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Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/11 10:19 pm Title: The Mermaids' Lagoon

I have the most horrid migraine right now, but I want to thank you for the lovely chapter that for a few minutes, made me forget that I hurt so bad...

Author's Response: Oh, I'm sorry to hear about your migraine, but so glad it could help you feel better for a bit! Thanks for reading/reviewing :)

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/26/11 12:55 pm Title: The Invisible Tree House

I'm pretty sure my entire heart exploded into a pile of glitter with this chapter. *____* It's extremely Tom and Bill; and extremely Pan, and I don't know how to better explain it than that. And the gestalt of the two simply delights me.

I looooooove the imagining scene, it reminds me of the utter delight and wonder I experienced when watching Hook and suddenly, grown-up Peter could see everything that the Lost Boys were feasting upon. And that in turn reminded me of how incredibly imaginative kids can be. ♥ Tom's puppy! Imagining his sword!

I can't wait to see where their quest goes from here.

Author's Response: I'm pretty sure my entire heart exploded into a pile of glitter with this chapter. cutest review ever<3

The feast scene in Hook is my favorite part! Although this universe is mostly inspired by the play/novel, there are definitely elements of Hook and the animated Disney version/live action film. Thanks for your reading/reviews, sweet Tay<3 So glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/26/11 12:48 pm Title: A Boy Pirate

*dances inside at the Dread Pirate Tom reference* Oh wee Tom, I think you don't know what you've gotten yourself into, is what I think. It's quite adorable to see him going through the thought processes of committing himself to piracy. Little boy, you think a grounding is the worst thing you're in for?

Yay for Bill at the Faerie Feast! Trust Bill to seize immediately on the incongruity of a boy pirate. I'm glad he decided to whisk Tom away to wake him up dead, hehe.

Princesses, like all other women, cannot get enough of Bill.

Author's Response: Tom would totally imagine himself as a "good" pirate like Wesley XD

Not only can we women not get enough of Bill, we can't seem to get *any* of Bill (6_6) lol

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/26/11 12:08 pm Title: Another Pan

*squeaks excitedly* I cannot even describe how excited I was to see this, I'm just sad I had to set it aside for so long. But it's a real treat to get to read it and at last tell you what I think!

You have the most amazing way of capturing boyish behavior and putting it perfectly into words. Their little hijinx and mannerisms, from Tom swiping up dip with his finger rather than using veggies, to Bill Pan's adorable bragging, it's all so charming and really rings true as far as boyishness is concerned. I love it! I feel like it really captures the flavor of "Pan," too.

Hook with his evil plans. We'll see how that works out for him. :P

Author's Response: <333333333333333333333 I'm glad you like it so far<33333333333333333333333333333

Reviewer: Nuclear_Glitter Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/26/11 02:23 am Title: Another Pan

Well, I did read some of your "thirteen" story before I got too busy. It was good too, so in ways it's still a correct statement. =]

Author's Response: lol! ok :)

Reviewer: Nuclear_Glitter Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/26/11 01:18 am Title: Another Pan

I'm really sorry. I had confused with another author. However, in that case I'm really enjoying your FIRST remake lol.

Author's Response: No problem :) I'm happy you're enjoying it. Thanks for letting me know!

Reviewer: Todo se fuga Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/11 02:50 am Title: The Invisible Tree House

Great, great, lovely chapter. I was laughing all along.
I loved it so much. The writing was so awesome and those lost boys are just too good to be true. It's magical.
Thanks for the update, I really enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Glad it made you laugh :) Thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: musique_style Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/11 01:39 am Title: The Invisible Tree House

Eep! This is wonderful, absolutely wonderful! I haven't seen Peter Pan (well, I saw the live action version once...I think >_>), but I absolutely adore this! Fictions based off of movies are quickly becoming my favorite thing, and Bill is perfect for the part of Pan. ^_^

I love how Bill is so confused over why they have the same face, and the fact that the pirates actually showed up in Tom's world. And the Lost Boy's house! It sounds so wonderful. I'm pulled deeper into that world with every word; you're so good at conveying everything.

I can't wait for chapter 4!

Author's Response: This is inspired by the novel/play rather than the animated film version, so you're not missing out :) Even then, it's quite a bit different plot-wise. Never Land is more "magical" here, and "darker". I love fics based off movies/books/etc. too! So fun<3 I've always been so 6_6 at the Star Search footage of Bill, because he is *so* Bill Pan there! Finally, I could no longer resist writing it. I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thank you for reading/reviewing! Ch. 4 will be up soon.

Reviewer: ArielBrianna Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/22/11 11:05 pm Title: Another Pan

AWWW! Yay! I love this story. Its so cute and it puts me in such a good mood. You are doing a great job with keeping up the peter pan feel. Love it. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm glad it put you in a good mood! Thank you for reading/reviewing :)

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/22/11 06:07 pm Title: The Invisible Tree House

Aww, so cute. I felt so sorry for Tom for others being so cruel to him and him being so clueless, but it turned out okay. I loved the way you brought Tom's dog in tthis story. This has that kishmet-kind-of innocent fascination which makes a reader to smile, most definitely :)

Author's Response: Oh, does this remind you of kishmet? That is probably because he rips off my style. I forgive him, though, because he is my beloved twin. Thanks for reading/reviewing :)

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/22/11 03:13 pm Title: The Invisible Tree House

Haha poor Tom, being subjected to such an interrogation xD I feel for him, man.

This is just the most adorable fic ever!! I love the way you write and the whole re-telling is to fabulous :D

Author's Response: You're such a doll<3 Thanks for reading/reviewing :)

Reviewer: PoorMedea Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/22/11 04:52 am Title: The Invisible Tree House

I'm still absolutely loving this story. The image of all the toys coming to life was magical--very well done.

It's all just so playful and adorable.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading/reviewing (n_n) I appreciate the encouragement~

Reviewer: rabidkitteh Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/11 06:48 pm Title: The Invisible Tree House

seriously. adorable. i love this.
love Bill's authoritativeness, it's very Bill-esque :p or at least, what I imagine Bill to be like >< it's super cute. loving this so muucchhh

Author's Response: I imagine Bill to be very "authoritative", too XD Glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for reading/reviewing :)

Reviewer: DarkMistress Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/11 04:15 pm Title: The Invisible Tree House

*is in love with this story and lost boy tom*

god, they're so cute and absolutely wonderfully unreasonable. I especially loved the 'you stole my face!' part and I can't wait for Tom and Bill to find out they're (hopefully) twins and meant to work together and stuff. :D

also, you gave us puppies. You're awesome.

~Dawn

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Thank you for your kind words, and for reading/reviewing :)

Reviewer: mrsjennakaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/21/11 03:31 pm Title: The Invisible Tree House

oh my gosh, this is so exciting!!! i friggin LOVE this story. i lov ehow they can imagine things and it comes to live. i wish reality was this perfect.

Author's Response: yay, I'm happy you're enjoying it and finding it exciting :) I wish reality was like this, too~ Thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: FishPanda Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/11 12:07 pm Title: The Invisible Tree House

This story is completely adorable.

Author's Response: thanks! and thanks for reading/reviewing :)

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/11 11:22 am Title: The Invisible Tree House

My goodness, this fic is so adorable. I don't know how to handle it. I liked the puppies that never grow up. And I am very happy that its all settled. Tom is not a pirate, and he hasn't intentionally stolen Bill's face (we think) Keep up the lovely work! I look foreward to more soon!

Author's Response: More will come very soon. I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thank you for reading/reviewing :)

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/11 10:18 am Title: The Invisible Tree House

Oh! That is so interesting! Poor Tom, having Bill yell question at him like that most be kinda scary! But at least they don't think he's a pirate anymore =P I can't wait to read the rest, this fic is amazing!

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it so far :D Thank you for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: yellow-hello Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/11 05:49 am Title: The Invisible Tree House

AWESOME. I have no other words, this is purely awesome.



Author's Response: Yay! Thank you for reading/reviewing :)

Reviewer: Fighter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/11 05:30 am Title: The Invisible Tree House

Bill is hilarious, hahah! Loved your update!

Author's Response: Yay :D Thank you for reading/reviewing!

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