Date: 06/14/11 07:30 am Title: for a mermaid's kiss
I thought he was going to die XD I'm happy that he's going to be happy :D
I would totally have sex with a merman if it turned me into a mermaid lol. As long as his junk isn't like fish junk >.< That just wouldn't make sense lol
Date: 06/14/11 07:03 am Title: for a mermaid's kiss
Beautiful.
Date: 06/14/11 04:30 am Title: for a mermaid's kiss
I was unsure of where this was going to end up--whether they would just leave Andrej when they were done (or worse). So I'm thrilled that he got to turn into a merman! If for nothing else than the fact that Andrej would look gorgeous with a shimmering tail.
This was such a lovely story, beautifully atmospheric. I love how you described the mermaids in general and Bill and Tom in particular, and their animalistic nature. Gorgeous.
Date: 06/14/11 02:34 am Title: for a mermaid's kiss
This was a pretty good story. Something that was elongated by the songs I was listening to.
This doesn't need an indepth analysis if only because it was short, but like always, you exceed in your detail, it's almost like watching instead of reading. Truly beautiful, but then again you treat your stories like art and that's what makes it worth reading.
I'll end here but I have to say, you should check out Violet UK by Yoshiki and most of the songs he plays with Daughter. It is really good.
Date: 06/14/11 02:30 am Title: to the depths
Intereseting start, I can't wait to read more XD
Date: 06/14/11 01:02 am Title: for a mermaid's kiss
damn this was H.O.T! and beautifully written
Date: 06/14/11 12:43 am Title: for a mermaid's kiss
So...Alright, I'm having a hard time thinking after all that smut. I haven't seen the new Pirates movie so I don't know if that would help but is he just going to hang with them now? You mentioned before that they were the only pair, so now will they be the only three-some? I really liked this, even as I said before, I'm not a huge fan of twindrej it was nice. Great job and congrats on clicking the completed box.
Date: 06/14/11 12:31 am Title: for a mermaid's kiss
OH JOYOUS~
Date: 06/13/11 10:31 pm Title: from the land
Ohhhh Tom's gonna be so mad and possessive
Date: 06/13/11 12:51 am Title: from the land
That home wrecking hussy! I knew there was a reason I didn't like Andrej. I want Tom to rip him to shreds with his nails but I assume that isn't going to happen based on the pairings but a girl can dream right? *sigh* I'll just have to wait until you post the rest.
Date: 06/11/11 10:24 am Title: from the land
Wow, Tom's not happy. I'm really curious as to how the dynamics of this "relationship" are going to work from now. God this is gorgeous. This is an amazing piece of writing :D
Date: 06/11/11 09:26 am Title: to the depths
Ooh I have so much love for twindrej *_* and this is really exciting, like a lusty adventure of some sort. I love it, I love the way you write it and I love the pirates. Mmm.
And umetnica's banner is SO gorgeous, I think one of my favourite ever. It's an absolute work of art *_*
Date: 06/11/11 01:07 am Title: from the land
Oh Tom is not happy with that.
Date: 06/10/11 10:41 pm Title: from the land
Oh snap, Andrej, Tom gonna eat you. You better hope it's going to be in a way you like~
Date: 06/10/11 08:46 pm Title: from the land
Oh no. Tom, that ring was totally for the both of you! You just didn't let Bill explain it properly!
I love this story so much, the characters are all so wonderful and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 06/10/11 03:19 pm Title: from the land
OMG I can't wait to read the next chapter O.O
A pissed off jealous Tom is the best lol XD
Date: 06/10/11 12:35 pm Title: from the land
Amazing chapter as usual! I really like the interaction between the twins in this fic, especially how possessive Tom his and how Bill refers as ``we`` instead of ``I``. Can't wait to read more =)
Date: 06/10/11 12:16 pm Title: from the land
Toms jealous! Andrej better watch out!
Date: 06/10/11 05:15 am Title: from the land
oh snap, if hell hath no fury like a woman scorned, what in imagination would have the fury of a jealous merman? this story is woven like the finest silk, rich with detail and stained with the loveliest imagery. ahh, so nice
Date: 06/10/11 03:55 am Title: from the land
I finally went to see Pirates, and all I could think of during the mermaid scene was this story!
I think Andrej doesn't know what he's getting himself into, going up against a jealous Tom. Can't wait to see what happens!
