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Reviewer: mrsjennakaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/26/11 12:17 am Title: Chapter 1

this is a wonderful start. it's so serious, and it's great of you to use Tom as the central character. just work on the grammar a bit and this will be great.

Reviewer: Samantha Grace Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/11 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is really great :) but um, there are a lot of grammar mistakes making it hard to read.

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