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Reviewer: helpmebill Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/11 02:44 pm Title: "If I could want you and nothing else, I would."

wow, this is beautiful. If you're a boy, you did an awesome job on the girl parts....fantastic. I almost came myself. ;)

Reviewer: jenar Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/11 06:45 pm Title: "If I could want you and nothing else, I would."

This so tragic in so many ways.He wants to love her the way she deserves to be loved but he can't.He is trapped. Great story. And btw your words at the end are really meaningful.

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/11 06:31 pm Title: "If I could want you and nothing else, I would."

I have already left you a review today, singing your praises; I do not wish to repeat that same here. As for critiques, I have none. And for a truly TSOA style review: I am going to go find some kleenex now to wipe the tears that I am shedding.

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