Date: 09/30/11 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
this is a good chapter, i love the dialogue between Tom and Georg. and god, a cliffie!!! OH NOES!!!!!!!! *dies*
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your so sweet! I'm glad you liked it, I should have a new chap up this weekend :) I really loved Geo's character in this it was fun to write it.
Date: 09/30/11 09:26 am Title: Chapter 4
O: damn update soon
Author's Response: I will this weekend I'm devoting to a larger chapter. Thanks for sticking with this story :)
Date: 08/02/11 07:44 am Title: Chapter 3
wow Its sooo cool! great story ,I loved it :D will be waitin for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully you won't be waiting long, I just need to hurry up and get my Big Bang done! I'm glad you liked this! rn
Date: 08/02/11 04:50 am Title: Chapter 3
this was amazing!!! at least we know now that Tom's intentions aren't bad. but goodness, Bill threw himself out of a window!!! that's desperation!!
great chapter. hopefully after Big Bang we can see more of this amazing story!!
Author's Response: Thank you! After writing this chapter I really want to write the fourth one, I had a lot of fun with this one. I really wanted Bill to not give up on escaping and spent a lot of time with it. I'm so glad you liked it! I might update this sooner than I expected I don't like keeping people waiting :)
Author's Response: Thank you! After writing this chapter I really want to write the fourth one, I had a lot of fun with this one. I really wanted Bill to not give up on escaping and spent a lot of time with it. I'm so glad you liked it! I might update this sooner than I expected I don't like keeping people waiting :)
Date: 06/16/11 01:07 am Title: Chapter 2
Ok, wow...twists and turns I wasn't expecting at all :) I like. Can't wait for more.
Date: 06/14/11 09:30 am Title: Chapter 2
Argh! I'm dying to know what this is all about & what's going to happen next. Patience is something I was not very good at, lol.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope the next chapter will begin to explain things more, it took a while to write but I've finally got it done. :) thanks for the review!
Date: 06/14/11 12:50 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm still confused as to what's happening here, is Tom his older brother or something?
Anyhow, hopefully it'll all be cleared soon :) great story
Date: 06/13/11 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
oh my....this was hardto read. poor Bill....i wish he had made it. and what's up with Simone?
Author's Response: I felt almost mean to Bill, him being that close to escaping only to be caught... Mabey he'll get away next time, Tom dosnt seem to like the idea tho... He wants his Billa ;)
Date: 06/13/11 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
Please more Tom&billness!!!
Author's Response: Well sence you asked so nicely, :DrnrnDon't worry the next few chaps will be more Tom&Bill centered
Date: 06/13/11 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
Great bits of action in this! I like how Bill isn't just some whiny and helpless little thing in this. Plus I like the hints you gave into everyone's lives and why things are going the way they are. Great update!
Author's Response: Thank you! I tried hard to make sure Bill wasn't going to end up a helpless victim. I'm glad I succeeded :)
Date: 06/13/11 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
*bites nails* what's going on here? what happening with Bill? ooh, this sounds scary...
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glade you like it :)
Date: 06/12/11 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whoa! What? I have got to know what's going to happen next. U definately got my attention.
Date: 06/12/11 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like the story. Hope you carry on with it.
Author's Response: I plan on it :) in glad you like it. Thank you for reviewing :D
Date: 06/12/11 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, I'm officially intrigued! I really like the plot of this story, and how you introduced the mystery behind the characters and their pasts. I'm really looking forward to finding out how everything unfolds!
Author's Response: Thank you! When I was writing this I though it seemed rushed but I'm glad you liked it :) I should be updating it in the next couple days.
Author's Response: Thank you! When I was writing this I though it seemed rushed but I'm glad you liked it :) I should be updating it in the next couple days.