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Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/11 01:23 am Title: Makes no difference who you are

I hope this goes well lol. I'm scared shitless xD

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/11 01:03 am Title: Makes no difference who you are

Finally! I have a feeling this is about to get really interesting! Smart of Bill to wear something more comfortable for this meeting. Hopefully he can keep it up! If anything, it'll be Tom that screws things up.

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/11 05:43 pm Title: Beggars would ride

Tom is so cute and exasperating at the same time. thanks for the great updates!

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/11 03:40 am Title: If wishes were horses

hilarious. i love it!

Reviewer: AshesPashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/11 12:10 am Title: Beggars would ride

OMG the last line of each chapter kills me and I find myself saying, "Oh Tom," and not in a good way. He should be happy he's dating Bill and not me because I think I would slap him in the face every five seconds but then try to kiss it better cause he's so damn hot! I swooned when he told Bill he was falling for him and then he opened his damn mouth again at the end. It's like a weird compliment sandwich that has me shaking my head at the end of each chapter. I can't wait to see if they pull this off or if Tom says fuck it and finally comes out to his dad. *sits on pins and needles*

Reviewer: AshesPashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/11 11:33 pm Title: No request is too extreme

I loved the whole dog walking scene. I couldn't catch my breath because something else funny would happen or be said and I'd start laughing all over again. I can just see it all in my head and I think that's what makes me laugh instead of chuckle.

Reviewer: TKmkXy Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/11 01:25 am Title: Beggars would ride

"Just so you know, I think you're gorgeous no matter what. Even if you end up looking like the ugliest woman in the world."
Oh wow Tom is just so... Clueless! Where did you get the idea for this? It's a wonderful story, I can't wait for the next chapter :)

Reviewer: nessa8402 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/11 01:02 am Title: Beggars would ride

yeaaaaa!!

Reviewer: mrsjennakaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/19/11 07:34 pm Title: Beggars would ride

oh goodness, this was funny!!! Tom's Last Words get me every time!!!

Reviewer: bibi_simple Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/11 01:56 pm Title: Beggars would ride

Beautiful...who knows what will happen during the meeting with Tom's dad and how will be Bill in women's version. I'm very curious =)!!

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/11 12:23 pm Title: Beggars would ride

*facepalm* oh Tom...

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/11 11:51 am Title: Beggars would ride

Always interesting to read about those two! I love seeing their relationship develop and learning more about the characters, this story is absolutely brilliant !

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/11 11:49 am Title: Beggars would ride

That was- That was just so beautiful *wipes away fake tear* I don't know which is more special the "Dumbass, I'm falling for you too" or the "You're gorgeous even if you do end up being the ugliest woman alive"

This chapter was really wonderful. I don't know how you do it. You somehow, magically, make the worst statements in the world sound so sweet.

Keep up the amazing work! I am really looking forward to seeing more! *hugs*

Reviewer: Zora Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/11 11:35 am Title: Beggars would ride

I love it!

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/11 08:14 am Title: Beggars would ride

oh god! the things that come out of his mouth!! it's hilarious...i can't believe that bill's seriously contemplating this...well, maybe i can...it's amazing what you'll do for the one you love...

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/11 06:07 am Title: Beggars would ride

LMAO! way to be rude Tom! xD loved the chapter

Reviewer: PoorMedea Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/11 05:19 am Title: Beggars would ride

Seeing an update on this story always makes me so happy!

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/11 03:34 am Title: Beggars would ride

Lmao that last sentence was so sweet, but not at the same time xD How do you come up with that?

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/11 03:34 am Title: Beggars would ride

oh, tom, i get that you're trying to be sweet, but bill could NEVER be the ugliest woman in the world, think about how ugly humans can be! like just today, i saw this old, weathered woman on TV who lives with 52 hairless rats...not attractive

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/11 03:19 am Title: No request is too extreme

lmao least we know which part of Bill Tom likes better XD

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