Date: 07/28/11 12:35 am Title: 5
Aha! I knew it was that sort of business going on. Bill expected to sleep with Tom, so it seems that's what he usually does.
Author's Response: Yes, you were right xD :)
Date: 07/13/11 01:07 am Title: 4
interesting very interesting i really wonder what will happen. i like your writing!
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 07/12/11 11:30 pm Title: 4
Aww, no problem :)
I was very surprised that Bill went with him so readily. Isn't the norm for these things that the winner gets to sleep with the "prize"?
I wonder what they're going to do.
Author's Response: :D rnrnWell, the norm is that the winner gets to sleep with the prize, yes. So we'll see what's going to happen. :)
Date: 07/03/11 09:31 pm Title: 3
(reply) Well, I have some time. I bet I could edit out the mistakes for you. If you choose to, email me the chapter at celestialchik_86@yahoo.com
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll email you the next chapter when it's finished :D
Date: 07/03/11 05:14 am Title: 3
Tom's extreme aversion to strip clubs is strange. I wouldn't want to go to one, but he's just chomping at the bit to get out of there XD
I suggest getting a beta reader/editor. Since I think english is your second language, there are several grammar mistakes. Though luckily not to the point where it's incomprehensible. I could do it, if you don't prefer someone else.
Oh gosh. is Tom going to pick Bill? :O
Author's Response: Hehe, I know. I put Tom in a weird situation, where he doesn't like strip clubs... rnrnI know there are some grammar mistakes. It would have been great if you could do it. :D rnrnHehe, you'll have to wait and see xD
Date: 07/03/11 02:27 am Title: 3
Oh wow. I totally can't wait for the next part.
Author's Response: Hehe, it won't be long before the next chapter is up :D
Date: 06/19/11 10:54 pm Title: 2
I like it so far... I hope to see Bill in action :)
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 06/19/11 09:33 pm Title: 2
Need another chapter! I'm intrigued & want to know what's next =)
Author's Response: Hehe, hopefully the next chapter won't take this long to write :D
Date: 06/14/11 08:15 pm Title: 1
This seems like it can go somewhere. If you don't mind me pointing this out, you have a couple spelling errors That I noticed. You described Georg as being in a 'trans'. Proper spelling is 'trance'. Also your last line, Tom 'chocks' on his drink. Proper spelling is 'chokes'.
Author's Response: Hehe, thanks for pointing that out! I'm going to correct it at once! :D
Date: 06/14/11 12:15 pm Title: 1
I'm interested in finding out what's next =)
Author's Response: You'll find out soon :)