Date: 01/31/13 08:41 pm Title: Out of the Fire
Shit, this just got interesting.
Date: 10/23/11 09:22 am Title: Out of the Fire
I hope life gives you some time off to add on to this soon :P
BTW, your sex-legged bunny... is that how it's pronounced? If not, I still picture it as that. LOL!
And I loved their marriage ceremony - so full of fight and fire and spirit :) A union of warriors.
Date: 10/23/11 08:20 am Title: Come Together
Wow! You should write screenplay! I'd go see your movies! I'd whimper and hide behind my hands and whomever that happens to be convenient during the scary and gory parts, but I'd watch your movies.
Date: 10/23/11 01:51 am Title: I Smell the Blood
Oh gosh! This gave me goosebumps!
Date: 09/24/11 01:37 pm Title: Out of the Fire
Ibil, bil bil, whoring for a death. come on Tom, give him something much better than death!
Date: 09/19/11 10:06 am Title: Out of the Fire
Poor Bill. Why is Tom so adamant that Bill doesn't know that the Gods want Tom to love him? I know how he feels but I don't see why Bill can't know. *shrug* At least they've made a sort of peace, and are working towards a common goal. *snuggles*
Date: 09/17/11 07:17 am Title: Out of the Fire
So they are "married" now? :D "Until death parts us" :) That was quick :)
Canīt wait for next chapter. Are you planning something to update tomorrow? You are very productive lately :)
Author's Response:
Pretty much. More than Tom ever intended to be, I'm sure.
rnHahaha! I wish! Sadly not. Most of these are things I haven't been able to post until now... but I write nearly every day, on something!
Date: 09/17/11 05:46 am Title: Out of the Fire
aww its so cool!!! I love it :3 waitin for more!
Author's Response:
You and me both, sister! I'm so glad you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it!
Date: 09/17/11 04:06 am Title: Out of the Fire
;_; Poor Bill. I was honestly tearing up in the latter half.
That aside, I like the name Ibil :3 It reminds me of 'ibis'.
Bill and Tom. Till death do they part. *wry smile*
As for critique, you did type Bill's name once. "Imagine, for just one second, what it is to lose everything!" Bill spat.
(Although, wait, Tom did say he would call him that for short...)
Aaaand, there are a bunch of times you didn't use a capital 'T' when referring to the gods. So maybe skim through again.
I'm so glad you updated this! :) You really know how to write emotion.
Author's Response:
Ibis is a beautiful word and name. <3 As usual, Tom's Mama's gonna be the one to really start the ball rolling, and that includes calling Ibil 'Bill'. He's a human being, not a gourd Tom, damn.
rnIT'S SO TRUE even if they don't realize it just yet...
rnFixed and fixed and fixed some more! Thank you!
rnI'm glad you enjoyed it! <3
Date: 09/17/11 03:13 am Title: Out of the Fire
oh, how i miss this little jewel!!!
i'm glad you updated.
Author's Response:
I'm glad I did too! And yet gladder that you enjoy this so very much <3
Date: 09/16/11 05:41 pm Title: Awaken
By the way, this is painfully good too. I'm afraid to keep reading it and more afraid that you're going to abandon it.
*sigh*
You know I just recently re-watched "The Last Unicorn" and came to the following conclusion: it's better when you're ten.
"HOW DARE YOUUUUU!" Sheesh, relax Molly!
Author's Response:
Dude, thanks! And no worries. It may take me until I'm 30, but I hate abandoning stories!
rnThe kids I care for know it as Red Bulls, and it is the only part they like, haha. They think the Red Bull is so cute, and you know, I kinda agree.
Date: 08/02/11 09:13 am Title: Awaken
That rubbed me all wrong. For once, that actually rubbed me all wrong. I am a broken, empty, vessel. I get that Tom was being realistic. Shit still hurt, nonetheless.
And for the record, no clue what The Last Unicorn is.
Author's Response:
I'm suprised more of my stuff hasn't, tbh. I write some terrible shit, mang.
rnhttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TdsmqwCRoM8
rnGreat movie, def. check it out.
Date: 08/02/11 09:02 am Title: Come Together
Ok, my memory is failing me so hard now I'm trying not to cry but that whole scene sorta played out like in the first LOTR movie where Galadriel was trying to tell Frodo what would happen if he gave her the ring.
Tom's little song at the start made me smile because I was picturing you rather than Tom singing it. Odd, isn't it?
Date: 08/02/11 08:51 am Title: Culminating
Oh god why... Simone...
Date: 08/02/11 08:44 am Title: The Beginning of the End
After all the intense coiling and uncoiling of my insides, your end note literally snaps the tension.
Excellent use of commas :-) I'm somewhat fond of them myself.
And your Oracle - I don't envy him for the responsibility he has on his shoulders. Standing alone, bearing all that weight, all that pain, all that guilt; each of it palpable. I feel it.
Date: 07/13/11 04:35 pm Title: Awaken
PS: Oh my gosh. If you ever decide to have a banner for this, do you think you could let me know? I'd love to do it. I make banners for my own, so you can see.
Author's Response:
I would love that more than you would know! And if you ever get the inkling for any of my others, please indulge!
rnMy email's leichenwasser@gmail.com if you need to contact me/post me the banner!
rnI'M SO EXCITED /squeals like a Tom
Date: 07/13/11 04:31 pm Title: Awaken
Poor Bill D: I understand; he can't sink any lower. The absolute worst has already happened to him.
Hehe, so happy you updated this. I found your twitter last night and you said something about having a bunch of docs open ;) I love this world you've created.
Date: 07/13/11 12:40 pm Title: Awaken
i love this story. i love Tobi here too. and Tom should be a bit nicer- Bill's lost everything!! no need to kick a man when he's down.