Date: 12/13/09 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ugh, I love this story. It's fantasic, your twins are so well-written. Fantastic.
Date: 06/18/09 07:46 am Title: Chapter 1
wow those two boys are sweet. Cant wait to hear more but I am glad you are getting things sorted in real life. There is nothing worse than having tings looming over you. Good Luck!
Riv
Date: 04/05/09 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 5
*takes a breath* You want the bad, right? Ok...you're sure?
*waits for it before unloading*
THE NEXT BUTTON IS MISSING!
I can so totally sympathize with Tom here, because it really isn't fair how Bill keeps wanting to stay in his safe world and it's way easier to place trhe blame on your unhinged older brother than admit to yourself, in that cold, harsh, slap in the face honesty kind of moment, that you might want your brother back the same way. Cause, what does that make you then, right?
I am pmsing and I have cried over all the chapters, up to and including this one, but I cannot find any fault in anything.
Tom's painful thinking hurt to read and if Bill had even an inkling of his mental despair, it would seriously make me wanna question Bill's own because it's not fair to blame everything on one half of the equation.
But he was finally a man and I'm just sorry it almost took Tom's losing his mind and making himself practically ill before something gave on Bill's end.
Loving it, loving it and slowly making my way through your whole resume of fics.
I love your twins and can only hope to write an 1/8 of how you do it, because I also like the emotional, fucked up aspect of things.
Date: 04/05/09 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is SO good! I love it! Keep writing!
Date: 10/26/08 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm in love with this story. You cannot abandon it! It would be sacrilege.
Date: 09/30/08 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh wow, this is beautiful, seriously. i love the pace and the feel of it. seriously good stuff. you have to continue it - things are just getting good. ;)
Date: 09/02/08 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 5
I am very sorry to hear you are going on hiatus. I really really like this story. You write very well and this is exactly the kind of angst and turmoil i like. I hope your life settles down so you can start writing again soon. Please keep up the good work. :)
Date: 08/04/08 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 5
oh pls pls update!!! :D
Date: 07/04/08 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 5
You finally updated!!! This story is still so good ^^ and I still absolutely love Tom in this. And it looks like the drama is finally over -- success!
Date: 06/28/08 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 5
I am really loving this. Please continue. Your writing style is clever and has this cool, sarcastic edge to Tom's thoughts that I really enjoy. It's interesting and different. Refreshing. Kudos to you.
Now go write more please. :DDDD
Author's Response: lol, i'm on it stat. i've made some good headway. no more 3 month long waits, huzzah!rnrnthank you! =) clever cool et sarcastic is what i aim for! glad i'm not failing at life. xx
Date: 06/27/08 01:38 am Title: Chapter 5
wow, GOD, that was amazing
more soon?
Author's Response: if i continue how i've been these past few days (typing away like a maniac), i should have the next chapter up by next week (this long deadline allowing for the slothdom to which i'm prone). =P i'm glad everyone's liking the ride SQN's turned out to be. frankly, i'm shocked! xx
Date: 06/25/08 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 5
I lol'ed so hard at 'She wanted my soul' xD Fantastic! Your writing is awesome and so funny. Keep it up!
Author's Response: that was a fave line of mine, too. aw tanks, dude! shucks.
Date: 06/25/08 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 5
Good and BAD??... i think not, just all GOOD =)
I love this story btw. You are just such an amzing writer, like holy fuck. Its so in depth and profound, almost, that i have to concentrate so hard to understand(not that its a bad thing):P Its actually a really good thing, becuase i love reading things that make me think, and this one definitly does.
Wow. I can't even begin to explain how much i love this plot. Its so...not like anything that has been done before.
The tension between the twins is so intense and frustrating(in a good way) that it makes you hang on to every word and want more and more.
And now that they are finally breaking through the denial and wrongness of it all i can't wait to see how their relationship unfolds.
I don't know if i've ever reviewed this before. I guess i could go check, but I'm just too lazy XD, but if i haven't I'm sorry, but sometimes fics are just so good that they leave me speechless, and this one defintly does, sometimes. =)
I can't wait for the next update, which i hope will be soon ;)
Danke,
Andi
Author's Response: WOW. thanks just doesn't seem adequate. what can i gal possibly say to the mammothness of your review? it means so much, you've got no idea, or maybe you do. i'm glad you appreciate SQN (the pain in my ass i've grown quite fond of). i think you HAVE reviewed before, fyi. rnrni started writing this with no hope of it amounting to anything close to profound OR deep, so that's HUGE! gracias merci danke and thanks again.
Date: 06/25/08 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
Sooo goood.
Yet, somehow I don't really understand who's talking. There may be Bill's line, and in that same paragraph Tom's actions, I get lost LOL.
But apart from writing tech, the plot it good and I can't wait to know what happens next :)
Author's Response: ooh mayne, that's sucktalk. i'll try harder to make things clearer next chapter. thanks for the heads up. xx
Date: 06/25/08 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 5
Yey, you updated! I loved this chapter, it was amazing. Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: and more you shall get, most deserving reviewer. xx
Date: 06/25/08 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 5
*evil grin* I think it's cute! >=] I love this! It's just too good! I love the playful banter in this chapter. =]Someone edgy XD... *crossing my fingers and wishing for more*
Author's Response: *big cheesy smile* haha, yes, Bill is an edgy beast. no need for crossed fingers. more'll come sooner rather than later, or feel free to find and throw things. xx
Date: 06/25/08 10:55 am Title: Chapter 5
Just read your whole story and I'm hooked now:-p Pretty well written, totally love it.
The tension between them. I wonder how they are going to go from there ;-)
You update soon because I want to now how this will go on ;-)
Author's Response: yay, another fan! i'm glad you like it. an update is on the way! next week is the deadline i've set. hope i don't disappoint. xx
Date: 06/25/08 05:12 am Title: Chapter 5
I like manipulative Bill... ))))
the girl inviting herself into Tom's Escalade is a sacrilage!! )))
Author's Response: manipulative Bill is good fun and secretly Tom thinks it's hot. aha, Tom should purify the area when she's gone.
Date: 06/25/08 03:11 am Title: Chapter 1
I cannot even believe you updated! I thought you abandoned it and took it off my favs. Thank goodness I saw this chapter. I can't tell you why I love this because there are too many reasons. It's your style, your words, the feeling that comes through, the atmospher, all of it. So, so glad to hear that exams are over. Looking forward to a summer full of you!
Date: 06/25/08 01:17 am Title: Chapter 5
I choked on air when I refreshed the page and saw this lovely thing updated. I squealed and cheered and everything. This chapter had me laughing, going aww, and wanting to hit Andreas, Bill and Tom over the head. Marvelous work. I think we could all take more angst if it were as funny as this.
I don't care how long it took, I'm just glad we got it. All good things are worth the wait, and this is no exception.
Author's Response: awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. fuk my wut, is that all i can manage? rnrnbut you're so sweet, i love you. *hugs* thank you! xx