Date: 03/24/13 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
Yay! An update! Are u back for good? I sure hope so :)
Author's Response: :)rnYes, I am back for good now.rnI'm glad you liked it!
Date: 03/24/13 11:18 am Title: Chapter 4
I thought this was forgotten. Thanks for coming back :D
Author's Response: :( I'm sorry.rnI just didn't want to write anymore and I had WB.rnI wasn't really coming up with any ideas.rnBut I am back this time and I won't leave again.
Date: 07/21/11 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 3
Sooo...I'm really enjoying this. :D
Author's Response: Sooo...that makes me really happy
Date: 07/16/11 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 3
The amount of alcohol he ingested was a LITTLE unrealistic. Lol. Good chapter :)
Author's Response: haha i know i know.rni think i was going for someone who was a little out of his mind and really really needed to get if off his mind so i went for a lot more alchohol, but hey, i'm not trying to be realistic :}
Date: 07/16/11 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
His parents seem so pompous. XD
Author's Response: oh, believe me they are
Date: 07/16/11 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
*-* I love supernatural.
Author's Response: me too, so i wanted to try a supernatural story.rni think people like it
Date: 07/16/11 01:25 pm Title: Prologue
Now I'm hungry. XD Damn diet.
I think I am really going to like this story :)
Author's Response: lol haha yeah i know the feeling. i'm on one where i'm only allowed 500 cals a day.
Date: 07/14/11 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 3
Damn! I don't think drinking Bill away is the solution lol. Poor girl xD
Author's Response: haha, obviously not
Date: 07/14/11 11:31 am Title: Chapter 3
Damn...but Bill is getting his pay back it seems...can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Oh yes, Bill is getting his paybackrn
Date: 07/14/11 11:15 am Title: Chapter 3
i absofuckinglutely love this story. It's got an ominous aura to it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 07/14/11 08:40 am Title: Chapter 3
Aww Tom is in misery. Puking on a girl is so embarassing XD
Being puked on must be (insert word)I can't even think about how I would feel if that happens to me.
Author's Response: i don't ever want to know how it would be.
Date: 07/01/11 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
Creepy! I'm loving it xDD
Author's Response: i'm so happy that you do!
Date: 06/30/11 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 2
i love love love the story ^^
Author's Response: That makes me super duper happy!!
Date: 06/30/11 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
(reply) Oh, okay. And I hope you find a beta ;)
Author's Response: Haha, you and me both :)
Date: 06/30/11 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love that last line! Can't wait to see what Bill has planned for Tom!
Author's Response: haha, however i was informed that i spelt "honey" wrong! how silly of me. i haven't thought that far yet, but i have a few ideas of what could happen. rnrnLook out for the next chapter in two weeks.
Date: 06/30/11 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
(reply) Well, having been suicidal myself, I know it's a horrible thing. A person has to hit rock bottom and have nothing to live for. And I just don't think the sadness of that is being conveyed. It's more like, Bill killed himself, and now the atmosphere is that we're supposed to be amused by him haunting Tom. Did Tom and their parents mourn for Bill at all?
Author's Response: Ahh i see where you're coming from. Well i can see where you would get that given the case of how the story is being laid out right now, but now that we've met Bill's ghost, Tom will experience the pain that he caused Bill and we will see just how it affected their parents. I tend to do that in stories i write. I won't really show much emotion in the begining, but it always plays out once i've gotten a few chapters posted.rnrnDoes that make sense?
Date: 06/30/11 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
While I don't like that it seems to be making light of suicide, this is kinda interesting.
Author's Response: what do you mean by light of suicide?
Date: 06/30/11 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
honeyyyyy! :DD
Author's Response: lol!! haha, i guess i was a little out of it when i was trying to spell that word
Date: 06/30/11 11:19 am Title: Chapter 2
Ooooh....I like it!! It's getting better, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: happy to hear that you like it!
Date: 06/30/11 10:42 am Title: Chapter 2
damn this is really good
Author's Response: Thank you!