything your heart desires

they're both making progress...that was incredibly romantic climbing up the fire escape...now how is bill gonna take that? good thing i can read on to find out...

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 01:12 pm Title: For the one I love

Awww it went so much better than I expected! *bounces* Tom was so gallant with his umbrella, Prince Charming indeed! Love it honey *hugs*

Reviewer: musique_style Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 01:05 pm Title: For the one I love

LOL! I love how you end every chapter with a Tomism, and I'm enjoying the fact that Bill is just getting so used to them. XD

Their interactions are this perfectly amazing blend of sweet and "d'oh!" I can't get enough!

Reviewer: RuffleBunn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 12:42 pm Title: For the one I love

MOOOOOORE!!!
Please (:

Reviewer: musicmaniac Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 12:30 pm Title: Careful what you wish for

Loooooove this!

Reviewer: Todo se fuga Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 12:15 pm Title: For the one I love

Typical Tomi! I would have probably been scared to death in those tunnels and his only thoughts are concerning Bill's ass.
I'm looking forward to their second date and a deluge of Tom's unfiltered remarks.

Reviewer: Stardust27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 10:08 am Title: For the one I love

Oh Tom. You... are so very strange, lol. You're doing such a good job at his characterization, balancing the good with the... completely hopeless, I can't wait to read what he'll say next :)

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 09:39 am Title: For the one I love

I knew Bill was going to laugh at Tom's ridiculous sentences at some point =P The kiss was so sweet! And Tom really is a romantic. I love his character so much and I can't wait to read more about Bill and Tom together cause they are adorable.

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 09:34 am Title: For the one I love

LOL @ Tom's explanation xD and oo I overlooked it before but he's a Pol Sci student! lol I'm an 11th grader and I have it for a subject. It's amazing :D
And once again great chapter!

Reviewer: Ghostie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 07:09 am Title: For the one I love

I'm with Tom on this one. If Bill Kaulitz just so happened to be strutting in front of me I would totally just follow behind to watch him...but Bill is also not my boyfriend. Sadly.

So now they're all alone in the dark scary tunnel...what next? :o

Reviewer: emynona Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 06:09 am Title: For the one I love

LOLOLOL

Tom is speaking so bluntly, love him xD
Their kiss was amazing

Reviewer: Fighter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 05:52 am Title: For the one I love

Ahaha, Tom...you retard...

Awesome update! Thank you! :D

Reviewer: PoorMedea Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 04:41 am Title: For the one I love

I'm glad Bill's learning to roll with the punches as far as Tom's lack of a mouth filter goes.

This is just such a cute story! It's the perfect way to start my day today.

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 04:01 am Title: For the one I love

this is a really good story!!
when will u add more?

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 02:34 am Title: For the one I love

awww, he is so cute!

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 02:10 am Title: For the one I love

lmao I'm so glad Tom didn't get in-trouble with Bill before :D Still lovein' this :D

Reviewer: haenni89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 02:07 am Title: For the one I love

ooooh. nice. love it! gimme mooooore

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 01:58 am Title: For the one I love

Okay, now he's just being adorable. There's no way Bill is going to take offense at that, right? He's too far into his infatuation with Tom, now. ;D

Reviewer: AshesPashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 01:53 am Title: Anything your heart desires

I knew Tom was at the window. I can't decide if that's creepy or romantic. At least he knew to turn to Georg for a little guidance. Cinderella is my fav Disney film even if it leads girls to believe they need a man and a fairy godmother to get them out of their horrible life of slavery and unfair treatment. Pocahontas is my close second. There Tom goes again, at least you can't accuse him of being disingenuous.

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