Date: 06/16/11 02:29 pm Title: A Boy Pirate
hahaha Tom is such a dork :') I love itt.
Author's Response: yes, he is XD thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 06/16/11 02:18 pm Title: A Boy Pirate
Oh I can't wait to read about when they're gonna meet =P
“Can I go ask my mom real quick?” Tom is the most adorable ``pirate`` ever ^^
I really like this fic so far, the idea is great and the character are very interesting =)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far<3 thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 06/16/11 01:56 pm Title: A Boy Pirate
Oh, can't wait for next chapter!
Author's Response: will have it out soon! thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 06/16/11 01:07 pm Title: A Boy Pirate
Haha I love your language in this fic, it's so quirky and clever :) I'm excited for the meeting of Bill and Tom!
Author's Response: yay, thank you<3333 glad to hear it
Date: 06/16/11 12:50 pm Title: A Boy Pirate
it's been two chapters and I'm already in love with this story! I've loved peter pan since I was a very little girl and you've captured the world so magnificently! All the little details are perfect. From the sipping-flowers to the way Bill talks.
I swear I nearly cried when he said 'Why, wherever I am, of course!' so Pan-like it's nearly scary :D
I'm already intruiged by the story. Two Pans, with one captured by the pirates, without knowing what he got himself into. Even the touch of boyish violence they're planning could be taken straight from James Barrie. I wonder how Bill and Tom are related in this and how they're going to find out they're both 'Pan's' as you say.
I very obviously love it and I'm not against begging you for a next update.
So, please please please, update this :D
*goes to play the flute*
~Dawn
Author's Response: That's very sweet of you to say<3 I've loved Peter Pan as well. I'm glad a fellow Pan fan approved (n_n) I will have the next chapter up soon. Thank you for the lovely review :)
Date: 06/16/11 12:49 pm Title: A Boy Pirate
ohh, poor Princess Tiger Lily, having a crush on Bill. I feel kinda bad for her.
Silly Tom. Pirates are not the excepion to the rules, they are the reason the rules were made to start with.
This was a wonderful chapter. I love the fairy feast. And I think you must be right, it s probably the recession that cut back on them.
I hope Bill realizes it must be trickery on the pirates part that got Tom to join them. Having Tom wake up dead afterwards would be rather akward, I imagine.
Keep up the lovely work! I look forward to the next update!
Author's Response: I always feel bad for Princess Tiger Lily. I love her<3 I've been her for Halloween at least 3 times, lol.
Pirates are not the excepion to the rules, they are the reason the rules were made to start with
I love that XD
Thanks for reading and leaving such cute reviews :D
Date: 06/15/11 04:56 pm Title: Another Pan
I'm always thrilled to see a story from you, and this one is off to a great start! Love Bill's absolutely, positively truthful story and the descriptions of the Lost Boys and the feast outfits. (It's too bad there can't be Faerie Feasts more often! ~__^) Can't wait to see what happens when Tom meets real pirates and finally meets Bill. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! Thank you for your kind words and for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 06/15/11 04:15 pm Title: Another Pan
what a beautiful start!! i love that the Faerie Feasts only happen for thirty day and twelve times a year!! brilliant!!
Author's Response: thank you for your kind words, and for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 06/15/11 03:04 pm Title: Another Pan
I think Tom ought to watch out!! 0_0
:D I can't wait.
Jane
Author's Response: You're very right about that, lol. Tom has a lot in store for him. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 06/15/11 10:11 am Title: Another Pan
I’m so excited to read a new story from you! The banner is brilliant and the plot sounds really interesting, can’t wait to see where you’re gonna take this =D
This is so intriguing! I look forward to read more about Tom, and Bill’s reaction to him! This is a very good first chapter, I’m hooked =P
Author's Response: Aw, that's sweet of you to say! The banner is totally beautiful.. umetnica outdid herself. Be careful using the word "hook" around this fic ;-) Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 06/15/11 08:41 am Title: Another Pan
I'm so happy to see such story here, J.M. Barrie's version of Peter Pan is the only version for me.
Author's Response: Same for me! I love the Disney version; it's cute and fun, but it's no match for J.M. Barrie's. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 06/15/11 08:00 am Title: Another Pan
I loved it XD
Author's Response: Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 06/15/11 07:48 am Title: Another Pan
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
illlllllove it.
this is gonna be one of my favorites!!!!
BUT, are they twins? you know, like having the same "pan" soul?
lovee you! and kish and fyr and umet
Author's Response: I hope it lives up to your expectations! Stay tuned for the answer to your question ;-) Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 06/15/11 06:11 am Title: Another Pan
Aw this is so wonderfulll! I love re-tellings with twins :) I'm excited for this!
Author's Response: Yay! I love re-tellings with twins, too! Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 06/15/11 05:20 am Title: Another Pan
Ah!!!
Ohmygosh, I'm so excited for this!
I happen to love Peter Pan more than is entirely reasonable. And this sounds so, so cute already. You're doing a great job of capturing all the adorable essence of Barrie's neverland (I particularly liked the 30 day feast happening 12 times a year).
Author's Response: Oh man, I'm the same way... totally obsessed with Peter Pan. I'm so glad you think I'm doing Barrie a bit of justice. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 06/15/11 03:38 am Title: Another Pan
Aaaah I love it *_* when I was younger I was practically in love with Peter Pan and I literally knew most of the book by heart, word by word. So when I saw this I HAD to read it lol. Hope to read more soon ^_^
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it. I'm the same way with Peter Pan! So I'm sure someone like you will notice the little quotes I dropped in here and there later in the fic, as homage to the great Barrie. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 06/15/11 02:59 am Title: Another Pan
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH! I am beyond obsessed with PeterfuckingPan.
Author's Response: Me too! Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 06/15/11 02:10 am Title: Another Pan
oh my god. So I read this because the banner was so authentically Pan and had me longing for childhood and such, but I'm pretty sure I'll stick around for the writing. Looks promising.
Author's Response: Oh god, umetnica's banner is amazing, I agree! She's super talented - I taught her everythign she knows ;-) (except how to make banners...) Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 06/15/11 01:21 am Title: Another Pan
ooohh! it sounds good! keep going! :D
Author's Response: Cool, I will! Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)
Date: 06/15/11 01:01 am Title: Another Pan
Hee. Ehhheheheheheheeheheh I love this. This is amazing. Peter Pan is one of my all time favorite books/movies/plays (I think it's a play, right?). Let's just say it's my favorite story, however it's told. And this twist just made it even better. :)
Author's Response: Yes, it's a play! It's one of my all-time favorite stories, too! Glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for reading/reviewing :-)