Date: 01/21/13 11:46 am Title: Chapter 3 The new student
this seemed interesting so far, rushed but interesting
Date: 07/14/12 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 3 The new student
You shouldn't mark this story as Completed when it isn't, that really threw me off. :( Other than that, I think you chose a really cool plot idea. Very interesting start to the story, but I don't think it's very believable, even in your new fictional world. I also hope that you'll work on correcting your typos and grammar- sometimes its a bit off. I hope you'll continue writing his story though, I'm very intersted to see what happens n how Tom n Bill find out they're brothers. :)
Date: 02/08/12 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 3 The new student
Ohhhh it get quite interesting! Does Bill realize he and Tom share more than a big curiosity for other species??? Will he Talk to Tom or will he ignore him?
I am so anxiously waiting for the next chapter =)
Greetings!
Author's Response: Bill will talk to him... at some point... Tihi... and he is slowly starting to realize... I can also tell you as much as Tom isn't giving up so easily... :)and I'm working on it the best I can... my com is so fucked that I have no writing program on it... so have to write in school... and have a weeks vacation next week so bare with me please? Tihi...rn
Date: 02/03/12 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 3 The new student
i like this :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much... (;
Date: 02/03/12 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 3 The new student
Its a lovley story! :3 I like it ^.^
Author's Response: Thank you so much... it makes me so happy... (:
Date: 06/19/11 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 2 Getting cold feet.
I did think bills life would be like that. Poor him! Update soon!
Author's Response: yeah... I feel for him too... hope you like it... you're my first rewiew and I'm so thrilled by it... I'll updade as soon as possible... (tight hug) :D