Date: 06/19/11 05:06 pm Title: I don't give a damn about my...
And I really, truly loved this! I really hope you can expand on it, I'd be a very happy girl if you did. *bats eyelashes* As with all your stories, it just leaves me wanting more and more and more. Fantastic work, hon!
Date: 06/19/11 02:54 pm Title: I don't give a damn about my...
PLEASEEEE MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE ç_ç
Date: 06/19/11 12:35 pm Title: I don't give a damn about my...
So cute! This dynamic is really cute to read.
Date: 06/19/11 11:06 am Title: I don't give a damn about my...
This story was beyond sweet. It's just begging to be continued. I love their relationship. It makes me all warm and fuzzy inside.
Date: 06/19/11 10:45 am Title: I don't give a damn about my...
You are so witty it kills me. I love the ease of the banter and the way it flows between them. If only Natalie knew why Tom was really coming over. Nah, she'd probably think Tom was pretending to get homework or lunch money out of him. I imagine him taking Bill's hand before they walk into the movies and all the whispers and that cat that ate the canary look on Tom's face like, "yeah, I'm with Bill I dare you to say something to me about it." But with that said the one shot is perfect no sequel needed. I say this way too much to you but I loved it.
Date: 06/19/11 10:41 am Title: I don't give a damn about my...
Awww, this is so precious! Tom is such a charming thug. b29;
Even though it's just a sneak peek, this story absolutely won my heart. It would be great if you made into a multi-chaptered fic.
Date: 06/19/11 10:29 am Title: I don't give a damn about my...
sooo cute, I love it!!
Date: 06/19/11 09:36 am Title: I don't give a damn about my...
Omg I like the plot of this fic, I really really do! I would LOVE to read more if you ever decide to expand it =D I already like the characters quite a lot and I would like to read more about them ! Very interesting at the beginning the way you wrote them, as if we weren't sure if Tom really was harassing Bill (except if you checked the established relationship thing). Anyways, this is a very interesting story, thank you for posting it!
Date: 06/19/11 09:25 am Title: I don't give a damn about my...
Sequel? *pleading eyes*
Date: 06/19/11 08:52 am Title: I don't give a damn about my...
YOU MUST CONTINUE THIS!!!
Kishy the Fishy please?? This story is so good and the plot idea has me squealing! I love Bill's characterization in this! If you continue this into a multi-chap I bet it will get featured! I already suggested it to be featured right now
Date: 06/19/11 08:10 am Title: I don't give a damn about my...
Woow I never knew I had a thing for badboy!Tom. Turns out I most ~definitely~ do. I would LOVE to see this one expanded, it's such a cool idea and this was almost too much of a tease NOT to expand xD
Tom's character was awesome, he had me swooning. Shame he's Bill's. Well, not really :)
Date: 06/19/11 07:40 am Title: I don't give a damn about my...
So sweet! ^^
I giggled a lot reading it! And poor Nat! xD (or not lol go Tom! xD)
Thanks for this story honey b29;
Date: 06/19/11 06:31 am Title: I don't give a damn about my...
Bossy boyfriend :D I like it. They're good opposite characters.
Date: 06/19/11 05:50 am Title: I don't give a damn about my...
*_* I want more! Oh god, bad boy Tom and teacher's pet Bill...oh my...*melts* WANTS!
Date: 06/19/11 04:49 am Title: I don't give a damn about my...
that was so cute!! evil Tom and angel Bill are good together. ;)
Date: 06/19/11 04:13 am Title: I don't give a damn about my...
Cute! I love the idea of their secret liaisons, but I love the idea of Tom being willing to ruin his reputation by going public even more.
No one would object if you wanted to continue this. Just saying...
Date: 06/19/11 03:59 am Title: I don't give a damn about my...
That was sooo cute. I'd love to read more. The unsaid things between them really makes you think. Would you consider doing some more of this story? Maybe a prequel or a sequel? Or just a Tom pow?
Date: 06/19/11 03:49 am Title: I don't give a damn about my...
adorbs! I love the characterizations and the relationship dynamic. cuuuute!
Date: 06/19/11 03:46 am Title: I don't give a damn about my...
*squeaks* Ohhhhh, this is definitely crying out to be continued! This is such a delicious little moment on its own, though :) But you've got me very interested in both characters, I'm so interested to know more about them, hehe.
Date: 06/19/11 02:07 am Title: I don't give a damn about my...
I love this! If you do decide to expand it,I will be a very happy lady. :)