Date: 07/09/11 04:00 pm Title: My Boyfriend
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. that's what I thought :p
Author's Response: I happen to loooove what you thought and it made me smile, so thank you xD
Date: 07/09/11 01:52 pm Title: My Boyfriend
I LOOOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUU
Author's Response: *blushes* I love YOU!!!
Date: 07/09/11 10:32 am Title: My Boyfriend
Yes! the cute boyfriend phase!!! yes yes yes! So fucking cute! :D I absofuckinglutely loved this chapter!
Author's Response: I'm so fucking happy that you loved it =D Thank you so much!!! xD
Date: 07/09/11 08:37 am Title: My Boyfriend
Yaaay happy birthday Bill :D
I don't EVER want this story to end :'(
Author's Response: :D Happy happy day! Aww that makes my heart so happy to have you say that :) There are still many more good times to be had with these boys, so don't worry xD
Date: 07/09/11 05:52 am Title: Sweating Balls
x3!!!
Author's Response: Just realized that I didn't respond to this cute review :D I hope you're still enjoying the story, love!!
Date: 07/09/11 04:44 am Title: My Boyfriend
Happy birthay Bill!! =) =)
As always they're really cute in this chpater but I can't wait for next chapter!!
don't really know what to say about this chpater but I'll probably comment the next one better! xD
Author's Response: I will pass the message along to him hehe ;) Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the next one! :D :D
Date: 07/09/11 04:14 am Title: My Boyfriend
I cant say anything else to show you how much i am still adoring this.
Author's Response: You said it perfectly right there :D I adore reading your reviews, thank you so much.
Date: 07/09/11 04:12 am Title: My Boyfriend
This is....*___* perfect
Author's Response: D'aww thank you so much for saying that :D
Date: 07/09/11 03:40 am Title: My Boyfriend
I fucking loved it.. Have fun at the peach festival!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much! And I did have a lot of fun, so thank you for that as well! :D
Date: 07/09/11 03:34 am Title: My Boyfriend
I loved it so much I understand what you mean and I want you to make the sex scene special ^-^ But this was awesome XD I love how they are preparing ;) Can't wait for the next chapter! *hugs*
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you loved it :D Thank you sooo much and I hope you enjoy the next chapter xD *loves*
Date: 07/09/11 03:23 am Title: My Boyfriend
I swear ur character version of bill is Hil-ar-ious!!!! I mean me can picture Bill yelling Haul ass!!! *belly laughter while slaps knee* OMG haha *wipes eyes* Tom trying to make everything so perfect for Bill is so heart melting, they both deserve each other. Good decision may I say on splitting it two as well, draws out the feeling so it's not rushed. I know u will do very well, Happy birthday To Bill! *throw glitter confetti in face*
Author's Response: Hahaha thank you!! I'm so happy that he makes you laugh :D I hope you enjoy the next chapter if you haven't read it yet, and I will pass the Happy Birthday along to Bill! Thanks so much XD *gets excited about the glitter confetti*
Date: 07/09/11 03:12 am Title: Love in This Hub
Please please please please PLEASE go past 40 chapters!!! This fanfic is way too good to stop now. I fucking loved this chapter but chap. 33 made me cry.
Author's Response: Aww thank you SO much! I very well might go past 40 chapters :D We shall see, but thank you for loving this story!! I'm sorry that 33 made you cry, but I'm glad you kept on reading. Thank you so much for your sweet words :D
Date: 07/09/11 03:01 am Title: Sweating Balls
... B-but a hot boy gave it to meeeee. Haha not HERE but further north it's pretty common to have polar bears in town.. Maybe one or two mother polar bears come to town with their cubs each winter... It's the wolves that come that are really dangerous :/ Haha maybe I'll try to set a world record "Most kisses ever received by an undeterminable amount of people". Stalking is one of the best bonding experiences, duh. Hahahahahahahahahahaha THAT might be the reason. I think my teacher was a robot though, so, yeah.
Author's Response: I guess it's fine if a hot boy gave it to you. Sort of fine. Nope nope nope no way would I be dealing with polar bears and wolves and shit just wandering around like they own the place. You are a brave one for handling that. And I think that world record is a GREAT idea!! And obvs we'll become much closer in our stalking. Figuratively and literally. Because we might have to climb up some trees and scrunch up together, and things can get preeettty closey close in those situations. And yeah, I'm pretty sure that was the reason lolol. I would like to meet a robot one day, I think. Yeah.
Date: 07/09/11 01:54 am Title: Sweating Balls
Any time :D I'm looking forward to seeing what happens when he does go back. :D
Author's Response: I'm really glad that you are :D I hope that it'll be to your liking!!
Date: 07/09/11 01:52 am Title: My Boyfriend
*glomps, snuggles* This was an amazing chapter! You kept things just slightly vague in certain spots, so we got to use our own imaginatios. Its kind of nice.
That was a pretty 'spensive present from Nat. Leather Jackets are pretty pricey. Just shows how much she loveshim I guess.
I really loved the morning hair thing. It was priceless. Can't blame Tom for not wanting it around the food.
Wonderful work. I can't wait to see the rest of the birthday. I am glad that the end of this fic wont be the end of the universe. I'm sure there are all sortsd of shenanigans they can get up to. Oh! Bill at school might be a fun thing to see! How inappropriate is that boy in a school gym/locker room?
CDan't wait for tomorrow! *huggles* Have fun at your peach festivsl thing!
Author's Response: Yaaaay I love the power of the imagination! Glad you got to use it a lil bit in this chapter and that you enjoyed it :D And yes, pricey and nicey present from Nat. Maaaaybe that's why he keeps her around? haha jk. I'm happy you loved the hair thing, I kept laughing while I pictured it..because of course I pictured it way more exaggerated that necessary. Thank you SO much! I can't wait to read what you thought about the next chapter :D And duuuude, Bill at school would be way fun to write, especially in the locker room haha! I feel like because this story is so random, there are many possibilities in the future for writing little snippets into their lives. Thanks so much, love xD *hugs and cuddles*
Date: 07/09/11 01:10 am Title: My Boyfriend
LoL again another funny cute chapter =) I love how Bill brings out Toms inner-girl XD
Author's Response: Hehe thank you sooo much! I'm very glad that you enjoyed it XD
Date: 07/09/11 01:09 am Title: My Boyfriend
Awwww... I can imagine a perfectly serene, sleeping Bill... then wapow! Karate chop to the face! Bony knee in the groin! And his serene sleeping expression wouldn't change. Whoever told him he does little bunny kicks were lying; Bill kicks like a kangaroo.
It's just so natural and it has that subtle, wind-blown look... That cracked me up so hard. Sometimes...actually, a lot of times, I think up comparisons of Bill's lion's mane hair. Yucca plant, toilet brush, porcupine, sea anemone, cheerleader pom-pom, Sonic the Hedgehog, those static electric balls you touch and it makes your hair stand on end...
Bill got kicked out of H&M, didn't he. XD Enjoy your peaches! That sounds like a yummy festival. Our town has an apple fest. There was poor turnout for it, so in recent years they revamped everything and made it a pork products and apple fest. All the bacon and apples you could ever want, all in one place.
Author's Response: I'm not entirely sure if anyone ever told him that or he if just convinced himself of that haha. Lol I'm glad that part made you laugh. And may I just say, that I appreciate the Yucca plant comparison as my parents' yard is totally lined with Yucca plants and it really is quite similar to his lion mane style hahaa. But of course...I like the sea anemone one as well, because I enjoy saying the word "anemone". Haha he actually did NOT get kicked out this time. Probs because Kiran was there to save his ass. And thank you!!! The peaches were very delicious and I had amaaazing peach cobbler. And I'm actually eating apple sauce right now so it is quite a coincidence that you have brought up an apple fest...*shifty eyes* And dude, bacon can make anything better, I think. Is the turn out better now that they have added the pork products? I bet it is. I mean..it's bacon and apples, what more could one want? Haha. Thanks for reading and making me laugh and also..for bringing the word "anemone" to my attention..because I had not said it in a very long time, and I do enjoy it. :D
Date: 07/08/11 11:47 pm Title: My Boyfriend
-hugs- love you're sucha dork I swear lmao! I love this, those two are just to cute! Although, I will admit it would have been nice to see what happened when Bill went to see his parents. But still good nonetheless.
Author's Response: Haha I knowwww I am haha. And I just decided to not write what happened when he went to see his parents, because I didn't want to be bringing the story down again, so soon. But, this isn't going to be his last visit to them during the story, so I will be including more about that in a future chapter ;D I'm so pleased that you still love this!! Thank you for reading and being honest with me about what you want from this story, because that makes me a better writer :)
Date: 07/08/11 10:43 pm Title: My Boyfriend
I like it that you're splitting the night, hehe.
It lets us concentrate on this interaction.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you approve of the decision to split it ;) I can give you guys way more detail this way, which you will hopefully appreciate. hehe xD
Date: 07/08/11 10:43 pm Title: My Boyfriend
haul ass is now my favorite expression. and i too enjoy cinnamon rolls. now let the sexy times commence!
Author's Response: Oh please use it whenever you can!! I know that I definitely do, though not in the dramatic fashion that Bill uses it haha. And I'm very pleased to hear that you enjoy cinnamon rolls, as well! You must be good people ;) And hell yeah, let's let the good times roll! xD
