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Reviewer: mikki15xxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/11 02:30 am Title: Sweating Balls

Why, thank you :3

Author's Response: :D !!!

Reviewer: BillaKatt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/11 02:26 am Title: Love in This Hub

You HAVE to pass 40!!! There is no fuckin way that you can end this satisfactorily in 40 chapters.

Author's Response: Haha I'll let you all know what I decide. But I swear when this story ends, I will absolutely write one-shots from the Work Out world, of this Tom and Bill. And they will probably be quite smutty, as well :D Thank you!!!

Reviewer: AbnormalKidd Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/11 02:25 am Title: Sweating Balls

Welcome to the Canadian Arctic, Honey. I once ate a scorpion. It was in a lollipop. Tasted odd. Never seen a live one though. They seem scary. Awsssh, I'm glad you understand my love of all things smutty ^^ Awsh, I'm glad my review made you feel good ^^ Geez, that is kind of amazing xD but gosh, I can see why it'd be awkward. .... Geez, you HAD to ask that question? Really? Fine. Okay, lemme count.... Uhm, 11. I think. Or, that's how many I remember from the top of my head. Really, why did you have to ask THAT question? xD And awesome, I say we Honeymoon in LA, and stalk us some Kaulitz twins. I am glad you find this review full of win. That makes me happy :) AND YES HE FELL ASLEEP. Ha, it was awesome, he was just like "Yeah, titanic sucked. I fell asleep during it. And I watched it at the Cinema. It was horrid." AND OU ARE VERY WELCOME :D

Author's Response: Blechhhh don't eaaaat them!!! I have seen far too many live ones to count. It is a bit scary..but I do not live in fear of them, for that would be a life not worth living. And of course I understand the love of smut :D Yeesss I had to ask that question!! 11 is a perfectly acceptable number of people to have kissed! I have kissed...9? or 10..not sure. But still! We're pretty equal on that front ;) Honeymoon plans sound awesome, darling. And I still can't believe he feel asleep!! I mean..Kate Winslet was all naked and shtuff in that one scene, that and the young Leo, are reasons to stay awake haha. But that's amazing at the same time though lol xD

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/11 01:53 am Title: Love in This Hub

Pure love for every chapter.

i would love to see what happens i the future with this story.

Author's Response: Thank you for loving it. And I hope you continue to love it, no many chapter are left :D

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/11 01:46 am Title: Love in This Hub

I love how sweet and fluffy this was, but how random it still got lmao. You're like the queen of randomness, I swear.

And h hm I almost think 40 will be enough. But I say just see what happens. ;)

Author's Response: Haha I fully accept and appreciate the title of 'queen of randomness' :D I'm glad you loved the fluff, too!! I will definitely just go with what feels right. Thanks so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me!!

Reviewer: AbnormalKidd Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/11 12:58 am Title: Love in This Hub

Geez, with how much thanks your giving us you'd think you're about to roast a turkey and watch some football ^^ ANYPOODLE, amazing as always, I loved the part where Bill decides to "placate" Tom and pretend he actually kicks hard when OBVIOUSLY they're just bunny kicks.

Author's Response: Umm..how do you know that I'm not about to roast a turkey and watch football? I very well could be about to do those very things! I'm just overly thankful. I always have been. *sighs* I say thank you to pretty much everyone I encounter. I just love to do it. Can you handle that? Because I mean..if you're gonna be married to me you're gonna have to get used to my gratefulness o_O Haha I'm glad you liked that part and thank you for saying this was amazing. And of course, you are amazing..as always xD

Reviewer: emo-4-life Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/11 12:28 am Title: Love in This Hub

i think you should go abit longer :3 this story is just too amazing ^^ but i definatly will be reader of any other storys you post (which hopefully you will!) :D and i love love love love loved this chapter :3

Author's Response: There is still lots and lots of good stuff before this story ends, I promise ;) Thank you so much for your sweet words. And I will definitely be posting other things!!! Thanks for loving on this chapter, it makes me really happy :D

Reviewer: babylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/11 12:26 am Title: Love in This Hub

keep going or you could do a sequel an bill could become pregnant

Author's Response: Hahah I think I would be terrible at writing mpreg. But even after the story is done I will still post one-shots with this Bill and Tom, for sure!! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing ;D

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 11:39 pm Title: Love in This Hub

*chuckles* Sleepy Sleeps...I thought I was the only person who said that anymore.

Hmm. I would hate for this Labor of Love you have going here to turn into just plain Labor. I think if you are feelin it, you should continue, but if you aren't then you should quite while you ar aheadand it is still wonderfully amazing. Many a fic has been ruined because the author dragged it on too long, and then rushed an end because they got bored. I hope that was helpful.

This was a great chapter, and I'm glad the birthday issue is over. But I thought everyone agreed that Tom was going to give that little bastard from the Gym chicken pox and give Bill a bouncy ball for his birthday?...or were you hoping we had forgotten about that? Because I didn't.

Bill total obliviousness to his own ways continues to amuse me just as much as it does Tom. Doesn't sound like him my butt.

I am really happy he is going to visit his parents, and I am sure Kiran will be pleased, and very surprised, too.

Can't wait to see the birthday! Maybe Tom will make Bill M&M pancakes, which are much better than regular old chocolate chip pancakes. At least I would imagine they are, cuz they are all colorful and chocolatey.

Oh, our ghost pretty much sticks to himself. I think hes kind of clumsy though. Stuff randomly falls in rooms that noone is in but whatever falls never breaks or breaks anything on its way down so I can live with it.

Author's Response: No no. I often use sleepy sleeps. So you are not alone! And truer words have not been said about dragging a story out and rushing to end it. That was extremely helpful and I will just end it when it feels right. :D And I have not forgotten about the bouncy ball!! Though I'm not sure how the chicken pox can be spread to the kid...Tom may not live up to that promise haha. I have never had M&M pancakes but they sound like damn near the best kind of pancakes possible. And soo pretty, too!! I'm glad that this continues to amuse you and that you like the progression. And hahah poor clumsy ghost. I'm glad that he doesn't break any of your things in his clumsiness haha. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts with me :D

Reviewer: AngelKisses Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 11:29 pm Title: Trading Secrets

awwww this chapter had me almost in tears, I'm too tired to cry.

I'm glad they talked about things, that's important in a relationship and they seem to off to a good start.

umm...I can't really think of a question so you can just tell me a random fact.

I have a secret! I'm kind of in like with my best guy friend and it's killing me...it feels good to get it out.

awesome chapter

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and enjoying this chapter :D And I'm glad they finally talked about things, too. Because now they can just get even closer ;) Hmm random fact...well I'll tell you that I was secretly in like with my best guy friend for two years!! yeesh. So I know exacccctly how you feel, girl. Thank you for sharing your secret with me :D

Reviewer: Bkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 11:23 pm Title: Love in This Hub

Please continue with more than 40 chapters. I look forward to reading this every night.

Author's Response: I promise that even after it ends, I will post one-shots or something from this story :D But I won't end it until it's time!! We still have a lot of good stuff to get to first :D Thank you for reading this and looking forward to it. That makes me happy! xD

Reviewer: Jster Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 10:00 pm Title: Love in This Hub

Naw I feel all warm and tasty I side which is good as it it frisking freezing on my side of the planet. These two the fluffy Luffles is so adorable, Tom being ticklish haha. I wanna grab his stomah just to hear him squeal like a little girl. About the length of the story, I will leave that in ur faithful hands as u are the author and creator of this story so where it leads only u know. I am only happy that u finish and do not abandon, as u know me not into slash but this is an exception. So I am just on happy terms at how often it is updated. *squeak* the cuteness of the two is just so thriving!

Author's Response: Haha I'm glad this chapter made you all warm and fuzzy :D Thank you for your advice!! I will end it when it feels right, for sure. And again, I'm so happy that you've made an exception for my story. And I will never abandon this and always update often until the end :D Thank you!!

Reviewer: luvcat Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 09:59 pm Title: Love in This Hub

I think the story should be ended when it feels right to do so, you don't have to follow any plan or intention. Not that I don't love reading more of this but sometimes trying to prolong sth might take away its attraction. But sequel is nice ;) Love

Author's Response: Totally agree with everything you said :D Thank you for sharing your advice with me. I will end it when it feels right and I will definitely not prolong it, and let it get lame haha. Thank you for reading, love xD

Reviewer: jacinta Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 09:48 pm Title: Love in This Hub

Man this chapter is awesome! it's great to know that Bill feels that Tom is there for him I think it's sweet the way you put them together ^-^
Also I honestly I don't care how many chapter you do, I would love to read them forever! But you just end this when it feels necessary to do so.
Your writing always amazes me so when this story is done start a new one because that's how amazing you are! X3

Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked the chapter and Bill and Tom together :D Thank you for saying that about the number of chapters. I definitely will just end it when it feels right. And I will most certainly start a new one when this is done :D Thank you so much for reading and leaving this sweet review!!

Reviewer: s_n_a_r_k Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 09:45 pm Title: Love in This Hub

You have to decide when is best to stop. Some stories start well, get to the point where they should end, but then get dragged out. Some stories have potential to keep going but the authors stop. If you want some advice, wait til the story get's to a point where things come to a good situation that can allow the readers to fill in the rest on their own without trying too hard. * i am abysmally depressed now, so i hope this review didn't come across bad, just trying to help.

Author's Response: This review didn't come across as bad at all, in fact it was so helpful. I'm so sorry you're not having a good day...but I so appreciate you reading and reviewing despite of that. I hope everything is okay. *hugs* And thank you for the very wise and thought out, advice. I agree with everything that you said :D

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 09:38 pm Title: Love in This Hub

Hmm, at this point ending at 40 chapters sounds pretty good. You don't want it to get all awkwardly long XD

And if at the end you truly feel you could do more with these characters, there's always the sequel possibility.

Author's Response: That is very true. Thank you so much for the advice! :D And I think instead of a sequel, I would probably just post occasional one-shots in the Work Out universe. Thank you for reading!! xD

Reviewer: bloodyhelena Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 09:12 pm Title: Love in This Hub

i think you should write unitl the point where it feels just right! don't care about the number :D loooove this fic. and may i just take the time to tell you i absolutely adore that you reply to all (or most) of your reviews, i'm terrible at it xD i'm like... k thanks! but that's just because i'm so awkward xD :) loove this fic

Author's Response: That is excellent advice. Thank you so much for sharing it with me. I think that's what I'm going to do, that way I don't have some sort of countdown..at least not yet. And I will always reply to my reviews because you all take the time to leave me such sweet things, and I definitely owe it to you to respond :D I seriously doubt you're terrible at it or awkward because you've left me nothing but lovely reviews xD Thank you so much for loving this story!!

Reviewer: ChunyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 09:05 pm Title: Love in This Hub

I wouldnt mind it to be at 40 chapters! Or longer! ^^ I liked this chapter, and that they really love each other

Author's Response: Aww thank you so very much :D I'm so glad you liked the chapter and their love!!

Reviewer: xxxkitty94katxxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 08:58 pm Title: Love in This Hub

40 chapters and more of random bill awesomeness!!?? OMG I CAN'T WAIT

Author's Response: Thank you soooo much!! XD

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/11 08:55 pm Title: Love in This Hub

Lovesplosion! I feel like getting a mug of cocoa and snuggling in some warm blankets now. You know it's love when the other person accepts all your bodily functions.

40ish chapters feels right, I guess. Can't have too much of a good thing, and if you pushed the story further than it could go, it would just fizzle out lamely. And the shit-at-planning method you're using now results in some epicly awesome stuff. I would just continue feeling it out and using your awesome story writing superpowers.

&hearts^&infin You make me smile too. Ich finde dich genial, hab dich liebe! Whoo, check my german out! I'm getting better at it.

Author's Response: I believe that you should indeed snuggle and drink hot cocoa. This is a splendid plan! And that really is true love, right there haha. I totally agree with everything that you said about not pushing it, but ending it when it feels right. *nods* I would never want this to fizzle out in a lame way, I would be far too ashamed. haha thank you for saying that my shit planning method has worked well thus far. Your German is very good! Though I totally had to google translate that shit because all I understood was "I" "you" and "love" haha. Thank you so much xD

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