Date: 02/26/08 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
lol. i like it. it's really cute. n__n
Author's Response: thanks ^^
Date: 02/26/08 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
AHH!! It's awesome! I love this story! Can't wait to see what happens next. :D
Author's Response: Thank you! :) xx
Date: 02/24/08 07:01 am Title: Chapter 2
Argh, this is so good! :D ..
It's just sad, that Tom is so sweet, and want's to talk to Bill about why the changed and stuff, and Bill just snaps all the time, and yells at him :/ .. aww. But it's also sad for Bill beause he loves Tom, and he cries himself to sleep every night :/ .. so sad. I feel like crying :(
But when Tom wrote to "Bella", that his brother was the greatest guy you could ever meet, my heart was like jumping up and down, and thought it was so so sooo sweet :) and "Bella" writes that his brother (Tom) is everything he could ask for. 'i'm melting' because it's such a cute thing to say . :)(L) - LOVEEEE!
And when Tom wrote: 'I don't usually go with the whole 'love is blind'-thing, but theres just something about you. I'll do what you want.' .. Cute cute cute (L)
Keep on the great work schatz :D you are the greatest (L)
Haha, I wish I had a perv-mom xD or something? xD. anyways, I love what you write, so keep it on :D(L)
Btw. i'm thinking of getting a piercing i april - around my birthday :D
100.000 x's from Jumbie (L)
Author's Response: Haha thanks! xD My mom is such a perv, SERIOUSLY! God, but it's great though x) Sorry I haven't updated in a while, I'll try to change that. I just lost a bit of inspiration but it's slowly coming back! Thanks for the support, it means SOOOO much to me =P xoxox
Date: 02/24/08 02:52 am Title: Chapter 1
YEAH! :D you wrote another story! 'squeals with excitement! :D
WIEEE! :D
And this story is so so so so soooo great! :D
Omg, Bill is so playing the innocent little boy, when Simone is like "Did you breake the vase?" and Bill replies: "No, how could you think something like that? I'm your son. How could you?!" - so playing innocent, so good xD
..I like when Bill was like: "I like sucking .." .. ".. on lollipops" xD . Omg! I was like flat on my back laughing som much, that my mother was like "Mia, what the fuck is happening," xD . muhaha.
I loveeeeeeeeeeee this story! 'dances around' xD
And and and when Bill choked on his food, I swear I could picture him in that moment, when he realised that it was Tom he had been writing with - so so GOOD! :)
I'm so excited that you wrote another story! Wieee :D . I already love this one (L)
Author's Response: haha cool xD I'm happy you liked it cos I wasn't really thinking of continuing it, but I updated the next chapter because I got bored yesterday =P Oh, yes, everyboday loves the part with "Bill: I like sucking... On lolipops." xD I have NO idea how I thought of that. Seriously. My mom is like a big perv, and she always says so much stupid stuff, so maybe it's from her xD Don't comment that! haha. xoxo <3
Date: 02/24/08 01:17 am Title: Chapter 1
This is cute. I love reading the boys IM'ing each other, especially if they don't realize who they're actually talking to.
Can't wait to read more. :)
Author's Response: Thanks =] But actually Bill knows who he is writing with. It's only Tom that doesn't know xox
Date: 02/24/08 12:38 am Title: Chapter 2
omg first ch. reminded me of this commercial from holland i saw one and they were gonna yea know "Cyber" and they went down to the dinner table an looked up at each other and just kinda dropped their forks and the chick pushed her food away then it comes up "Dont cyber in Holland" (sp) its funny.
Author's Response: That commercial is actually where I got my idea from! x) I changed it around a bit as you can see =]
Date: 02/23/08 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
MORE!!!!!!!! Pretty please? :)
Author's Response: Okay x) I'll update soon
Date: 02/23/08 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm in it!
Jk..see my name is Bella.
i like it so far!
continue!
Author's Response: Thanks =]