Date: 08/17/12 05:04 am Title: Chapter 20-Surprise!
Ohnoooo! Why now?! Why do ya stop now...? :(
Date: 06/13/12 01:53 am Title: Chapter 11-Fear
This is a very intense story! I'm wondering if Caelan is actually the mastermind behind the entire thing, the true boss of this nasty crew. You write very well -- the story has excellent flow, the characters and emotions are very realistic. Although, Tom is depressing the hell out of me because he's being such a selfish jerk, daaaamn!
Date: 08/01/11 02:39 am Title: Chapter 20-Surprise!
Cliff. Hanger. This story is pretty awesome.
Date: 07/22/11 11:10 am Title: Chapter 20-Surprise!
OMG I want more!! it was so aweseome :3 I love it and I'll wait for next story ^.^
Date: 07/22/11 09:27 am Title: Chapter 8-Understanding
aaaa he is gonna rape Biiiiill! ;_;
Date: 07/22/11 08:46 am Title: Chapter 4-Caelan
OMG poor Bill :O
Date: 07/22/11 08:05 am Title: Chapter 2-Questions
Its intersetiiiiiiing! :3
Date: 07/22/11 07:55 am Title: Chapter 1-Wishes
:D sounds cool!
Date: 07/21/11 07:46 am Title: Chapter 20-Surprise!
Holy shitt!!!
this is so good that my tummy is hurting
can t wait for da next one:D
Date: 07/19/11 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 20-Surprise!
quièn es?!!!!!!!!!!!!! loca loca x el sgte capii!!! :)
Date: 07/19/11 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 20-Surprise!
oh my god! this story keeps me on my toes it's so good! this was a good plot line and very well written. :D great story!
Date: 07/19/11 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 20-Surprise!
so suspenseful!
I can't wait for the next one!
Date: 07/19/11 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 20-Surprise!
awesome story
please put the next one up soon
Date: 07/19/11 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 20-Surprise!
Oh. My. God. As far as cliffhangers go this is pretty epic. I love this fic for how well you've written Bill's mindset both during and after, and I hope that carries on.
Date: 07/19/11 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 8-Understanding
woa this was really a good story
i couldn`t stop reading it ;)
Date: 07/19/11 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 20-Surprise!
OMG
You leave me with this cliffhanger!!!
It's amazing
Date: 07/19/11 02:20 am Title: Chapter 19-Missing
se me rompe el corazòn....
Date: 07/18/11 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 19-Missing
how long for the last flashback to this flashback?
it sounds like he went forward through time
looking forward to the last chapter
Date: 07/18/11 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 19-Missing
A quien le debe tener mas miedo Bill, a Kenny o a Chris...es que estos dos estan totalmente enfermos! Pobre Bill :(
Date: 07/18/11 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 19-Missing
Still so gripping!