Date: 10/27/10 11:19 pm Title: Prologue: Dior
That is the best first chapter/prologue I've read in a very, very long time. Everything is just perfect. The writing style and the character intrigue me and I'm just can't wait to learn more! Really well done, you capturing my attention right from the beginning!
Date: 05/11/10 05:02 am Title: Epilogue: McQueen
Awwwh~~ Finally finished. Really different from almost everything else I've read. Sometimes here and there I felt a slight, umm dunno how to phrase it... meat? Bulkiness? I dunno but other than that it put a smile on my face. I loved the rawness of the character and the sheer attitude that seeped through every line. It made it so enjoyable and I had a few good chuckles. Great job!
Date: 05/10/10 03:38 pm Title: Prologue: Dior
I know this story is long completed, but I like reviewing even on older stories if they capture me. And this did capture me so. I've only read the very first 361 words, and I must say, in a mere handful of sentences I'm utterly fascinated. I love the style, the character, the colour already - you've painted the perfect picture, concentrated in few words. (Oh goodness knows, I could never do.) I think I'll like this story. Heh. I send my appreciation for your artistry.
Date: 11/07/09 07:10 am Title: Epilogue: McQueen
Very sweet story.
Date: 10/29/09 06:42 pm Title: Epilogue: McQueen
That was a great story.
Date: 09/04/09 09:37 am Title: Chapter Twelve: Armani
Hayley did it?
Date: 09/04/09 09:25 am Title: Chapter Eleven: Kors
Wait a minute, Bill was only 15 when his father died. That Sharks are distrubed perverts, I mean Bill is responsible for his father gambling.
Date: 09/04/09 12:34 am Title: Chapter Ten: Fendi
So, they're bitching around but next thing we'll know is that they are fucking on a drawing table. To release tension, of course.
Date: 09/04/09 12:24 am Title: Chapter Nine: Jacobs
Yeah, Bill and Ton will work together, that mean a lot of time together.
Date: 09/04/09 12:13 am Title: Chapter Eight: Ricci
Bill, you don't know but you will return to Tom anytime you will feel bad.
Date: 09/04/09 12:05 am Title: Chapter Seven: Versace
Trouble in paradise. Hope that have nothing to do with Andreas. He's the first suspect on this.
Date: 09/03/09 11:56 pm Title: Chapter Six: Klein
Ja ja, momentary lapse, they always said that but we all know how it's gonna end.
Date: 09/03/09 11:37 pm Title: Chapter Four: Cavalli
What are this nightmares? They seems pretty traumatic. Tomi is motivated to get to his ends, he want more. Naughty boy!!
Date: 09/03/09 11:15 pm Title: Chapter Two: Prada
Great!! After DivaBill, SluttyTom. Tom, that's cheating, it's not fair.
Date: 09/03/09 10:58 pm Title: Chapter One: Vuitton
Oh, I see. We have to deal with BitchyDiva Bill. Love the way you write. I love the short sentences in Paliahnuk style.
Date: 09/03/09 10:41 pm Title: Prologue: Dior
Chuck Palahniuk!! Invisible Monsters is one of the greatest book I ever read (and the weirdest). I suppose this fiction is inspired by this book, doesn't it.
Date: 07/27/09 03:04 pm Title: Epilogue: McQueen
awww, that was so sweet!!! and i absolutely loved the whole fashion-scene, and to be honest i also loved diva-bill! :d
Date: 06/21/09 10:46 am Title: Chapter One: Vuitton
All your THF references are making my head spin!!!! To write love on her arms, Haylz, what's next?!?!?!
Btw, I would totes watch this on TV. I'm such a fashion whore!!!
Date: 05/13/09 06:38 pm Title: Epilogue: McQueen
Great Tale! I loved reading this, it was a true pleasure. I'm a big fan of Project Runway, so this was nice. ^_^ Good Job!
Date: 02/04/09 01:19 pm Title: Prologue: Dior
I'm impressed! It reads like you'd expect a piece of theatre drama to! I can't wait to read the rest :-)