Date: 07/08/11 10:20 pm Title: My Boyfriend
You know you are from the south when you are going to a peach festival...sorry. Had to be said. And no worries here, I'll think of you as I go to the farmer's market tomorrow. :) Maybe I'll buy some peaches. If I had my little way...I'd eat peaches everyday...millions of peaches...peaches for me...Ooohkay. Enough 90s rock for today...
Author's Response: Sometimes you've just gotta say what you've gotta say. And it's true, too haha. So damn southern. Aww I absolutely love farmer's markets! There is one that is set up every Saturday, just down the road from me. And you should definitely get some peaches! And you should sing that song as you purchase them. Thank you for the 90s throwback haha. And thank you for reading this story :D
Date: 07/08/11 08:56 pm Title: My Boyfriend
:) I love thiiiis!!! and i can't wait to read next chatper :D it's going to be awesome like this whole story :3
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much! I can't wait to hear what you think about the next chapter ;D And thanks for thinking this story is awesome, because well..I think you're pretty awesome xD
Date: 07/08/11 07:40 pm Title: My Boyfriend
Bill sounds like he looks hot. And dammit, I want Cinnamon Rolls now, thanks >.> But haha as always, this was adorable. Bill is just too funny xD I love how you write him ^^
Author's Response: You know he's gotta be looking hot for all the sexing. I will not apologize for making you want cinnamon rolls! Because they are far too delicious to not indulge in upon occasion. Thanks for loving this Bill and finding him funny :D And I think YOU are adorable. xD
Date: 07/08/11 07:36 pm Title: My Boyfriend
I loved it when Bill said HAUL ASS ! LMAO favorite quote. On another note I love PEACHES!!!! Also I am glad your actually taking the time to write a great sex scene and that you are taking your time to make this story right. I love it so much I am always happy to see a new chapter *claps like Bill* Lots of love sent your way
Author's Response: Haha I actually use 'haul ass' in real life, whenever I get the chance. Though I don't yell it like Bill does...but I'd like to. ;D I love peaches, toooooo!! *hugs on you for being a fellow peach lover* Thank you so much for saying such sweet things! I just don't want to rush something so big in the story and make it seem super unrealistic. And I am absolutely delighted that you love this story and that it makes you happy to see a new chapter!! That makes ME happy so thank you :D *loves*
Date: 07/08/11 07:20 pm Title: My Boyfriend
i'll be waiting:D
Author's Response: So glad that you will be!! xD
Date: 07/08/11 07:10 pm Title: My Boyfriend
xD BOYFRIENDS!!!!!! woot!! Finnally:) great chapter I absolutely can't wait till the next one
Author's Response: Hehe I know, it has been a long time coming!! Thank you sooo much and I can't wait to post the next one for you :D
Date: 07/08/11 07:02 pm Title: My Boyfriend
i loved the moment with nat inspecting bills ass then kiran walks in XD thts a classic moment :3
and its funny tht ur going to a peach festival because im going to a mango festival tomarrow :D
Author's Response: Hahah I'm so glad you loved that moment. Are you seriously going to a mango festival?? Haha what a coincidence! You'll have to let me know how that goes, girl. I love mangoes! Thank you for reading and reviewing!! :D
Date: 07/08/11 06:47 pm Title: My Boyfriend
So fucking cute I swear. A fucking peach festival?!?! I'm fucking jealous like shit. I love peaches. That's even my nickname: Georgia Peach. Girrllll, it's totally cool you're splitting it in half. Haha it happens. I think it may be better that way and keeps us wanting and looking. Ha. I split my last chapter of Unfamiliar Territory up for the same reason you split this up. Plus, I'ma try to post a suuuuuuper long chapter before Sunday because I'm going to be taken a two week break. I'm so sad. Ima be missing this story, too. I'm gonna cry!
Author's Response: Why, thank you!!! And yes haha, a peach festival! I'll be sure to eat lots of juicy peaches for you ;) <---You know that sounded duuuurty. Or maybe it just did in my perverted head lol. Aww Georgia Peach. My bro and his fam live in Georgia! Is that where you're from? I'm glad you approve of splitting in half..it just seemed quite necessary. I'm gonna read the new chap of your story, tonight!! Loooove...you're leaving for two weeks?? I'm gonna fucking miss you :( I hope you have fun though, whatever you're doing!! WIll you get to read tomorrow's chapter that I post, though? I hope soooo! xD
Date: 07/08/11 06:47 pm Title: My Boyfriend
This is....*___* perfect
Author's Response: Aww shucks...no way is it perfect, but thank you so much for saying so!! You've made me smile and thank you for that, too :D
Date: 07/08/11 06:31 pm Title: My Boyfriend
Fucking awesome! =D
Author's Response: Thank youuuuuuu so much!! XD
Date: 07/08/11 03:36 pm Title: Love in This Hub
Please don't stop yet! You should most definitely go past 40! I love this chapters and all the previous. I just started reading them 2 days ago and I am in love with the story line and everything! I love the fact that you are so comfortable with writing in such detail of a relationship, that is so powerful!!
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much for this sweet review! I am thrilled that you've been enjoying it so much and that you like the detail that that I go into ;) That is such a nice compliment! I'm not sure how many chapters it will be, but if there is still story left to be told, I won't stop before then..I promise :D So happy to have you reading!!
Date: 07/08/11 02:10 pm Title: Sweating Balls
haha it was in CANDY. how can someone say no to that, hmm? And I bet it isn't! The scariest animal-y thing we have here is polar bears... I live in fear of them. And yess, but you're also older than me anypoodle, we still have plenty of more years to kiss more people ;D I think it would be fun, stalking hot German boys... And ahaha, honestly, I didn't find the movie too great either. I can see why Craig (teacher) fell asleep.
Author's Response: Dude...if it has a scorpion in it..you say NO! Do polar bears just roam free, there?! And yes, we have plenty of time to rack up our kissing total haha. I believe that stalking hot German boys sounds wildly romantic and fun ;) And okay..I only enjoyed the movie when I saw it in the theater because I was 8 at the time and I was just amazed that I was seeing something so obviously inappropriate for an 8 year old to see haha. So maaaybe that's why I was excited about it, and did not fall asleep lulz.
Date: 07/08/11 02:09 pm Title: Love in This Hub
I absolutely adore this! I can't get enuff of it.
Author's Response: Aww I'm soo glad! Thank you so much for saying so :D
Date: 07/08/11 12:48 pm Title: Love in This Hub
Oh my gosh this story is really good! (almost as awesome as a platypus) please keep it up!!!
Author's Response: Haha thank you sooo much! I'm so happy you like it:D
Date: 07/08/11 09:14 am Title: Love in This Hub
So so adorable! I also love that little reality factor you put in. While writing romance we forget that hey, were human we fart and poop and do disgusting things which of course the others accept! We aint godly! XD I love you for mentioning that!
Great chapter! :D -much love and hugs-
Author's Response: I so appreciate that you love the reality in it. That's one thing about romance stories that is pretty much always overlooked. But it's a part of every healthy relationship and it can be pretty hilarious if you just accept it lol. Thank you so much for reading and sharing this sweet review with me :D Love to you, my dear :)
Date: 07/08/11 07:08 am Title: Love in This Hub
these two are too much for words. I can't wait until the next chapter!!
about the story, I think you should write as long as you feel like writing it. It will continue or be over when you want it to.
awesome chapter
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked this chapter and are excited for the next. And I will definitely write it as long as it feels right. I promise I won't drag out, or rush the ending. Thank you!! :D
Date: 07/08/11 06:38 am Title: Sweating Balls
I came to the rescue of the future of this story, but I see it wasn't needed... But I came to it anyway! So yeah hi, first time review on this story, cause... I'm usually speachless when I've read this story, so no matter the time, I read this and go to bed, laughing my ass off... can you even laugh your ass off? Oh well, I'll make it up to you!
OKay so... This idea with the awkward "I'm not doing it, you are Tom" kinda Bill is just.... orgasmic!(Is that even a word? 0.o)
And... tbh, I had no idea how a lizard looks like, let alone a flying one, so I looked flying lizards up(in pics, cause honestly, who would read shitloads of pages... well Bill probably would on second thought...), and what do I find? "Living la vida latex" x.x Nearly killed me... So instead I grit my bones and searched for text and... I learned something very interesting... Did you know the horny lizard(You know, those with horns, right?) can squird blood from it's eye up to 3 meters away? Pretty impressive...
And Bill telling Tom about his parents?Fuck I cried rivers at that one! Lost my sister with I was three, but it still hurts, ya know?
And AW at the fluffy yet awkward moment here! “You need to take a shit, don't you?” OH my god, SO sweet that Tom was like "I'll take everything you come with, rivers of come on me, farts, cuddles and kisses and I'll even take your shit" AWWWWWWW!
I DON'T WANT THIS STORY TO END!
I had a dream about awkward, sweet no virgin Bill and sexy Tom being all like "Oh I love you, marry me!" And Bill will be like "Oh Tom, you know it's not something to joke about!" And Tom is like "But I'm cereal!" and Bill will be like "I know, you have some on your chin" and then they get married and adopt children and such cause I'm a sucher for romance and awkwardness... And this has it all, fluff, awkwardness, more fluff, cum (x.x) and... my two favorite persons! Oh and I made you my third favorite person cause you're awesome!
I just realized what a long review I made... oh well, I popped the cherry and it had to be said and done!
*Holds up sign* MORE BILL AND TOM! MORE BILL AND TOM! *marches around in circles*
Author's Response: Hello!!! What an amazing review to wake up to :D I'm so happy that you've been reading and enjoying it! Orgasmic is most definitely a word haha and thank you for saying that xD You are a brave brave girl for looking up flying lizards and then reading about horny ones!! And hahaha I can't believe you stumbled across "Living la vida latex" in your search lol. That is impressive and terrifying about the blood squirting. I'm quite glad that Larry doesn't have that ability!! And I'm so sorry that part made you cry and for the loss of your sister. That must have been so hard and I completely understand it still hurting. I'm really glad you love the fluffy/awkwardness, because that is going to happen a lot more in this story!! Hahha that is an awesome dream. I wish I had dreams like that! And thank you so much for making me your third favorite person :D I feel so special hehe. I promise I won't leave you hanging with this Bill and Tom and that the rest of the story, no matter how long it is, will be most satisfactory :D And I will write one-shots or two-shots or whatever-shots from the Work Out universe, after it is over. And seriously, this review was amazing. You MORE than made up for this being your first review :D Thank you so so much for reading and leaving this hilarious and sweet review for me!!
Date: 07/08/11 05:55 am Title: Sweating Balls
Hmm, I think I can handle it. Honeymoon sex is gonna be awkward though O.o "Gee Kidd, that sure was a dandy romp in the sheets. Thanks, hon." Ahem. or or or what if we decided to adopt? "I want this child, thanks for agreeing, Kidd." ANYPOODLE. Yup.
Author's Response: Yup. That's pretty much how it's gonna go. Haha. XD
Date: 07/08/11 04:21 am Title: Love in This Hub
first of all, I want this fic to be as long as possible!! I just love it!! =)
and for this chapter, what can I say?? perfect mixture between cutey lovey moments and awkward Bill moments! =) =)
and next chapter: BILL'S BDAY!! =) =)
gonna love it
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much for saying that :D I'm so glad you loved the chapter and are excited for the next!! I'll definitely let you all know when I decide roughly how long the story will be!! xD thank you!!
Date: 07/08/11 02:35 am Title: Love in This Hub
Omgg:)) im so happy that bill finally told tom about his parents,,and it would be absolutley amazing if you went past 40 chapters! I am in love with this story!!
Author's Response: I'm happy that YOU are happy!! Thanks so much for this sweet review and for reading. I will end the story right when it should be ended..which I'm not positive about yet..lol. But! There are still so many good things to come before it is over :D Thank you!!