Date: 02/21/25 12:27 am Title: The Park
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 06/26/11 10:13 am Title: The Park
Adorable!
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 06/22/11 09:05 pm Title: The Park
This was adorable! I kept hoping that Simone would find the twins all dirty and muddy cuz that would have been funny, but the twins are so cute together! I especially liked the ending you gave it. Definitely pre-twincest. Lol. Well done! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Haha, I didn't even think of adding Simone, I was just too wrapped up in the twins cuteness :) Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 06/22/11 06:22 pm Title: The Park
Aww, this was so cute! Litrtle twins are so adorable every time. :)
Author's Response: They really are xD thanks for your review :)
Date: 06/21/11 06:43 pm Title: The Park
Baby twins *__* I absolutely adore how Tom called Bill "Biu" (kinda like he does now)...it is just incredibly cute, especially coming out of a little kid. I think you did a wonderful job with creating this fluffy atmosphere and making Bill and Tom seem genuine. This made my evening!
Author's Response: Awh thank you! :D I'm really glad that you liked it :)
Date: 06/21/11 05:29 pm Title: The Park
Lol, this was so utterly sweet. I *love* mini!twins :3
I love the whole "miniaturization" of a girl trying to steal Tom away, so usually present in twincest fics XDD
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm really glad you liked it! :)
This is actually the first fic I've written where a girl has really tried to steal Tom away - I think that's pretty funny considering she only wanted to play with him xD
Date: 06/21/11 04:02 pm Title: The Park
An afterthought?
The good thing about bits such as this, is; they give you insight into the author's mind. There is no better glimpse at a writer's technique than when they are trying to form some random mind imagery into cohesive words for others.
I love it.
Author's Response: And as usual, your review made me smile. Thank you, it means a lot that you liked it even when it's as random and short as this was :)
Date: 06/21/11 03:08 pm Title: The Park
That was so adorable! Oh my god I loved it! I just want to hug them and squish them and never let them go! Amazing story!
Author's Response: N'awwhh thank you! I know, they're just super cute xD
Date: 06/21/11 03:08 pm Title: The Park
I thought this was cute :D
Author's Response: Thank you! xD
Date: 06/21/11 03:02 pm Title: The Park
This was really cute. I loved it! :D
Author's Response: N'awwhh thank you! :D
Date: 06/21/11 02:31 pm Title: The Park
Awwwwwwwwwwww
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was cute :)
Date: 06/21/11 02:18 pm Title: The Park
This was such a cute story. I love the twins when their young. Puddles and little kids just seem to go together so well. Danke. :)
Author's Response: Awhh thank you, I'm glad you liked it! :) I know, they're just so adorable. xD Thank you for your review!