Date: 06/23/11 05:59 am Title: Come Together
Holy crap O.O That was almost confusing.
Oh god >.< Utterly horrible. I cannot even think of an adjective sad enough. I was (as was probably your intention) really attached to the Oracle. To hear that he died so hideously is just... ugh. Again, can't find a word -.-
I don't understand much more than Tom. Is he supposed to take the body? Are they actually alive again, or only in spirit?
this effects me as it does > *affects
"One God," he choked > I assume it's supposed to be "Oh, God"
And remember it's spelled "sepArate", with an 'a'.
Oh yeah, and "its", to signify possession, is always without an apostrophe.
Lol, all things to make your already perfect writing, punctuationally so!
Author's Response:
Hurray! SHIT'S CONFUSING. Because Gods can be jerks sometimes.
rnWow! I'm really happy to hear that. I was worried that it would make little to no impact. So to hear that your heart is broken... IS AWESOME.
rnNext chapter, most of those questions will be answered!
rnThank you, thank you, THANK YOU for all your help!
Date: 06/23/11 05:40 am Title: Culminating
D:
(before he'd even taken down a one of them)
Author's Response:
D: x 2
rnIs that a correction? Haha, it's a mite late.
Date: 06/23/11 05:34 am Title: The Beginning of the End
I'm not sure, but I *think* the T's are supposed to be capitalized here? -- it was like standing beside them, hand in hand, in their arms.
That was an interesting dream. And OH SNAP indeed. Eep!
Author's Response:
Thank you, yes!
Date: 06/23/11 05:27 am Title: I Smell the Blood
Gah! I had a similar reaction when he cut his palm D:
War... This is interesting because I just got done watching Chronicles of Narnia, which of course has battles in it.
All I can say is: Oh goodness DX
Author's Response:
Yeah... ouch! You idiot. Apparently being a prophet doesn't keep you from being stupid.
rnHahaha! Narnia, LotR, lots of great movies being drawn into this!
rnYIKES!
Date: 06/23/11 05:16 am Title: What Dreams May Come
Seed cake, lecker.
Lol, that dream sounds so hinting at the pairing XD
Author's Response:
One of my faves from childhood, hahaha.
rn/cough/ I KNOW NOTHING
Date: 06/23/11 05:13 am Title: This is a Foreign Land
Lol, that's a really big palanquin if two people can fit in it and there's a window. Usually litters are enclosed. But it also sounds like it's a stationary room, with the view being the same. I guess it's not being carried around.
And I second the "write a book" idea :DD Sometime in life, maybe
Author's Response:
Ah! Maybe that's what I meant, litter? Dammit. ಠ_ಠ
rnReally! Even with all my fudges? XD
rn
Date: 06/23/11 01:27 am Title: This is a Foreign Land
*hasn't read the fic yet*
You goof. Starting another story which is sure to be awesome XDD And uploading six chapters at once? Whaaaat?
Okay, I'll read it now.
Author's Response:
I know. I'm a jerq. :( I PROPHECIED THIS IN MY BIO, SWEAR
rn6 short little weenie chapters :/
rn/bites nails
Date: 06/23/11 12:11 am Title: This is a Foreign Land
Damn, I love it!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
IDK you didn't use a lot of exclamation points
rnj/k I'm so glad you're digging it! KEEP ON DIGGIN' MY FRIEND
Date: 06/22/11 11:58 pm Title: Come Together
I'm loving this story *-*
Its so freaking awesome and full of goodiness :D
Author's Response:
Why thank you kindly! Hope I can keep you coming 'round!
Date: 06/22/11 09:57 pm Title: This is a Foreign Land
Also, I just need to fangirl over the summery some more. ASDFGHJKLKVD Can you read it at our wedding? ;0)
Love Torrie
Author's Response:
I AM SO GLAD IT SOUNDS AWESOME because in my head I was like LOL OH KIT, OH YOU, YOU GUY /indulgent smile
Date: 06/22/11 09:55 pm Title: Come Together
Dude. I totally listened to the Lord of the Rings soundtrack whilst reading this. It somehow made it even more amazing. Will you just marry me already?
Btw, you win all of the awards.
Love, Torrie
Ps Speaking of LotR, mhmmm, Legolas and Aragron.
Author's Response:
Awwwwww shit, composing the score already, best make that shit all epic and sweeping
rnI will check with my wife.
rnI was always a Glorfindel/Erestor kind of guy myself.
Date: 06/22/11 07:50 pm Title: I Smell the Blood
You know that much pressure put on someone like me would make me trip and kill over before the first enemy sword is drawn.
Author's Response:
Gurl, I wouldn't have even left the Temple, fuck Fate, that shit sounds nasty
Date: 06/22/11 07:45 pm Title: What Dreams May Come
Oh yeah I forgot,
FIRST!
Author's Response:
HIGH FIVE BRO
Date: 06/22/11 07:41 pm Title: This is a Foreign Land
You should really publish a book.
Id buy it ten times over. Amazing summery, awesome first chapter.
Author's Response:
So my mother tells me.
rnDude, I love that you're so effusive over the summary, haha! I apologize for the weird pacing and length of chapters D: