Date: 06/28/11 02:14 pm Title: Plenheim
Me:*operating a forklift to move something heavy.
"Where do you want all this sugar dumped, ma'am"
There, I gave you sugar. I like how this story was written. My mind is already filling in the events of the 3 missing years without you writing them and I love it.
Author's Response: haha thank you for the sugar! And thats great, I'm glad you liked it! ^^
Date: 06/26/11 07:43 pm Title: Plenheim
I'm grinning like an idiot here! That was fantabulous. :)
Author's Response: thank you! I'm glad you think so :)
Date: 06/25/11 02:53 am Title: Plenheim
Grammer was a bit off but the story was great. I wouldn't mind reading the orginal if you could send me a copy. This was lovely.
Have you ever seen Spirited Away? There's a scene (if you can call it that) when the main character is on a train, pulling out of a train station and as it picks up speed, for half a second the viewer sees a little girl stand on the platform, alone, watching the train leave. There's something about that moment that gets me every time and your story brought back the images as if I had just seen the movie yesterday, although it's been about ten years.
Author's Response: If you want the scans just go ahead and email me and Ill send them right over! :) and yes I have seen Spirited Away, I'm glad you liked this ^^
Date: 06/24/11 03:06 pm Title: Plenheim
No way! I had this in my exams too..ISC?
And I'm Indian too - Famous for it on here. A lot of old Schrei!people know me as Icey the Indian. Which is why I was astonished to see Bond here.
Author's Response: haha yep I'm in 11th grade this year just gave my ICSE ! XD Ima calcuttan girl :3
Date: 06/24/11 03:12 am Title: Plenheim
I adored this, it's beautiful! Thank god Tom found Bill... Does the original story end badly? I'd like to read it!
Author's Response: WYou'd like to read it? :) Please contact me via email I'll send you attatchments with scans of the story! ^^ and I'm so glad you liked it :)
Date: 06/23/11 01:28 pm Title: Plenheim
Well, I read this mostly out of surprise that someone out of India actually knew this story. You've done a good job, and the little changes (like Bill selling the roses instead of the girl with the baskets, and Tom's determination) fit right in for someone who already knows the story too.
I think the ending would have been slightly better unchanged, but you've done a fantastic retelling =)
Author's Response: haha thank you! But well you shouldnt be surprised, bond did live most his life in india and we've read loads of him ^^ believe it or not , this is a part of my school syllabus :)rnOr did you mean someone who lives out of India? XD well uhm if its that I should inform you, I'm Indian all right X)rnWell, I changed the ending cause I wanted it to have a bit of my originality but well yeah, the original sense of mystery that he put into the Night train At Deoli is brilliant!rnAnd thank you so much ^^
Date: 06/23/11 10:05 am Title: Plenheim
This was sweet.
Author's Response: thank you! :)
Date: 06/23/11 02:33 am Title: Plenheim
This story is so CUTEE!! i lovedd it (:
Author's Response: Aww thank you! Glad you found it cute :)
Date: 06/23/11 01:39 am Title: Plenheim
Gosh! it was such a nice fic! I even felt sad when Tom didn't found his flower seller at the station! the line of the story really traps you, it was so nice, simply love it. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Date: 06/23/11 01:13 am Title: Plenheim
Wow, nice job! You really captured a mysterious atmosphere to the story. The tone in this was sort of eery and mystical, and you wrote it through very well. Glad for a happy ending! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Wow I owe ruskin bond a thanks for inspiring this ^^ glad you liked it -hugs for you-
Date: 06/23/11 12:09 am Title: Plenheim
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Author's Response: Im guessing you liked it? :)
Date: 06/22/11 07:19 pm Title: Plenheim
Awwww! That was soo cute! You got me worried when Bill dissappeared!
Author's Response: haha but tom came back for him! :) The story that inspired this the author never finds the girl :/ I'm glad you liked it ^^ I was scared cause of the lack of dialog
Date: 06/22/11 04:02 pm Title: Plenheim
Aww! This is a really beautiful story.
Author's Response: thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 06/22/11 03:48 pm Title: Plenheim
It was really good story :) It made me smile and I needed some fluff :) Thank you for this one :) I'm glad that I can read it :)
Author's Response: I'm glad this story could bring a smile to someone! :) SO glad you liked it ^^ -hugs for you-