Date: 06/06/17 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 11
I don't know how you feel about Ed Sheeran, but the song Happier on his new album is definitely the theme song of this story.
Author's Response: I just listened to the song, and I'm definitely going to agree with you there!
Date: 06/05/17 01:42 am Title: Chapter 11
What a ride. I enjoyed this and can see you have grown as a writer. You're fabulous, never stop writing! I do take issue with stories that make Tom kind of awful and Bushido some hero, but it wasn't extreme in this compared so some I read a long time ago. I worry that this Bill & Bushido couple may fizzle out when they tire of banging three times a day and want to get back to their personal goals, but whatever. Made me like Cards even more, since that one really kind of shows how there can be a downside to an explosive sexual chemistry - ignoring what's good for you. Though in this case, Tom really may not have been the best option. Sigh. Need some Toll bandaids.
Author's Response: I'm so happy you read this! Well, sort of...I'm a bit shy about my first few stories, I know they're pretty messy. But thank you, I'm so glad you can see how much better I got! Lol....There's still room for improvement, so maybe in five years we'll look back at The Cards Always Know and say "Wow, that was pretty lousy in comparison to what you're doing now!" But by then, the twins will be in their thirties!! Bill will have his entire FACE tattooed! Maybe what we need is a new twin boy pop band to start up.... (oh, I'm a traitor). Guess that would be a little repetitive, though, because I'd still want a twinkie pretty boy, a more masculine brother, and a Bushido type making sexual comments about the twink to anyone who'll listen. Anyway, thanks for reviewing this oldie, and yes I know, Bill gave up TOM (gasp!), which just seems so wrong. Maybe I need to rewrite this, with Tom FTW. As for making Tom the bad guy and Bushido the hero...well, I'm guilty of doing that with the Fog stories. Sorry :( See you in the next chapter of Cards, which was just posted. Looks like things are going better for Zane and Bill, I know you'll love that!!
Date: 09/02/14 08:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow I'm absolutely baffled why this story doesn't have more reviews! It's amazing! I loved the writing, the characterization - everything! And I'm so happy Bill choose Bushido - love this guy and I'm a big Billshido shipper ;D You wrote Anis so perfect ))
Great story!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! The digging stories were my first, I'd only be on this site a few months before deciding I needed more Billshido so I'd write it my darned self! I'm always thrilled to know when others have enjoyed my stories, so thanks for taking the time to write a review!!!
Date: 11/30/13 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 11
Just finished both stories and I am utterly shocked this has no more reviews than it does...there was a little bit of everything in these stories...I fn LOVE them!
Author's Response: I just realized I had a new review on this!! Thank you so much for letting me know you read my first one, and I'm soooo happy to hear that you enjoyed them. I've re-read them, a couple years after writing them, thought they were a bit rough but um...I kind of like them, too :)
Date: 02/13/12 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
sooo....im right now reading the vampire story....umm is it being too forward if i ask a contact to u? i have a strong feeling we could have a lot of things to discuss and talk over, f.e. talking about how cupids chockehold is the BEST! or how vamp Bill and Bushido are so.fucking.sexy. And last but not least, id like to help u with ur style of writing, to help u improve some sections cus your stories r so worth it.. :D haha not forward at alll....
Author's Response: Absolutely! I'd love to hear some critiques. I know my writing is spotty in some areas - I hand write at work, one or two sentences at a time, then throw it all on the computer, only fixing a few things as I post. No real re-writes, so my work is kind of lazy and sloppy. My excuse, how sad. Conact away, I'd love to chit-chat!
Date: 02/12/12 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
i spent all day thinking of this story, it sticks with me. still brewing the review, im not gone.
Author's Response: Lovely! That my story did that makes me so happy! And that you let me know, even better!
Date: 02/12/12 08:05 am Title: Chapter 11
God this was so cheasy and sooooo good! Bah! I read the 2 storys in 1 day like a mad person, couldnt help my self... I'm in love with your stories and ur writting and your Bushido and Billa and eevrithing... Help! :D cant wait for more of your work, will be one of the first ones to read them!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you loved the cheese! It was so fun to write! Thank you so much for letting me know how much you're liking my stories, and I've got bunches planned!
Date: 09/28/11 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 11
Thanks! Bill finally chose Bushido!!! More Billshidos please!
Author's Response: I am a sucker for Billshido. Writing a whole new story and maybe, just maybe, it will have some Billshido love in it! Thanks for writing :)
Date: 06/15/11 12:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, that was emotionally draining and mentally exhausting to read. Yet I couldn’t stop reading. I was captivated. Which is extremely hard for an illiterate, closed-minded conservative, like myself. The way you developed the series, through each main character, tells me you are a tremendously talented writer. I'm neither a scholar or anyone important enough to give a critic. However, I will say this was such a beautifully, romantic story. I loved it! Especially the happy ending (I‘m such a sap when it comes to that). That tells me more about the author. You have awesome skills, yes, but your heart and soul is just,… oh so exquisite! Oh, and I just loved how they got tickets to Wicked. Congratulations on creating, finishing, imagining (God what an imagination) and making it enjoyable and awesome.
My ratings: 5 out of 5
:p :p :p :p :p
- G
Date: 06/09/11 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 10
oh god they're so in love :D
Date: 06/08/11 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 9
OMG Tom is such a dick in this fic - I want to slap him over and over again. Christ...I love the way you've written this though, what with Anis being the sweet, loving one. Makes a change from the usual.
Author's Response: I lmao at the image of you slapping Tom about a hundred times in a row. He's such a spoiled brat in this story! And thank you for the praise, it is much appreciated and I'm glad you like my writing. Oh, I like a nice Bushido, too. Kind of felt the need to ease the shell-shock of the Bushido in Raiju's King of Kingz. Damn, that story nearly killed me to read!
Date: 06/07/11 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 8
Whoa... Drama
Author's Response: Drama is what it's all about! (don't believe them when they tell you it's the hokey pokey. They lie.)
Date: 06/07/11 08:34 am Title: Chapter 8
Hygiene for god's sake U have sex, and put ur cock back in ur pants: no washing, no hand cleaning neither ;;aww gross
Now Tomi is getting on my nerves he's so childish
Author's Response: Yeah, it was a bit gross, but I didn't want to put in tiny details like "Bushido washed his dick off in the sink, using plenty of soap. Then he washed his hands." I'm a major germaphobe, so I know the image of that dirty dick is not a good one. But the show must go on, dirty dick or not. And speaking of Tom..... ;)
Date: 06/04/11 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 7
well i love this.... guess i'll have to wait
Author's Response: Not for long! Here's 8, and I'll get 9 up tomorrow, if I don't torture this computer to death beforehand!
Date: 06/04/11 09:02 am Title: Chapter 6
BILLSHIDOOOOO! :D
Amazing, update soon please! ^.^
Author's Response: I know, I love Billshido! Ehem..... however, I'm still not certain who he'll end up with. Here's a new chapter with Billshido goodies.
Date: 06/04/11 02:06 am Title: Chapter 5
i really love this story
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You just made staying up til 12:30 so worth it (I'll put that into context - it's not a Friday night for me - I worked 10 hours today, and 10 tomorrow and 14 on Sunday). Thank you for letting me know, it makes it worth every minute cut into my sleep !
Date: 06/03/11 07:34 am Title: Chapter 5
go bushido!!your really close
wow your update are super fast XD
Date: 06/02/11 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
hey i didn`t know the sequel was up!it`s great
im so happy bushodo came back,love this story :D
Author's Response: Thank you! Just started posting, will hopefully have it all up by next week or so :) Yay, Bushido!
Date: 06/02/11 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 4
no more twincest it is morally wrong and make Bill look like a slut and a easy lay
Author's Response: Um.... interesting "review." I was a bit baffled by it. Not quite sure how Bill looks like a slut in this story. In love with two people, maybe... And what is with the "twincest is morally wrong" comment? I looked through some of your other hundreds of reviews, not one that I read shows you getting upset at any twincest. This is make-believe. Sorry if you don't like it, but the warnings at the BEGINNING of the stories are there for a reason. I skip ones that say "Major character death" because I hate seeing Bushido killed off. If you don't like the twincest themed stories, they are easy to avoid. And you can certainly skip the rest of this story. I understand completely.
Date: 06/01/11 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
What?! There was a whole second part to my last review where I LOL'd over the cowboy bit and squealed over the return of Bushidoooo! No matter. I adore the way you write, and I shall patiently wait for the next update! :D
Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know what you think, it really is much appreciated. Glad you like it!