Date: 05/03/15 03:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Ojhhhhmygod WOW. This was incredibly intense! Such good writing. It's even scarier how it is kind of written in little glimpses between Bill falling out of consciousness. And how Tom noticed the window at the end and knew instantly. But oh man i am so glad he checked the garage instead of giving up because if he hadn't found Bill then..oh man this was really heartbreaking. It is a shame it ended there and we never found out what happened when Bill woke up. But i guess i can imagine it was really heartbreaking for Tom.
Date: 01/03/15 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
and? what happened to Bill
great story from a great movie (although you can only see i once cause of the ending)
Date: 12/28/14 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Somewhat ok?' Dude, this was ducking amazing!
Date: 11/23/12 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Please one more chapter
Date: 06/29/11 02:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Seriously?!?!? A one shot? PLEASE think about more, i'm not too proud to beg *on knees begging* This is too good to stop here....
Date: 06/28/11 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This cannot be the end! Please continue!
So Amazing and trapping that one is locked right in the moment!
Date: 06/26/11 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. That was intense. Poor Bill! And bad Tom for leaving the window open! Very good job writing!
Date: 06/26/11 10:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Why do they all insist on learning the hard way?
Date: 06/26/11 06:00 am Title: Chapter 1
great job I love it
Date: 06/25/11 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
D: ohmygod I'm like shitting in my pants now. My family ALWAYS leaves our garage window open year round
Date: 06/25/11 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Omg! Why you stopped it there?! Poor Bill!
Date: 06/25/11 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
As gut wrenching as this was. It was pretty good.
Date: 06/25/11 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Mm, I loved this little story. Really makes you think... :(
Date: 06/25/11 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Holy crap! That was such an amazing one-shot. Just... wow. Great work! Enjoyed reading it a lot
Date: 06/25/11 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ouch, Tom is gonna have some serious quilt issues after this. D:
Date: 06/25/11 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Tom, you idiot ¬¬ This was awesome, in the most amazingly sadistic way possible :D I enjoyed ^^
Date: 06/25/11 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
As disturbing & heartwrenching as this is, it is really really good. Nicely written =)
Date: 06/25/11 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
O.M.G. Thats really good. :O
Date: 06/25/11 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was totally cool! I wish it was longer xD I love it :3