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Reviewer: Hobby101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/12 09:12 am Title: 16. Next Target

How come do you know the man?
How come you know the man?
or
How do you know the man?

Author's Response:

Thank you! :D

Reviewer: MiseryRebel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/15/12 08:56 pm Title: 16. Next Target

I had a feeling that it was going to be Bill's father xD
Hmm... what will Tom do? O.O



Author's Response:

What will he do? Indeed. O.O

Reviewer: LifeLoveMusic Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/12 05:40 pm Title: 16. Next Target

Wow! I've been waiting for this for a while! Nice suspense! Doesn't tony know that Tom dIdnt kill the guy at the resturant yet? I'm kind of confused at that point.

Author's Response: Nope, Tony doesn't know about it. If he did... Well, I guess he wouldn't had given Tom another task haha. You'll find it out later on :D

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/12 04:42 pm Title: 16. Next Target

I can't wait for the next chapter, I want to know if Tom finds a solution for this

Author's Response:

He will, he's a smart guy xD

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/12 09:27 am Title: 16. Next Target

wow poor tom

Author's Response:

;_;

Reviewer: nathalicious Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/12 07:30 am Title: 16. Next Target

OHHHHHHHH *anxious*

Author's Response:

*excited*

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/12 02:48 am Title: 16. Next Target

OMG-im gonna die waiting..... X.X

Author's Response:

Ahhh, sorry for taking too loong. D:

Reviewer: Mechas2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/12 03:20 am Title: 15. Cooking Skills

his next target is bills dad of course

Author's Response:

xD You're right.

Reviewer: MiseryRebel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/04/12 06:45 pm Title: 15. Cooking Skills

 Wow... lots went down in this chapter O.O

 I have officially decided that I dislike Andreas very much... I hate snobby brats who whine and bitch about everything -___- And Jorg... well he obviously loves his son but he's kinda shitty at parenting him. Sadly.

 Tom and Bill's love moment; HAWT ;)
 Good update :D



Author's Response:

I know right? Oh Andreas. Yeah, Bill's dad needs a new method xD

rn

Yay thanks :D New chap is up!

Reviewer: Rainii93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/12 05:46 pm Title: 15. Cooking Skills

Well shit o.o that was a lot for one chapter xD But it was well worth the wait! Tom and Bill are soooo sweet together x) Stupid Andreas for ruining the sweet mood :( One question though, when he said he loved bill was that in the romantic sense or in the platonic sense?

Author's Response:

aw thank you! Romantic sense, apparently Andreas was in love with Bill ;)

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/12 04:36 pm Title: 15. Cooking Skills

I can't wait for the next chapter :) Love this story

Author's Response:

Thank you!:D New chap is up!

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/21/11 01:13 am Title: 14. Flowers, Pillows and Kisses

thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

Thank you for always keep up with this story!:D

Reviewer: skittlesgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/11 12:58 am Title: 14. Flowers, Pillows and Kisses

Yay! For a filler chapter it's really interisting. Hope to see the birth of another chapter soon! Let's only hope you're a slut and give birth to lots of little chapters!! Lol, you're mind is the baby daddy too!!
Lots of love,
Skittlesgirl

Author's Response:

lolol, I love your comment! I'm gonna try to make a lot of babies! :D 

Reviewer: BeiBillZuSein Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/11 02:16 pm Title: 14. Flowers, Pillows and Kisses

OH FUCK NO I CAN SEE WHERE THIS IS GOING! NOOOOOOOOOOO. T-T Please update soon!

Author's Response:

I knoooow.. updated! :D

Reviewer: LifeLoveMusic Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/11 07:41 am Title: 14. Flowers, Pillows and Kisses

Doesn't Tony know that Tom didn't finish his last job?

Author's Response: Seems like he doesn't. O.o

Reviewer: Distraction Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/11 08:42 pm Title: 14. Flowers, Pillows and Kisses

Ieks! I hope Tom's next job is not who I think it is ;-; Just amazing! I love Dwayne, haha :D Can't wait for the smut! (and to read more of this beautiful and romantic storyline)
Keep up the good writing author :D xxo.

Author's Response:

Aww thank you soo much for your words. You're so sweet, and yeah who doesnt like to read some smut? :D

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/11 06:41 pm Title: 14. Flowers, Pillows and Kisses

I agree with MiseryRebel.

“Nah, I’m just hungry of burgers" > for* burgers

"Woo hoo, here I go burgers!” > here I come,* burgers!

Thanks for the update :) Good chappie!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the corrections Daissa! :D Hope you enjoy next chapter :D

Reviewer: MiseryRebel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/25/11 04:02 pm Title: 14. Flowers, Pillows and Kisses

 I have a gut feeling that guy Tom has to kill is Bill's dad O.O



Author's Response:

 You might be right O.O

Reviewer: BeiBillZuSein Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/15/11 03:53 pm Title: 13. Ztai

This is totally one of my favorite fics ever. OMGGG it's just perfect, and I really love this chapter, it's aawesome..

“I wan to do it,” Bill released a small laugh and his hands grazed Tom’s cheeks.

“Oh Bill, let’s take you to bed,” Tom amusedly murmured on the younger’s ear. He found it rather cute that drunken Bill was looking for affection like that.

“Mmm…” Bill hummed, and with that he met his mouth with Tom’s, almost hungrily. His fingers twisting in Tom’s dreads, encouraging Tom to give into the kiss even more. “Fuck me,” Bill blurted out and Tom’s eyes flew open.

“Bill, you’re drunk,” he remarked.

“Don’t care.”

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I died. *-*
Anyway, please update soon! :D

Author's Response:

Haha, aww thank you so much! :D Yes, hopefully I'll update tomorrow! :D

Reviewer: Distraction Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/11 08:32 am Title: 13. Ztai

This was beautiful. Sorry for not reviewing earlier, I have tears in my eyes right now. You write beautifully; I absolutely can't wait until next chapter!
Loves, Lucy.

Author's Response:

Oh, thank you so much for your words. I'm so glad you like the story :D

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