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Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 05:25 pm Title: 5. Drunk and Moneyless

This was an awesome chapter :D It gave a nice look into Tom's life :D

Author's Response:

Thank youu, yeah :D Get to know Tom a little. :)

Reviewer: GEMAHM Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/11 05:22 pm Title: 5. Drunk and Moneyless

"Party"

Author's Response:

Yes! :D

Reviewer: pinkyth Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/11 02:54 pm Title: 4. Goodbye, day off

cool update :3 I love this story <3



Author's Response:

Thank you! :D

Reviewer: GEMAHM Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/11 10:53 pm Title: 4. Goodbye, day off

Dwayne seems fun, I loved the chapter but I have a question: Tom will sell the bracelet?
My English is not very good :/

Author's Response:

Oh you'll see :) Your English is fine :)

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/11 06:09 pm Title: 4. Goodbye, day off

Lol, I like Dwayne, too. Though I'm picturing him as Dwayne Johnson.

Rawr! Tom better give that back to Bill!

drink from beer bong > from *the beer bong

Author's Response:

Hahaha Dwayne Johnson is so cool, but you can picture Dwayne the character however you like. :) Though Johnson is so well-built.

rn

Oh thank you for the correction :D didn't see that one.

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/11 05:11 pm Title: 4. Goodbye, day off

Ooooh Tomi has Bill`s braclet :O! Post soon :D

Author's Response:

New chapter posted! :D

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/11 03:37 pm Title: 4. Goodbye, day off

Great chapter! Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Thank you :D

Reviewer: pinkyth Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/11 11:44 am Title: 3. Impressions

WOOW!!!!! This is soooo coool *0* I love it *flies* I want more :'((



Author's Response:

Thanks! :D Next chapter will be up really soon!

Reviewer: AndeinerSeitenureineWeile Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/11 01:25 am Title: 3. Impressions

I just started reading this story and I can't wait to see where it's going!

Author's Response:

Thank you! :D

Reviewer: GEMAHM Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/11 10:47 pm Title: 3. Impressions

i love it ;)

Author's Response:

yay, thanks :D

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/11 01:06 am Title: 3. Impressions

Awww how cute! And God I love that you refereed to Tom as Eminem. I swear when some of the first photos for Humanoid were released he was a mini-Eminem. I called him that for the longest time xD

Author's Response:

Haha I know! He kinda looks like Eminem to me, lol so cute.

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/11 06:02 pm Title: 3. Impressions

Excellent! :)

Author's Response:

:D!

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/11 05:33 pm Title: 3. Impressions

Love it!

Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: twincestkindom Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/11 01:28 pm Title: 2. Let’s Party

I think this is one of the best stories that i have read!! :D amazing!! Please continue!!! :)

Author's Response:

Oh my, thank youu! And of course I will! (:

Reviewer: tomsteddybillscandy Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 11:56 am Title: 2. Let’s Party

LOL! that was interesting. andy was such a mess! i could picture him limping his walk a little and think of it as "swagg" HAHAHAH! he's such a cutie tho. :"> i really hope you're planning on making the development phase between tom and bill a little more than just a few hours of getting to know each other. ;) i mean, i like "the chase". oh i really do. XD 



Author's Response:

Oh trust me, it'll be more than a few hours, haha.

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 01:41 am Title: 2. Let’s Party

Lol, I thought they had left the party -- like, for the rest of the night -- when they went to get cocaine. They're going back?

And GEEZ! Andi was being so stupid I wanted to hit him upside the head myself. Even if it was fake coke, would they tell you?? DX Lol, even I vaguely know the various amounts of a drug you can buy. I think I read it in a book or something.

What if they get hit or something? > *got

@ smile: Heh, guess there was a bit of an instant connection :)

Author's Response:

Yeah, they're going back, the night's not over yet ;) I know right, oh Andi! Oh thank you for the correction! I'll fix it right away! :D

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 12:19 am Title: 2. Let’s Party

Eek post more soon! I wanna know what's going to happen at the party!

Author's Response:

I will! :D 

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 12:07 am Title: 1. Just another Day

I'm absolutely in love with the idea of the story. I'm excited and can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

Sira! Aw thank you :D

Reviewer: Cookie_25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/11 11:56 pm Title: 2. Let’s Party

I would love to find out really soon what will happen!!!

Author's Response:

Oh, you will know pretty soon! 

Reviewer: pandasarelovex Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/11 11:25 pm Title: 2. Let’s Party

Ahhh -covers eyes- Georg is pretty friendly for a drug dealer but why do I feel like something bad is going happen at the party? xD

Author's Response:

Lolol. Yeah Georg might look nice, but who knows, eh? xD

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