Date: 07/18/11 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 19-Missing
I actually feel really sorry for Kenny. I don't know if that was your intention or not, but my heart hurts for him almost the way it does for Bill.
Date: 07/18/11 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 18-A Problem
That sounds so twisted: "I totally know who I'm gonna kill" But still awesome and gripping and bone chilling!
Date: 07/18/11 07:06 am Title: Chapter 18-A Problem
As much as I don't want this to happen, I think Caelan dies. I think he'll fight back against Chris and Chris will kill him. That's just my ideas though.
This is a fantastic story. And always very quickly updated which is a major bonus.
Date: 07/17/11 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 18-A Problem
Oh damn, that's one hell of a cliffhanger. Not fair! I'm so glad that Caelan was active in helping Bill escape, for all he seems to have played a pretty big part in keeping him there too.
Date: 07/17/11 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 18-A Problem
va s a matar a kenny? :D me da miedo lo de la amenaza....
seguirè todos tus capis y series :D
Date: 07/17/11 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 18-A Problem
whats "the Problem"
please update soon
Date: 07/17/11 08:59 am Title: Chapter 17-More Questions
I hate cliffhangers!! AHH.. lol I can't wait for more!
Date: 07/17/11 01:57 am Title: Chapter 17-More Questions
Well, I liked it. Question in my mind at the moment is whether Bill is actually going to be able to talk to anyone about what happened.
Date: 07/16/11 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 17-More Questions
please update soon
Im really liking this fanfic
your a good writer
Date: 07/16/11 01:16 am Title: Chapter 16-Damage
le va ahcer m`s daño ese desgraciado? y ese estùpido detective se atreviò a gritarle? menos mal estaba Tom allì y lo echò...
en spera del prox capi
me encanta:D
Date: 07/16/11 12:00 am Title: Chapter 16-Damage
OH NOOOOO, poor Bill :'(
great job so far! But I didn't want a serieeeeees :( I wanna know how it all works out! XD
Date: 07/15/11 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 16-Damage
Oh God O.O I'm not very good writing English, 'cause I'm from Argentina ;) but i'm becoming fucking crazy to understand this fic 'cause it's amazing. Wow, I feel all the pain that Bill felt. And Tom... he's fantastic!! I really love him, more than in other TWC fic. I like Caelan, I just don't wanna think what 'they' are doing to him now.
Well, I don't know if you'll understand my review, just know that I'll be waiting for the next chap
Author's Response: I understood it perfectly:) Thank you
Date: 07/15/11 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 16-Damage
You are such an amazing writer!
Every moment I am right there with the characters!!!
Amazing!
Thank You
Date: 07/15/11 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 16-Damage
0.0
Please update ASAP
Date: 07/15/11 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 16-Damage
Ok now I'm lost Is stockholm syndrom about Bill really ?
Or is it about this Caelan guy ?
Chris is such a weird leader and I don't get his behavior
If he had a thing, some kind of obession with Bill and kidnapped him as some kind of trophy to show: how and why would he even agree that others rape Bill ??
It's not logic !
It shows he's not able to tame him and had the others to help him
After that, Bill has escaped: he knows where Bill live and all stuff: why stay free and not hidden ?
Why just stand in da shadows like some hawk watching his prey ? Just for the pleasure to play on Bill's nerves.
Really to me it sounds so strange
Author's Response: I understand your confusion, some of it may come from just the way I like to leave things for others to figure out. But I will address some of your questions in this one rather than waiting for the next story in the series. Just be patient with me:)
Date: 07/15/11 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 16-Damage
Like Bill, I was there thinking that Chris wouldn't have let them touch his little brother. The surprises just keep coming. Kenny though... at this rate I'm worried he's going to get himself killed for hurting Bill. This fic is full of a kind of slow-burning horror that lingers for ages afterward. I like.
Date: 07/15/11 01:34 am Title: Chapter 15-Everything
oh noooo pobechito mi Billito ,( esos malditos lo han hecho sufrir un montòn a aùn a `peasr que ya no està al aldo de eelos lo siguen atormentando.... sigue actualizando q em encanta tu historia :D
Date: 07/14/11 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 15-Everything
Fantastic. This story has the impact of a freight train crashing through a guard rail. I like how you feed us a bit of both stories--now and then--a little bit at a time. Although frustrating (in a nail-biter way)for the reader, a great strategy for an accomplished writer. Thoroughly enjoyable!