Omg, loved it :D

The scene where Bill's heel broke, and Tom picked Bill up and carried him away, was such a One Tree Hill moment xD . but was sooo sooo sweet though - and I could just picture Tom in the prince outfit - hilarious xD
But when I read the part where Tom looked at Bills neck, I was like - "OMG OMG OMG", I had acutally forgotten that he had the TH-logo on his neck, when you wrote about how to do his hair - but now what? xD

NEED MORE! 'gives puppydog eyes' - SOON - pleaseee? (:

Awwwww, loved this chapter hun' (L) :D
can't wait until the rest. And when I get home from Belgium i'm going to update a story? :D - okay? :I

And btw, i'm like your biggest fan :I(L)

Author's Response: Oh a story?! U a story?! Story U write?! GOD is a nice person =P I can't wait! Tell me about when u post the 1st chapter cos I wanna review it =P Oh I can't wait! I'll be YOUR biggest fan when I read ur story xoxox

Yes.. I said it. I said Pumpkin!
(people i like, or really love, i call pumpkin. :D hahaa)

Meep! im excited for the next chapter. Update soon? okay?

Can't wait!!! Hurry hurry! lol =)

Yeah, well I do :D . I like your stories SO MUCH! They are some of the best stories that I have ever read :)(L)
And btw, you DON'T suck - not at all! Don't you think that! NEVER :D
And even though they aren't perfectly written, they have so much meaning, and are humorous xD I either laugh all the time, or I crie - that's how good they are! :D . and that's because you are so good :D(L)

And this chapter is just very funny xD . Loved when Bill saw the dress he was going to wear - so good xD . And and that Andreas is acting such 'gayish' with the "Your body is perfect which makes the dress lie perfectly nice and tight around your small waist, and then lower bit bursts out into the thick layers of martial which-" - omg xD so funny. And Bill is like "I get it. God, you're just like your mom." .. hehe xD

I could just picture when Bill was in that dress, it would look so great xD . or something. xD
Awwwwww, and that Tom is so so soooo jalouse that Bill is with Andreas. Nuurh - so sweet :)(L)
And the Andreas's character is just one of my favourite - love him. He is such a sweetypie, and girlish xD oder?

And btw, I have actually written some fanfictions, but I just haven't uploaded them, because I thought they weren't good enough :/

But anyways, I love yours (L) . And keep on with the writing, love it :D . it's keeps me going in school (: - i will always read your stories Marissa :D(L)

Author's Response: Seriously, I can picture Bill in that dress too xD He looks so good! haha =P With the mask on and everything, so sexy ;D I was thinking of what to do with his hair, you know? Coz he can have it all out because Tom will notice it's Bill. What if he had it tied up in this big, spiky, fruit bun thing? xD omg thats funny, I can't picture that... Well, anyways, we'll see. The next chapter should be updated today, and if not, then tomorrow. But I'll really try writing it today! =P Oh, and Andreas and Bill are not 'together' and don't have a 'thing' for eachother, just to make it clear ;) No tention there! haha. So it should be fun... yeah... the next chapter... =P I wonder what happens. Cos I don't really know x) I write every chapter spontaneously. I think you should write a fic. I would LOVE to read it. Even if it's one that has one chapter, two or three, please write one =P Please... pretty please... *puppy dog eyes*

meep. I am sorry if i seemed a wee bit snitty or even bitchy in my last review. I really didn't mean to come off that way. : (

I really, pretty much love this story. it is written very, very well, and it makes me laugh, and is a very fun read.

I love andreas's character. He is a pumpkin

Author's Response: No problem =) Thanks, I'm happy you like it. And Andreas is a... pumpkin? xD xD xD

ooooooohhh *adds to favorites*

Author's Response: Thanks!!! =D

"Bill, wait."


"What?" Bill turned around.


A small silence passed as the twins stared at each other.


"You look good."


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OMG THEY'RE BONDING!!! I feel something good coming on. Keep writing. I'M DYING to read about the Halloween dance thing.

Author's Response: Thank you =P I'll update soon xxx

Very nice! Oh God...Bill in a white puffy dress would make my life. lmao
Great chapter!!! :D

Author's Response: Thanks =) xox

Yeah! So glad that you updated againg :D . wieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee (L) . and yeah, I did notice that it was from THAT movie :D

So so so so soooo good chapter - loved when Bill was all like 'No Tomi, it's not her.'', and then when he wrote to Tom, and Tom was all like "Oh, sorry. Gotta go" xD
What a GREAAAAT story - and at the end when Bill is like talking to himself, and is all like "I bet it's a fucking dress." . so sweet!

I love to read your story over and over again, it makes me glad when i'm down. And I was in a bad mood before I noticed that you had updated, and when I noticed I like flipped out and was all happy and bouncing, and people was just staring at me like I was crazy xD . haha, I can't live without your stories, so I can't wait untill you update a new chapter (L)

btw, it means SOO much to mee, that you have written this story (L) . thank you, thank you, thank you (L)

You are the best - I'm glad that your inspiration is coming back, because I was actually needing you :/ . And was sad that that it wasn't uploaded, but i'm glad that you did (L) ..

Dankeeee schööön (L) du bist sehr wunderbar :)

Author's Response: awwwwwwww =P thank you... I didn't know you liked my stories so much, cos when I compare them to other ppls I think 'wow, I really suck!' x) But I'm glad you like them, though their not written perfect and all... I have an idea, why don't you start writing a story? =] I'll try to update the next chapter tonight. Thanks for reading, Jumbie :) xoxox <3

meep. Update. SOON BIATCH!

wow. that was demanding.. I am sorry. :(

You get the point though, right?

and seriously dude? the cinderella story? gag

Author's Response: um... thanks...? =P Oh, don't worry, the story is not based on that movie. I only got the part with the Halloween out and am using it for the story. Otherwise it's got nothing to do with the movie. xxx