Date: 08/31/11 03:14 pm Title: 9. What a Mistake
Oh my! I only just discovered this story but it is so CUTE. I really hope Tom gets over the kiss and I just wanted to cuddle Bill when he was crying.
But then you had to go and remind me about the twins birthday in the end notes D: I'm trying to pretend that they're not turning 22, cause I'm silly xD
I hope the next chapter comes soooon ~ :D
Author's Response:
Thank you, I hope you keep reading till the end!! I know, poor Bill D: Haha, they're big boys xD
Date: 08/31/11 02:59 pm Title: 9. What a Mistake
:) loved this
hm.. I wonder whats gonna happen next?
more angst?
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you :D Maybe, maybe not xD Enough angst xD
Date: 08/30/11 04:06 pm Title: 7. “My father, General Jörg Kaulitz”
What!? He is hiding something!? Ahaaa, that would be even more interesting.
Author's Response:
Yess, Papa Kaulitz is a misterious man xDD
Date: 08/30/11 03:21 pm Title: 3. Impressions
Heey, don´t tell me that Bill´s I´m-so-busy dad didn´t teach Bill something to kick someones ass. Anyway, Tom was real gentleman. :)
Author's Response:
Haha oh, Tom yes Tom is such a gentleman :D
Date: 08/30/11 03:06 pm Title: 2. Let’s Party
Is Andy an idiot? Probably yes. It is bad idea buy a cocaine and even worse to invite bad guys with drugs to the party. xD
Author's Response:
That's Andy! lol
Date: 08/24/11 03:34 pm Title: 8. Wrong question, Wrong answer
Aww I love this story. Can you please update? It looks like you haven't updated it in a few days. I hope you do! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I've been busy, I promise I'll update more often. :D
Date: 08/20/11 03:41 pm Title: 8. Wrong question, Wrong answer
Poor Bill
Author's Response:
D:
Date: 08/20/11 07:04 am Title: 8. Wrong question, Wrong answer
I freaking LOVE THIS STORY!
NEW FAV! :))
Author's Response:
YAY. THANK YOUUU! :D *happy dance*
Date: 08/19/11 06:38 pm Title: 8. Wrong question, Wrong answer
I really like this ... its hard (for me at least :P lol) to figure out what's going to happen next sometimes.
Until you update next, I'm going to live with the fantasy that Tom and Bill somehow end up making out for something :D heheehe!
Cannot wait for more! xD
Author's Response:
Hahah aw.
Date: 08/19/11 04:39 pm Title: 8. Wrong question, Wrong answer
Tom you're an idiot, poor billy
I think Tom is blind, deaf and everything else ......... poor billy waaaaaaaaaaa became depressed about it?
P.S: : thanks for update, I was despairing a little, that he did not see chapi. :3
My english not is very good. e_e
Author's Response:
Your English is good! :D Hahaha Tom.
Date: 08/19/11 03:25 pm Title: 8. Wrong question, Wrong answer
Aye Tom you idiot ;-;
Author's Response:
I know, lol. Everyones abusing Tom now xD
Date: 08/19/11 02:59 pm Title: 8. Wrong question, Wrong answer
aw, tomi's too defensive, it hurts feelings. umm, i think that maybe tom will see Bill's father? does he know that he's the general, yet? i dont think so...
Author's Response:
Tom knows Bill's dad is a General. He met him on chap 7 :D If you mean that if Tom knows he'd hurt Bill's dad, nope.
Date: 08/19/11 01:11 pm Title: 8. Wrong question, Wrong answer
Poor Bill. I can imagine how he must feel. Tom was just a bit of an ass there at the end...but since it wasn't done intentionally, he's forgiven lol.
Author's Response:
Lol. Yep :D
Date: 08/19/11 01:09 pm Title: 8. Wrong question, Wrong answer
Lmfao, Tom you idiot. You don't say "It's not me, right?"
This was really good :3 I didn't see any blatant mistakes, but there were two minor ones.
In these: 'but the soft pasta on Bill’s mouth' and 'on the same sentence', 'on' needs to be changed to 'in'.
Hehe, thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
I know, oh Tom! You're welcome. Thank you so much for the corrections :D
Date: 08/16/11 09:37 pm Title: 7. “My father, General Jörg Kaulitz”
REEEEALLY anxious for more xD
Author's Response:
Yay! You'll have more soon! :D
Date: 08/16/11 02:39 pm Title: 7. “My father, General Jörg Kaulitz”
Amazing! I love this story, it's cute yet not cheesy at all. You're an amazing author, keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Aw thank you! :)
Date: 08/06/11 06:36 am Title: 5. Drunk and Moneyless
yayyy, someone not so fake :)
Author's Response:
yup :)
Date: 08/06/11 03:11 am Title: 7. “My father, General Jörg Kaulitz”
Ofc I didnt forget this story!! :D
Awesome update! LOL poor Tom!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :) Yeah, poor Tom xD
Date: 08/06/11 02:54 am Title: 3. Impressions
xD this is quite enjoyable
Author's Response:
Haha :D
Date: 08/05/11 11:30 pm Title: 2. Let’s Party
oh, jeez. so you live in mexico? it makes sense, somehow the vibe I'm getting from this 'upper-class' and party scene seems a bit latin. not in a bad way, of course :). my dad watches a lot of telenovellas so it's reminding me a bit of that, the drug lords and the wealthy...exciting! I'm a fan of this so far, and your english is really good considering you live in a Spanish speaking country, even compared to a lot of the American's around this site it's better...xD
Author's Response:
Yes I do! Really? You think so? Haha never thought my writting could transmit where I am from, haha. That's awesome, some telenovellas are fun, lol. Thank you! I improve my English everyday while reading and writing :D Hope you keep reading the next chapters that will be up soon! :D