Date: 07/13/11 12:38 pm Title: Awaken
Tom speaks Bills language? Where did he learnt it? Interesting.... Tom is so hard and stubborn, with some bad memories - you hinted something about his past... I am curious what had made him the person he is now. I think Bill is a cure for his cold heart :-)
And Bill.... poor boy, I can imagine how lost must he feel, how empty...without his gods, alone in foreign land. And with Tom, who isnīt very friendly to him...
"What am I meant to do with someone like that, hm? " here I had to smile :-) Tom doesnīt know it yet, but he will love this someone :D And I am sure he would know what to do with him then :) But I am afraid that it will take some time, Bill is so lifeless now and I doubt Tom had sympathy for his state, so I only hope Tom would not be very hard with him.
Date: 07/13/11 11:24 am Title: Awaken
Well the Gods did a number on Bill didn't they. I'm curious as how Tom and Bill can understand each other, and am looking forward to Tom explaining what happened in the Temple tent. I hate to think that Bill thinks Tom was one of the men who violated him, it's going to take some careful tending to bring him back to life and Tom seems very reluctant to do so. *sigh* You are a tempting temptery thing and I don't know why I let you do this to me! *pouts prettily*
Date: 07/13/11 10:55 am Title: Come Together
Holy Mother....geez Kit, talk about intense. Poor Tom, that'd frighten the fuck out of anyone. As much as I didn't want to I could easily imagine the sand dunes littered with the dead and the ruins of the camp. The eerie quiet and the wind fluttering the scraps of tent. I love your descriptions, it's so alive and vivid, something that I crave when I read and try to achieve when I write. I bow down to your greatness Master Kitty Kat. *shoves you in my pouch*
Date: 07/13/11 10:35 am Title: Culminating
No no no no no no He can't be the sacrifice! I know what the prophecy said about one dying and one living but I am not happy here! *grumbles* Finding out that your mother is the woman dying in your arms would be fairly traumatic, can't blame him for going all righteous on their asses. *nods*
Date: 07/13/11 10:10 am Title: The Beginning of the End
Ohhh no, not good. Can't leave anything substantial need more!! *quick snuggles*
Date: 07/13/11 09:43 am Title: I Smell the Blood
Nnnngh this has me quivering, I can smell the fear and feel the ripple of anticipation of the people. I gasped when the Prophet cut his hand and spilled his blood. I'm so anxious wondering when/what/who is involved in the prophecy. *skips to next chapter*
Date: 07/13/11 08:19 am Title: Awaken
You sneaky bugger. you just WHAM come and post an update without any warning...
Moving swiftly along...You know i adore you right?
GO TEAM RED BULL...
Date: 07/13/11 08:07 am Title: What Dreams May Come
What a rather cold life for the Prophet, no real relationships or life, to be nothing but a receptacle for the Gods. I am really curious as to what the dreams and the prophecy entail, and how the Prophet will handle the failure of his faith.
Date: 07/13/11 07:58 am Title: Awaken
WTH dude? Way to not inform us of your update. Are you too good for us now. Well, I wouldn't blame you, what with all those mad writing skillz you got there.
Love Torrie and stuff.
Date: 07/13/11 07:54 am Title: This is a Foreign Land
This is amazing, the imagery is so vivid, I swear I could feel the heat of the sun and see the wide expanse of sand and nothingness. Brilliant darling, I love the depth you have woven in this already and I'm thoroughly sucked in. Kudos *smooshes*
Date: 07/13/11 06:12 am Title: I Smell the Blood
What have you weaved here, dear heart? I feel like I'm being swept away into an epic battle or something. I can see each scene as it plays out in my head.
And I still desperately want to give the boy a hug...
Date: 07/13/11 05:54 am Title: What Dreams May Come
I wanna cuddle him sooooooo badly *whimpers* He seems so alone and in need of proper companionship.
The sweetened seed cake and herbal tea totally made my tummy growl. I'm gonna be hunting for seed cake tomorrow lol.
Date: 06/25/11 01:31 am Title: This is a Foreign Land
I moaned on Twitter about how THF hates me cos it keeps cutting me off and she asked if I was trying to use HTML and turns out I was cos I was trying to draw a heart so she taught me how to draw a real heart ♥ and then I had to delete all my previous lame attempts at reviewing and wondering why it all got cut off!
Glad everything's improved ;-) He is way hotter than a Sith Lord omg... Um slavery? I can see him as a slave in that outfit..... I wish my fic was in 2011 already dammit! I'm still in 2009 lol!
Author's Response:
Hahahaha! Oh you. ♥
rnHe'd be hotter with less holes in his face BUT I STILL LOVE THAT FANCY BITCH
Date: 06/24/11 09:42 am Title: This is a Foreign Land
You say word play turns you on, liebe? Did you give yourself an orgasm writing that first paragraph? ;-)
This chapter excited me. The words, the flow, the storyline! It was almost overwhelming how much you can fit into so little. Don't worry about the short chapters, honig. It felt longer and in a good way. So damn curious as to what's going on! I'm really liking the universe so far ♥
And OT... Bill's Audi outfit. I think I died a thousand deaths. I guarantee that boy will be the death of me........
Missed you today ♥ Hope you got a good sleep after escaping the hovel!
OMFG honig, you have no idea how much stress trying to leave this review gave me lol. When I started reviewing my phone had 20% battery and now it's at 11%. Thanks to fyredancer for clueing me up lol.
Author's Response:
ZING
rnI'm so glad it's getting a positive reception, I was super wary, since this is far and away from other things I've written. D:
rnHE LOOKS LIKE A SITH LORD THANKYOUVERYMUCH
rnI got good sleep, a good meal, and very excellent accomodations. <3 Should be back home on my Sunday/Monday. <3
rnHahaha! I was all excited, thinking I got 80 new reviews XD How did Fyredancer catch it?
Date: 06/24/11 02:43 am Title: Come Together
(reply) Oooo, hehe yeah, maybe for future use. My yahoo messenger thing is celestialchik_86, which I prefer, but I have a msn account, too, which is esheppard90@hotmail.com. I love to talk too but my two friends are busy all the time.
Author's Response:
YIM has been chasing me down, biting me on the buns, but I'mma try to smack it with a newspaper and get that shit under control for you.
rnNGL, my life is like WHAT right now but when it's not I'd love to chat :3
Date: 06/24/11 01:32 am Title: Come Together
(reply) Lol, I'm a Scorpio, so nope, not like the twins. (And are you a Virgo, then?) But I have Asperger's, which is mild autism, and they/we tend to be very precise in things.
Oh geez, this is the fourth review on this chapter XD Hope ya don't mind since I know someone who hates having full convos in her reviews.
Author's Response:
Haha, yep, I am. In for all that it makes a difference, haha.
rnWow, my stories must be a sort of torture for you, then, eh? I don't use a beta, so little things tend to build up, grammar and spelling especially, and I have the weird habit of dropping whole words in a sentence. But I'm really intrigued by that, thank you for telling me.
rnNot at all! I like chatting people up, regardless of when or where. :D If you like, though, there's email and IM programs. :d
Date: 06/23/11 06:25 pm Title: Come Together
(reply) Hehe, alright, then. No problem :) I'm a perfectionist, so in fics that I like, I like to help the author make it totes perfect.
Author's Response:
Oh, are you a Virgo too? Hahaha. I only just started learning about that astrology stuff; apparently Virgos are like that.
rnI really do appreciate it, though; I value an honest opinion and honest criticism! I want to make my stories the best that they can be too!
Date: 06/23/11 12:36 pm Title: Come Together
wow, new story :-)
So this was quite hard for me to understand, there was so much words that I didnīt know before, thanks god for google translator :D
Very, very interesting. Tom is sympathic, after summary I expected someone evil and cruel, but I like him.
So now Bill has black hair? I am glad, because I canīt imagine him with blond hair :)
Now you have so much stories to update, I hope you have time for your personal life... with so much writing... But, thanks :-)
Author's Response:
I know! I think I just might hate myself.
rnYipe! Sorry for that! D:
rnHe's not terribly nice, but he's not evil either. Just a little dumb.
rnYES. Black hairs.
rnLOL WHAT IS A PERSONAL LIFE IS IT SOMETHING YOU EAT
Date: 06/23/11 10:59 am Title: Come Together
Oh SHIT!
Author's Response:
IKR, SHIT WENT DOWN
Date: 06/23/11 06:09 am Title: Come Together
Eepies! I just looked back and feel bad for all the nagging grammar corrections.
Author's Response:
Please don't! In case I haven't impressed this upon you yet, I really appreciate all your help! I owe YOU, if anything!