Reviews For Kokoro
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Reviewer: sodapop90 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/11 03:15 am Title: But, right now, he does not understand yet...

well, ive certainly never read something like this, it intrigues me a lot, looking forward to the final part, seams quite promising n.n

Reviewer: prozac Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/11 09:33 pm Title: But, right now, he does not understand yet...

i loved the parts where B.I.L.L. is alone in a destructed world... it makes me remember the history channel´s series...well in spanish it´s called "La tierra sin humanos" but i don´t know the name in english, it could be "The world without humans" but i´m not really sure. That series make me remember how fragile is our society, i watcher that after a thousand years there will be no trace of human buildings and other constructions... well to finish with my review i just have to say that you wrote really the parts of a desolated world, it transmits really well the feeling of melancholy or whatever the fuck it´s called.

I´ll be looking forward to read more :)

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i´m still waiting for your other updates! :)

love love love :D

Author's Response: Yeah in English I'm pretty sure it's called "Life After Humans" or in Spanish "The Land Without Humans" same thing. So very glad that you are enjoying this so far!

Reviewer: FairyCelt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/11 08:09 pm Title: But, right now, he does not understand yet...

I really LOVE futuristic fics, and this is just perfect. You have the sort of sterile, robotic nature of the city, technology, and (of course) Bill, but you incorporated emotion as well. Tom's disappointment and the desolation of the ruins you interspersed in the story are really that much more profound when contrasted with the coldness of this future society. Can't wait for part two!

Author's Response: Thank you *takes a bow* part two should be coming up within the next week or two.

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/11 06:16 pm Title: But, right now, he does not understand yet...

this is shit intriguing, im eager to see how this goes and hopefully the journey through this will be awesome! :)

Author's Response: Be warned... you will cry. You will cry a lot... or at least I did. This fic is based off of a song and it's so heartbreaking.

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/11 06:05 pm Title: But, right now, he does not understand yet...

LMAO was his singing that bad >.< I look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Ahh yeah Bill can't sing in this :P

But in the next chapter you'll find out why

Reviewer: Ewa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/11 06:04 pm Title: But, right now, he does not understand yet...

very nice, but what about Rotkäppchen?

Author's Response: Rotkäppchen's next update depends on when I can muster up the strength to write werewolf smut since the next chapter involves Bill having a wet dream. As strange as it sounds it takes a lot of energy to write smut, plus with the Big Bang going on, and this new Victorian era fic I've really been wanting to write.... the next update for Rotkäppchen would be around the third week of June of the second week of July. However I have a deadline to finish it by Christmas so if anything there's going to be a shit load of updates during the later summer and fall

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