Date: 07/02/11 04:22 am Title: Chapter 1
It was nice to read. :o) They are all cute in your story. :-D Especially Gustav at the end. :-D Thank you J.:o)
Date: 06/27/11 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love this story! Please write more like this!
Author's Response: Haha, thank you. I'm considering it, but I usually need something to trigger the story, like finding a huge spider in the shower the morning I wrote this. I'm going camping tomorrow, so maybe...haha.
Date: 06/27/11 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Adorable! I can actually imagine the twins getting someone to kill spiders for them.
Date: 06/26/11 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love it when people write this sort of story, they're just cute and funny, i like it. I also like that someone wrote Gustav as a main character, not many people do. the only thing i would coment on is that Gustav isn't the oldest but that doesn't really matter, it was a cool story :)
Author's Response: Thank you =)rnIt was an interesting writing experiment for me because I tend to neglect the G's for the twins (as most writers on this site do). rnIn my head, Gustav is the oldest, so I always make that mistake. For some reason, I just can't wrap my head around Georg being the oldest. No idea why, haha.rnThank you for the comment and the compliment =)
Date: 06/26/11 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw!
Poor, Gusti, scared of worms.
But he is also a big brave spider killer, so that's okay :3
Date: 06/26/11 05:30 am Title: Chapter 1
AHHHHHAHAHA
LOOL
Yeah, I hate worms and spiders, too. They just kind of-ew. Whatever, poor Gusti... xD Guess he turned out not to be as fearless as he seemed... xD
BTW, nicely written. ;)
Author's Response: Haha, I don't think anyone is truly fearless. Thank you so much <3
Date: 06/26/11 12:06 am Title: Chapter 1
XD That was funny.
Date: 06/25/11 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
When Bill eats gummy worms, he's probably fascinated and revolted at the same time.
Author's Response: Haha, that's a cute image =D
Date: 06/25/11 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
*giggles* That was cute! My roomates to, always come to me when they want me to kill a spider for them! XD
Author's Response: Haha, it was my grandma this morning who had the kill the spider for me, but it's usually my sister's who get that honour =) Thanks for the review
Date: 06/25/11 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
aww, this was so cute!! i love the titles that Bill is handing out!!!
Author's Response: Haha, it seemed a very Bill thing to do. Thank you for the review =)
Date: 06/25/11 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lmfao you had me rolling with laughter. Shit, spiders are fucking creepy as hell. I scream whenever I see them. Yet, I fucking love daddy long legs. I love holding them. lmfao I love worms. I used to play with them and call them my pets as a child. I find it hilarious that Gustav is afraid of them. I am also nervous for Tom and his nickname. Maybe he'll get the same treatment Gustav got whenever there was a spider. lmfao great story:D
Author's Response: I hate all spiders, haha. I had to think of a similar insect for Gustav to be afraid of and for some reason, I immediately thought worm. I'm thinking he will. Thank you for the compliment and I'm happy you liked it.