Date: 06/07/11 12:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Hahah oh my goodness, dumbTom had me laughing so hard. Geeze Tom, it's not that hard to figure it out lol =)
I can't wait for you to update!
Also, I might be interested in a tailor made fic... What exactly do you mean though? lol
Author's Response: I thought it was probably time for a little light humour, after everything else so far seems to be a little depressing. To me, anyway.
I'll try and update asap! My last exam is in about five hours so I'm cramming for that at the moment, but then I have absolutely ages to do sweet f-a, so it shouldn't be too long.
I didn't explain myself very well, really, did I? Pff. What I mean is, I'll write you a fiction about aaaanything at all, not just Tokio Hotel, but like original fiction or some other fandom. That I know about, I mean, I wouldn't write a True Blood fanfic because I don't know a thing about it, but if you had a prompt or a vague sort of idea that you wanted to get written, I'll do it for you. Does that clear things up?
Date: 06/07/11 12:08 am Title: Chapter 4
You made it okay again. Yay Tom for making Bill happy!
Author's Response: Yep I did :) I don't like my characters being upset for too long, it depresses me.
Date: 06/06/11 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 4
Tom you better be good to Bill.
Author's Response: I will make sure that he is, I promise. Nobody shall hurt my little Bill, he's far too cute.
Date: 06/06/11 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
oo tailor made fics sounds interesting :)
This chapter was really nice, I love tom in the story how considerate he is. :) I can see that the next chapter is going to be amazing
Author's Response: Yay, I was going for sort of nice this chapter as opposed to startling or something. I figured it was time. Yuhuh, the next chapter is going to be awesome! I'll start work on it in about six hours, but I have to do all this exam stuff first :p
If you want a fic, just contact me through the site and we can work something out :)
Date: 06/06/11 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
Kekeke, loving that House reference. ;D
Poor Bill. Gosh. I can't say that enough. Poor friggin' Bill. It's got to be horrible to live through that disease, and all the others before it. :c I do like the way you've developed his character. I know I've said it before but he really does keep reminding me of the faith healer in the show. They have the same personality, where they just love helping people and are super polite and nice and everything. xD It's quite adorable. :3
Pshaw, I wish there was a Lynx for girls, too. ;c I'd be fine with putting the guy version on if people didn't yell at me, because apparently Lynx is super popular with half of the female population but the other half despises it. D:
Author's Response: I had to bring House in, once we'd been discussing it for so long :p
I suppose he thinks it's worth it, living through something so nobody else has to die from it. But he does have some kind of hero complex, for which I entirely blame the people around him. It should not have gone this far. Although, if it hadn't, then I wouldn't have a fic, because nobody really wants to read the happy story of a cute little boy who skips around all the time and heals people, there's no conflict or drama in that. Tcha. I can see though that I am definitely going to have to watch this episode, and very very soon, just to compare the characters...
Maybe we should start a petition? We could send it allllll round the countries, and when we have about a million signatures, we could send it off to the manufacturers, and they could come up with a special girly Lynx :D That would be awesome.
Date: 06/06/11 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter! I am sooo interested by this story. Especially the people that are in Bill's life. There has to be more to them, right? With Bushido's attitude changes and the whole 'help me thing', you got me so intrigued!
And I'd be lying if I said I wouldn't be interested in having a tailor made fic written for me XD If that offer is still good I'd be more then happy to email you...I'd just need your email :)
Anywho, I loved this chapter and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying it, it's a special fic to me :D Of course, I will be talking more about the other people in Bill's life fairly soon, because right now they seem to be random enigmas floating around with no real purpose. Hehe.
Of course it is still good! My email is...lissa_gray@hotmail.co.uk. I shall await your email :D
And while I am awaiting it, I shall write more so I can update real soon!
Date: 06/06/11 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 3
I can't wait to see what happens next. It seems like a pretty impossible situation. Can he touch a healthy person and take their health? Great chapter! I am loving this story XD
Author's Response: Impossible situations are my speciality, and not just in the fandom. Currently I am learning twenty psychology case studies off by heart in order to pass my exam in a couple of hours. THEY SAID IT COULDN'T BE DONE...
Ahem, that's just me being crazy. That's an interesting idea, actually...taking a healthy person's health...I may have to steal that for the later chapters I haven't quite thought out yet. *schemes madly*
Date: 06/06/11 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG! I wasn't expecting that last part at all! I can't stop reading now XD
Author's Response: Yay, my hook line worked!! Of course, you're lucky because I did already write the next chapter so it's not quite as effective, but who cares! I'm glad you like it :D
Date: 06/06/11 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is such a great idea for a story! I can't wait to read more XD
Author's Response: Thank you! It's been floating around for a while, I just needed to actually sit down and transfer it to my head to the page :)
Date: 06/06/11 07:13 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh no. Poor Bill, he seems to be so lost. I really want to know more of his situation.
Author's Response: He is certainly not exactly certain of his situation, anyway...
Date: 06/05/11 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
...I KNEW IT.
Well, I started knowing it at the beginning of the chapter when he was exhausted and everything and it kept getting more and more obvious the more of the chapter I read. So yeah, I KIND OF KNEW IT. But omg, that's so sad. It's like this one book I read, Bruiser, by that guy that wrote Everlost...Neil Shusterman or something. That was a really good book, just like this is a really good story. ;D It's about this guy and his sister, and his sister starts dating the school 'bully'. Well, everyone thinks he's a bully because his name is Brewster and kids call him Bruiser, and he's always got bruises and cuts and stuff so everyone's confident he gets in a lot of fights. But what really happens is that when he starts to care about someone genuinely, he receives their cuts, bruises, etc., and it's just a really sad but good book. That's what this story also reminds me of.
omg, though, I can't believe it. Is Bill gonna die? ;_; Well, hopefully not because he and Tom are supposed to get together, dammit. That's what this site is for. No one reads het anymore. D< By the way, I totally love how you introduce the romantics into your stories. It's not like "HEY YOU'RE HOT LET'S MAKE OUT" or whatever, it's always a subtle meeting where they don't have too many feelings for each other, but then they spend time together and start to see each other for who they really are. All your characters are, like, pansexual because they're always falling in love with each others' personalities. xD But hey, I have no problem with that. ;D
lolol, Lynx. I adore Lynx. Well, Axe, since I live in the States, but you know. Everyone complains about how bad it smells but I swear I love it so much that once when my uncle lived with us for a few weeks and he had Axe shampoo or whatever, I opened the bottle when I was in the shower just to smell it. It was like my drug and I'd sniff it every time my nose ran out of it. xDDD
Oh, also. Faith healer episode. It's called "House vs. God", and it's season 2, episode 19. So you're almost there. xD Just watch all the first season in a marathon watching, and then go out and buy season 2, hehe. :3
Author's Response: ...HOLY SMOKE...
*is blown away by awesomeness of review*
WOW YOU ARE AWESOME. Hehe, of course, I suppose it is fairly obvious, but I didn't really mind. It was definitely meant to be more and more obvious as it went on, so I'm glad it came across like that. Fabulozo (that's a strange word, which I probably won't use again...) I haven't ever read that, I must admit. For a second I thought you meant "Neverwhere" by Neil Gaiman, but then I Wikipedia-d Neal Shusterman, so I got that wrong...It sounds really interesting, actually, and not a little unlike a Neil Gaiman story where it was a cat who helped the family who lived in the porch he slept on. I just thought of that now.
Aha, I shall have to keep you hanging on this point. I wouldn't like to ruin the ending right now, ahaha. Of course, Bill and Tom will be together at some point, but for how long is an entirely different matter. Nobody does read het anymore, I actually feel quite bad for all these really wistful-sounding summaries with het as their main genre. But, hey, you have to move with the times. I save het for original fiction :p
I always have to have stories with SOME kind of romantic development. I don't find "HEY YOU'RE HOT LET'S MAKE OUT" at all interesting, unless there's something really fairly spectacular about to happen next. Like that PoorMedea fic, "Just A Small Town Girl." I like characters to have more than one dimension, and I don't know how well I succeed but at least I try...
I actually quite like the smell of Lynx as well. When I lived with my boyfriend I used his all the time, until the people I worked with got really pissed at me for smelling like a guy. BOOOOOOOOOOO.
Right, House marathon coming up :p
Date: 06/05/11 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hey so I really like this so far! This first chapter was a bit slow, but it deff got way better.
It seems to me that Bill is being forced to heal people, maybe by Gordon. I loved the whole "help me" scene and how Tom just knows that something isn't right.
I like this a lot so far and I can't wait for you to update. I just hope this fic has a happy slashy ending =)
Author's Response: Oh thank you! First chapters aren't my favourite part of a fiction, I must admit :p
Aha, all will definitely be explained in time. I did love the "help me" part, I had to say, even though I wrote it :p And of course Tom knows something is wrong, he is special :)
Date: 06/05/11 10:09 am Title: Chapter 3
I wonder if Bill knew that this was going to happen ;_;
I know that Tom wanted to get rid of his disease, but I wonder how he's going to react to Bill taking it into himself. No doubt he's feeling extremely guilty right now :(
Author's Response: Yes, he knew :( All shall be explained in my next update.
Including Tom's reactions, I promise. But yeah, he's definitely feeling guilty.
Date: 06/05/11 12:39 am Title: Chapter 3
I'm so scared for Bill now ;( He took the disease into himself to save Tom.
Author's Response: Yep, that is what he did :( Poor Bill, it's a little like a double-edged sword for him really.
Date: 06/04/11 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
i just started this and i love bill already :) i feel so bad for tom the summary's great and made me curious, i think this'll be a great story :D
Author's Response: Yay, thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it :)
Date: 06/04/11 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 3
He takes the sickness into himself D:
Author's Response: Yes :( it's all bad and stuff :(
Date: 06/04/11 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
(lol @ the destroying Twilight stuff in Forks)
Oh no -.- Obviously I knew from the summary that this would happen, but it's still sad.
Tom needs to run to him. Run to him, man!
Author's Response: I don't actually hate Twilight all that much, I just think it's got blown waaaaaay out of proportion...
Yep, the hook in the summary should have given some clue, but I suppose it's bad when it happens For Real. Well, as real as a fiction can be :p
Yes, run Tom, ruuuuuuuun!!!
Date: 06/04/11 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
i dont like gustav or Bushido. and i had a bad feeling about Bill doing that favor for Tom. i feel soooooooooooo bad for Bill.... :'-(
Author's Response: Yes poooooor little Bill :( It's such a shame. I feel bad for him too, even though I wrote it, which is a slightly strange feeling I must admit :p
Date: 06/04/11 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
Noooooooo! That is not okay with me. I knew it was going to happen but it is not okay!
Author's Response: I'm sorry!! It was part of the story, though, I couldn't just leave it :s If I promise to make it better, will you forgive me??
Date: 06/04/11 03:13 am Title: Chapter 2
I love this.
I can not WAIT for more..
It's veryyy interesting,
especially the 'help me.'
((:
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I will try not to make you wait much longer for more, and I will be explaining that section...fairly soon :p