Date: 07/05/11 05:14 pm Title: Delta 3
Is that a new banner? Bill looks really hot! ;)
Date: 07/05/11 10:23 am Title: Delta 3 and Andi
Ah, poor Tom and Bill. That's quite the bond.
Author's Response: I know, all will be well I hope ... :P
Date: 07/05/11 05:58 am Title: Delta 3 and Andi
This is brilliant! and i missed the banner >.< it was removed cause it was oversized? x.x
I loved how Tom craves Bill and i hate the fact poor Billa cant speak but his actions make up for the lack of a voice! :3 hope you update soon!
Author's Response: I'm useless at anything to do with images on computers :P all fixed now though I'm hoping. Thanks very much for the review!
Date: 07/05/11 05:52 am Title: Delta 3 and Andi
Lol, how can having food delivered be a bad thing?
Also, it's surprising that a high position man like Joseph would be there for the delivery. I'd have thought that was "below" him.
I just read all four chapters in one shot :3 Very amazing story.
Also, I saw your banner was removed. Tough luck, but.. just shrink it a little and it'll be gut :)
Author's Response: Yeah, Josephs arrival will be explained in the next chapter. Thanks very much for the review more soon, I promise.
Date: 07/05/11 05:31 am Title: Delta 3 and Andi
I'm hooked already! Omg updaaaate :D
Author's Response: Thanks :D update due in a couple days.
Date: 07/05/11 04:49 am Title: Delta 3 and Andi
I tend to avoid first-person-perspective-fics but this one has an awesome plot. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I tend to avoid writing them :P I dont know how this one ended up that way i just wrote the first chapter and I felt as though it kind of worked. :D
Date: 07/05/11 04:27 am Title: Delta 3 and Andi
Nice one! I really like Andi.
Author's Response: Me too, I just want to cuddlle him.
Date: 07/05/11 02:26 am Title: Delta 3 and Andi
this is a really good story!!
i can'it wait for the rest!:)
Author's Response: Thanks very much,I can't wait to write it ! :P
Date: 07/05/11 01:13 am Title: Delta 3 and Andi
I adore this.
Author's Response: And I adore you for reviewing :D thanks so much.
Date: 07/05/11 12:58 am Title: Delta 3 and Andi
This is fantastic. I just thought that I'd let you know that. (In case you didn't know.)
Author's Response: I didn't know, :P i'm still very nervous about publishing what I write. When I started I was pretty sucky at it.
Date: 07/04/11 11:04 pm Title: Delta 3 and Andi
Aww that was cute! I loved Tom's reaction to the first time Bill slept in the same bed. The situation with Andi was just way to funny and I just love Bill. He's too cute! I'm curious as to why Tom's day turned out so shitty but I hope it get's better for him.
Date: 07/04/11 10:45 pm Title: Delta 3 and Andi
Aww Tomi just can't seem to get any alone time with Bill. Oh well, I lovers Bill :D
Date: 07/03/11 09:17 pm Title: Delta 3 and the sleep over
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Date: 07/02/11 03:54 pm Title: Delta 3 and the sleep over
Fantastic fanfiction! I'm tracking your story :)
Date: 07/02/11 02:43 pm Title: Delta 3 and the sleep over
Hm, Bill would be a very interesting addition to a household. I wonder if Tom has ever been to a house that has an adaiden before?
Date: 07/02/11 08:09 am Title: Delta 3 and the sleep over
I absolutely loved it! It's nice to read something in the first person that is actually believable. Good job and keep em coming!
Date: 07/02/11 07:27 am Title: Delta 3 and the sleep over
this is just getting better and better.
Date: 07/02/11 05:43 am Title: Delta 3
Hello again,
Yes, I do write a story as well so I know how much reviews can motivate you. So first of – don’t put yourself under pressure. It is your story – if you feel it’s right than it is. And I like it the way it is.
I can understand Tom someone watching over me without me even seeing him would creep my out too.^^
Tom must have a great amount of self-control – going next to Bill without looking or as in my case staring at him.^^
Well an ugly cage in my living room would piss me off too. Right there with you Tom.
Oh – Bill is so cuuute (now I can officially call him that^^) How could Tom ever look him away? Well okay, I know why he was afraid.
Haha, Tom is cute as well running upstairs and then not a moment later running back.
OMG – Bill crying silently – poor thing!
“Oh, I’m such a bastard! What reason do I have to be scared? I’m not the one chained up in a strange house, with the dick I was just forced to sign my life away to” – I love this sentence.
Finally Tom comforts Bill. Hehe, I think it’s so funny that Tom is always so concerned if he looks gay but doesn’t even realize that he keeps starring at a naked GUY – which in my opinion is a little gayer than comforting someone.
Hehe, yeah we all know Bills self satisfied smirks^^
How cute Tom brings Bill to bed – knuffig (is the German word for: cuddly) – cause I was out of new English words. I’m from Austria so my vocabulary isn’t that big.
Hehe, what a dream – I’d like to have such dreams!
Very sweet how the go to bed together! I can’t wait till the next chapter.
Thanks for writing that quickly! So if you don’t get any reviews from me the rest of this month – please don’t think I lost my interest. I’m just going to be on vacation – in the USA actually… YEAH!
Thanks for writing!
Date: 07/02/11 05:11 am Title: Delta 3 and the sleep over
Aww I love how Tom came up with the name! But wait did Bill have the same dream too? And I wish Bill could talk D: I wanna know so bad what he's thinking and feeling and what he'd say to Tom and all that.
Date: 07/02/11 05:02 am Title: Delta 3 and me
still liking this :D I'm glad Tom is so protective of Delta 3. It'd be sad if he didn't give a shit like I'm sure others didn't.